Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Try to avoid errors and unclear phrases such as "see my previous sounds" and "saying" which should be "singing". Use clearer vocabulary and correct grammar to make your answer more natural and effective. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relieve stress after a long day at work. Listening to my recordings makes me feel more relaxed and confident, which boosts my mood significantly. Additionally, singing is a great way to express my emotions and have fun.

Sugestão: There are several grammar and clarity issues here, such as "teachers are still missing in glasses" which is unclear. Make sure to use correct verb tenses and clear expressions. Also, provide more specific details about your experience to enrich your answer.

Exemplo: No, I haven't formally learned how to sing. However, when I was in primary school, my teachers often organised singing sessions where we sang popular children's songs. These sessions were really enjoyable and memorable, and they helped me develop a genuine interest in singing.

Sugestão: Correct the grammar and word choice errors such as "singing run up a large audience" and "singing for them feels more. Personal admitted." Use linking words to make your answer coherent and clear. Also, keep your sentences concise and natural.

Exemplo: To be honest, I feel quite shy about singing in front of a large audience. If I had to choose, I would prefer to sing for my family or close friends because they are supportive and make me feel comfortable. Singing for them feels more personal and enjoyable.

Sugestão: Fix spelling mistakes like "hapiness" and "core" (should be "choir"). Also, clarify unclear phrases such as "thing can lead people spirits." Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and provide specific examples.

Exemplo: Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and feel more connected to artists. For example, singing in a choir or with friends can create a sense of community and joy. I also believe that singing can lift people's spirits and improve their mood.

× Whenever I see my previous sounds, I feel more relaxed and confident, which boost my mood significantly.

✓ Whenever I see my previous sounds, I feel more relaxed and confident, which boosts my mood significantly.

The verb 'boost' should be in the third person singular form 'boosts' to agree with the singular subject 'which' referring to 'feeling more relaxed and confident'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× I also find that saying is a great way to express my emotions and have fun.

✓ I also find that singing is a great way to express my emotions and have fun.

The word 'saying' is incorrect here; the correct gerund form related to the context is 'singing'. This is a vocabulary choice error involving the verb's -ing form.

× However, when I was in primary school, my teachers are still missing in glasses where we sang popular children songs.

✓ However, when I was in primary school, my teachers were still missing in glasses where we sang popular children's songs.

The verb 'are' should be in past tense 'were' to match the past time frame 'when I was in primary school'. Also, 'children songs' should be 'children's songs' to show possession. This is a past tense and article/possessive form issue.

× I feel quite shy about singing run up a large audience.

✓ I feel quite shy about singing in front of a large audience.

The phrase 'run up a large audience' is incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'in front of a large audience' to indicate performing before people. This is a preposition usage error.

× I would prefer to sing forward my family or close friends because they are supportive and make me feel comfortable.

✓ I would prefer to sing for my family or close friends because they are supportive and make me feel comfortable.

The preposition 'forward' is incorrect here; the correct preposition is 'for' when indicating the audience of singing. This is a preposition usage error.

× Singing for them feels more. Personal admitted.

✓ Singing for them feels more personal, I admit.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It should be combined into a complete sentence with proper word order and punctuation. This is a sentence structure error.

× Yes, I think singing can definitely bring hapiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and feel more connected to artists.

✓ Yes, I think singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and feel more connected to artists.

The word 'hapiness' is a misspelling of 'happiness'. Correct spelling is essential for clarity. This is an adjective spelling error.

× For example, singing in a core or with friends can create a sense of community and joy.

✓ For example, singing in a choir or with friends can create a sense of community and joy.

The word 'core' is incorrect; the correct word is 'choir' which means a group of singers. This is a vocabulary choice error.

× I also believe that thing can lead people spirits.

✓ I also believe that singing can lift people's spirits.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'Thing' is vague and 'lead people spirits' is incorrect. The corrected sentence uses 'singing' and the idiomatic expression 'lift people's spirits'. This is a sentence structure and vocabulary error.