Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and difficult to understand due to grammar and vocabulary mistakes. Try to give a clear and direct answer with simple sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, start with a clear statement about liking singing, then explain why, using simple and correct English.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my feelings. Although my vocal cords are not very strong, I enjoy trying to sing songs quietly. Singing makes me feel happy and calm.

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and structure. Try to answer directly and add supporting details with linking words. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to explain how you learnt singing, for example, by watching videos on YouTube since childhood.

Exemplo: Yes, I have learnt how to sing since my childhood. I often watch music videos on YouTube, which help me understand how to sing better. This way, I practice singing regularly and improve my skills.

Sugestão: Your answer has some good ideas but contains unclear words and grammar mistakes. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, explain who you want to sing for and why, and how it makes you feel.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my close friends because they support me and appreciate my efforts. Singing for them makes me feel special and motivated. Moreover, sharing music with loved ones creates a joyful and peaceful atmosphere.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but contains grammar and vocabulary errors. Try to use correct words and sentence structures. Use linking words to connect your ideas clearly. For example, explain how singing helps express emotions and relieve stress, and give a personal example.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows individuals to express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, many people feel joyful when they sing their favorite songs. Personally, I feel happy when I sing for others because it creates a positive atmosphere.

× Yeah, I like singing becauses quiet whenever I try to see the song that time I feel this this will reverse main some kind of pre placement while I sing a song.

✓ Yeah, I like singing because it's quiet whenever I try to see the song; at that time, I feel this will reverse some kind of pre-placement while I sing a song.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'because'. Also, the sentence structure is confusing and lacks proper conjunctions and punctuation. Using 'because' correctly and adding punctuation improves clarity.

× That time I decided to pay a vital importance to say because my vocal cord has not too much good, but I did I tried.

✓ At that time, I decided to pay vital importance to singing because my vocal cords are not very good, but I tried.

The phrase 'pay a vital importance to say' is incorrect; it should be 'pay vital importance to singing'. Also, 'vocal cord has not too much good' is incorrect; it should be 'vocal cords are not very good'. Prepositions and word choices are corrected for clarity.

× From my childhood, I see, uh, I. Sing a song becauses in YouTube there is lots of music, so whenever I try to I try to sing a song.

✓ Since my childhood, I have sung songs because on YouTube there is lots of music, so whenever I try, I try to sing a song.

The verb tense 'see' is incorrect for past experience; 'have sung' is appropriate. Also, 'becauses' should be 'because', and 'in YouTube' should be 'on YouTube'. Correcting verb tense and prepositions improves accuracy.

× That time I decided to go for a music video which is very much important to know how the.

✓ At that time, I decided to watch a music video which is very important to know how to sing.

The phrase 'go for a music video' is incorrect; 'watch a music video' is correct. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.

× I would like to sing for my favorite Lee and close friend.

✓ I would like to sing for my favorite Lee and close friend.

The sentence seems to have a typo or unclear word 'Lee'. If 'Lee' is a name, it is correct; if not, it needs clarification. No grammatical error detected here.

× Singing for them feel special because they are supportive and appreciate my faults, which motivates me to perform better.

✓ Singing for them feels special because they are supportive and appreciate my faults, which motivates me to perform better.

The verb 'feel' should be 'feels' to agree with the singular subject 'Singing'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× So additionally, sharing music with Labs One creates A joyful and peaceful Xbox VR.

✓ So additionally, sharing music with loved ones creates a joyful and peaceful experience.

The phrase 'Labs One' and 'Xbox VR' seem incorrect or misplaced. Likely intended 'loved ones' and 'experience'. Correcting these improves meaning and grammar.

× Yes, I believe singing and definitely bring happiness to people because ceiling allows individual to express their emotion and can be great way to relieve stress.

✓ Yes, I believe singing definitely brings happiness to people because singing allows individuals to express their emotions and can be a great way to relieve stress.

The phrase 'singing and definitely bring' is incorrect; it should be 'singing definitely brings'. Also, 'ceiling' is a typo for 'singing'. Subject-verb agreement and word choice corrected.

× For example, many people feel are privileged and joyful when they sing their song.

✓ For example, many people feel privileged and joyful when they sing their songs.

The phrase 'feel are privileged' is incorrect; 'feel privileged' is correct. Also, 'song' should be plural 'songs' to agree with 'many people'.

× So especially for me if we sing for others that time they will remain there.

✓ So especially for me, if we sing for others, they will remember it.

The phrase 'they will remain there' is unclear and likely incorrect. 'They will remember it' fits the context better. Also, commas added for clarity.