Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer shows enthusiasm, but it needs to be clearer and more natural. Avoid filler words like 'See' and ensure correct grammar, such as 'while I am listening to music.' Also, explain your reasons more clearly and avoid awkward phrases like 'it has incoming my mind and my soul.' Try to use linking words like 'because' and 'also' to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it is my favourite hobby. I usually sing while I am listening to music because it relaxes my mind and soul. Also, singing helps me reduce stress from work and makes my day more enjoyable.

Sugestão: Your answer needs to be more coherent and grammatically correct. Avoid unclear phrases like 'learned to sing her' and 'I remember or they were.' Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about what you learned. For example, mention vocal techniques, pitch, tone, and pronunciation clearly.

Exemplo: Yes, I learned how to sing during my school days. We had music classes taught by professional instructors. I learned about vocal techniques, pitch, tone, and pronunciation, which helped me improve my singing skills.

Sugestão: Your answer has several grammar and vocabulary errors that affect clarity. Avoid phrases like 'not that skilled a single' and 'fast yours.' Use correct expressions and linking words to make your answer more natural and coherent. Specify the types of events and explain why you prefer singing there.

Exemplo: Honestly, I'm not a professional singer, so I prefer to sing only at private events, such as cultural shows or family gatherings. I enjoy singing for my friends and family because it makes the moments more enjoyable and fun.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and correct grammar. Avoid unclear words like 'Maddie' and incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and explain how singing acts as therapy or meditation to bring happiness.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it relaxes both the mind and body. Singing is like a form of therapy or meditation that helps reduce stress and promotes a positive mood.

× I mostly sing while I listening music.

✓ I mostly sing while I am listening to music.

The verb 'listening' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense, and the preposition 'to' is needed after 'listening' when referring to music.

× I mostly sing while I listening music.

✓ I mostly sing while I am listening to music.

The verb 'listening' should be followed by the preposition 'to' when referring to music, so 'listening music' is incorrect; it should be 'listening to music'.

× I like it because it has incoming my mind and my soul.

✓ I like it because it is calming my mind and my soul.

The phrase 'has incoming my mind and my soul' is incorrect. The intended meaning is likely 'calming my mind and my soul'. Also, 'calming' is the correct verb form here.

× Moreover, it has in reducing my work burden and making the movement more enjoyable.

✓ Moreover, it helps in reducing my work burden and making the moment more enjoyable.

The phrase 'it has in reducing' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'it helps in reducing'. Also, 'movement' should be 'moment' to fit the context.

× Yes, I have learned to sing her in my school days.

✓ Yes, I learned to sing here in my school days.

The past tense 'learned' is correct, but 'her' is a typo and should be 'here' to indicate location.

× I remember or they were.

✓ I remember there were.

The phrase 'I remember or they were' is ungrammatical and unclear. It should be 'I remember there were' to introduce the existence of something in the past.

× They used to be musical classes given to students by expert professionals.

✓ There used to be musical classes given to students by expert professionals.

The phrase 'They used to be musical classes' is incorrect; 'There used to be' is the correct expression to indicate past existence.

× I learned many things from vocal to pitch a pitch and tone and also have some pronunciation.

✓ I learned many things from vocals to pitch and tone, and also some pronunciation.

The phrase 'from vocal to pitch a pitch and tone' is confusing and incorrect. It should be 'from vocals to pitch and tone'. Also, 'have some pronunciation' should be 'learned some pronunciation' or 'improved my pronunciation'.

× Honestly, I'm not that professional. Not that skilled a single, therefore I would like to sing the song only in the private event such as a cultural shows or fast yours for my friends or family members to make the moment more enjoyable and fun loving.

✓ Honestly, I'm not that professional or skilled a singer, therefore I would like to sing songs only at private events such as cultural shows or festivals for my friends or family members to make the moment more enjoyable and fun-loving.

The phrase 'Not that skilled a single' is incorrect; it should be 'not that skilled a singer'. 'The song' should be plural 'songs' to match the context. 'Private event' should be plural 'private events'. 'Fast yours' is a mishearing or typo for 'festivals'. 'Fun loving' should be hyphenated as 'fun-loving'.

× Yes, I think the singing can bring happiness to people because it has in a relaxing their mind and body also.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because it helps in relaxing their mind and body as well.

The phrase 'it has in a relaxing' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'it helps in relaxing'. Also, 'the singing' is better as 'singing' without 'the' here.

× It is a kind of therapy. Or Maddie. Maddie. Meditation, which has to bring the happiness.

✓ It is a kind of therapy or meditation, which helps to bring happiness.

The fragmented sentences 'Or Maddie. Maddie. Meditation' are incorrect. They should be combined into one sentence with proper conjunctions. 'Has to bring the happiness' should be 'helps to bring happiness'.