Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains unclear phrases like 'relax my mom'. Try to be more precise and avoid redundancy. Use clear and natural expressions to explain why you like singing, and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax both my mind and body. Singing allows me to reduce stress and feel more peaceful. I often sing my favourite songs when I am feeling tense, and it always improves my mood.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to use consistent pronouns and more natural phrasing.

Exemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing formally, but I would like to in the future because singing is a great way to reduce stress and relax both the body and mind.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar, and provide specific details. Avoid confusing phrases and ensure your sentences are coherent.

Exemplo: I want to sing for people who enjoy relaxing music because it helps them feel calm. Also, I would like to sing songs by my favourite singer, LG, and perform in front of an audience someday.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is affected by unclear phrases and grammar mistakes. Use linking words to connect your points and provide specific examples of events where singing brings joy. Keep your sentences clear and concise.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their feelings. For example, singing is common at birthday parties, weddings, and other celebrations, which makes these events more joyful.

× Yes, I like singing records.

✓ Yes, I like singing songs.

The phrase 'singing records' is incorrect because 'records' refers to physical music albums, not the act of singing. The correct preposition and noun combination is 'singing songs' to express the activity of singing.

× It helps me to relax my mom, my mind and body.

✓ It helps me to relax my mind and body.

The phrase 'relax my mom' is incorrect because the subject is talking about themselves, not their mother. The pronoun 'my mom' is wrongly used here; it should be 'my mind and body' to indicate what is being relaxed.

× It is a good way and impressive way to relax my body and mind as well as reduce my tension and stress.

✓ It is a good and impressive way to relax my body and mind as well as reduce my tension and stress.

The phrase 'a good way and impressive way' is redundant and awkward. The correct form is 'a good and impressive way' to properly connect two adjectives describing the same noun.

× No, I never learned how to sing, but I would like to.

✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, but I would like to.

The use of 'never learned' is less appropriate here because the experience is up to the present. The present perfect tense 'have never learned' is correct to indicate an action that has not happened until now.

× To learn singing in future because it is a good way to reduce our stress and relax your body and mind.

✓ I want to learn singing in the future because it is a good way to reduce stress and relax the body and mind.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a subject and proper structure. Adding 'I want' and correcting pronouns makes the sentence complete and coherent.

× I want to sing for that people which are want to listen songs for relaxing good both her body and minds, and I also want to sync Ford LG the sound because he's my favorite singer.

✓ I want to sing for people who want to listen to songs to relax their body and mind, and I also want to sing for LG because he's my favorite singer.

The sentence has multiple pronoun errors: 'that people' should be 'people who'; 'which are want' should be 'who want'; 'listen songs' should be 'listen to songs'; 'relaxing good both her body and minds' is incorrect and should be 'to relax their body and mind'; 'sync Ford LG the sound' is unclear and corrected to 'sing for LG'.

× I would I want like I would like to sing front of digit.

✓ I would like to sing in front of a digital audience.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. It is corrected to a clear and grammatically correct sentence expressing the desire to sing in front of a digital audience.

× Yes. I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is a good way to express our happiness and were in we can enjoy our movements such as birthday parties and as well as marriage events and other events as well.

✓ Yes. I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it is a good way to express our happiness and where we can enjoy moments such as birthday parties, marriage events, and other occasions.

The sentence contains pronoun and word choice errors: 'were in we' should be 'where we'; 'movements' is incorrect and should be 'moments'; 'as well as' is repeated unnecessarily. The correction improves clarity and grammar.