Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly stating your reason and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Exemplo: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and calm my mind when I feel tired. Moreover, singing is a way to celebrate proud moments in life.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, using correct grammar and linking words to explain your situation. Avoid unnecessary or confusing phrases.

Exemplo: To be honest, I have not learned singing formally because my passion lies in becoming a nurse. However, I enjoy singing casually with my friends during happy or exciting moments.

Sugestão: Your answer has good content but is affected by grammatical mistakes and unclear phrasing. Try to structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, using linking words and correct grammar.

Exemplo: I want to sing for my mother because she plays an important role in my life. She motivates and encourages me to achieve great things, and I want to show my appreciation through singing.

Sugestão: Your answer conveys the main idea but is affected by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect your ideas and express them clearly and naturally.

Exemplo: Absolutely, singing brings a lot of happiness and enjoyment to people. It helps them connect with others and uplifts their mood, especially during stressful or hectic days.

× I like singing. Yes, I love singing because it helps me to relax and calm my mind when I feel tired or exhausted as singing is a part of life when we have a proud moment or. When we feel tired.

✓ I like singing. Yes, I love singing because it helps me relax and calm my mind when I feel tired or exhausted. Singing is a part of life, especially during proud moments or when we feel tired.

The original sentence has incomplete and run-on structures causing confusion. Breaking it into clear sentences improves clarity and grammatical correctness. Also, 'helps me to relax' is better as 'helps me relax' for natural English usage.

× Do be hornist.

✓ To be honest.

The phrase 'Do be hornist' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'To be honest'. Correcting it to the proper phrase improves clarity and correctness.

× I do not learn formally how to sing becauses it is not my passion because I want to become a nurse.

✓ I have not learned formally how to sing because it is not my passion; I want to become a nurse.

The verb tense is incorrect ('do not learn' should be 'have not learned' for past experience). Also, 'becauses' is a misspelling of 'because'. The sentence is improved by correcting tense and spelling and by separating ideas with a semicolon for clarity.

× Furthermore, for enjoyment and for my together with my friends I sing a song for happiness or when it was excited moment or in a cage.

✓ Furthermore, for enjoyment, I sing songs together with my friends for happiness, during exciting moments, or when I am in a cage.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. Rearranging the sentence for clarity and correcting phrases like 'my together with my friends' to 'together with my friends' and 'when it was excited moment' to 'during exciting moments' improves understanding.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× I want to sing for my mother becaused my mother play very imperative role in my life as she is the only one who motivates me and to help me encourage ING me to doing great things I had done as she is only one.

✓ I want to sing for my mother because she plays a very important role in my life. She is the only one who motivates me and encourages me to do great things I have done, as she is the only one.

Corrected 'becaused' to 'because', 'play' to 'plays' (subject-verb agreement), 'imperative' to 'important' (correct adjective), and restructured the sentence for clarity. Also corrected 'encourage ING me to doing' to 'encourages me to do' and 'I had done' to 'I have done' for proper tense.

× Who cares for me and want me to success in my life.

✓ Who cares for me and wants me to succeed in my life.

Subject-verb agreement corrected: 'want' to 'wants' to agree with singular subject 'who'. Also, 'to success' is incorrect; it should be 'to succeed' (verb form).

× So I want to sing.

✓ So, I want to sing for her.

Adding 'for her' clarifies the object of singing, making the sentence complete and contextually appropriate.

× Absolutely singing bring a lot of happiness, enjoyment and amazed to the people becaused singing is the only way when within which people get connected and it is only thing which uplifted the mode and.

✓ Absolutely, singing brings a lot of happiness, enjoyment, and amazement to people because singing is the only way through which people get connected, and it is the only thing which uplifts the mood.

Corrected 'bring' to 'brings' for subject-verb agreement. Changed 'amazed' to 'amazement' to use the correct noun form. Fixed 'becaused' to 'because'. Rephrased 'when within which' to 'through which' for clarity. Changed 'uplifted the mode' to 'uplifts the mood' for correct tense and word choice.

× Helps to people to relax their mind when they are on heavy days an have a hectic days.

✓ It helps people relax their minds when they have heavy and hectic days.

Removed unnecessary 'to' after 'helps'. Changed 'their mind' to 'their minds' for plural agreement. Corrected 'on heavy days an have a hectic days' to 'have heavy and hectic days' for grammatical correctness and clarity.