Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to be more precise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and focus on clear expression of your thoughts.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy singing because it helps me relax and boosts my confidence. Moreover, by singing regularly, I have improved my vocal skills significantly. Singing is a great way for me to express my emotions and feel happy.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct tenses and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I recently wanted to improve my singing skills, so I enrolled in a singing class near my house. It is very convenient to attend, and I have been able to enhance my vocal abilities through regular practice.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to form complete sentences and clearly express your ideas. Avoid confusing phrases and focus on answering the question directly with supporting details.

Exemplo: I love to sing for my family members because they always support me. For example, I often sing for my parents to show my appreciation and make them happy.

Sugestão: Your answer is difficult to understand due to grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to use simple and clear sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific reasons or examples.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. Although many are busy nowadays, singing helps improve mental health and provides a chance to relax and enjoy time with others.

× Yes, of course I enjoy singing because it helps me to improve my relax skills as well as I gain my confidence.

✓ Yes, of course I enjoy singing because it helps me to improve my relaxation skills as well as gain my confidence.

The word 'relax' is a verb, but here a noun is needed to describe the skills. The correct noun form is 'relaxation'. Also, 'I gain my confidence' is better as 'gain my confidence' to avoid redundancy since 'helps me to' already implies the subject.

× Single is a great way for me to.

✓ Singing is a great way for me to relax and improve myself.

The sentence is incomplete and 'Single' is a typo for 'Singing'. The sentence needs to be completed to make sense.

× Yes, recently I want to improve my singing skill, so I enrolled in a singing class which is a just a stone way from my house.

✓ Yes, recently I wanted to improve my singing skill, so I enrolled in a singing class which is just a stone's throw away from my house.

The verb 'want' should be in past tense 'wanted' to match 'recently' and 'enrolled'. Also, 'a just a stone way' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'just a stone's throw away' meaning very close.

× I easily go there and improve my vocal skills.

✓ I can easily go there and improve my vocal skills.

The sentence needs a modal verb 'can' to express ability in present tense.

× Well, I love. To sing for with my family members because of my family members always sand for me.

✓ Well, I love to sing for my family members because my family members always sing for me.

The preposition 'for with' is incorrect; it should be 'for'. Also, 'sand' is a typo for 'sing'. The phrase 'because of my family members always sing for me' is better as 'because my family members always sing for me'.

× So I represent to my dad skills in front of my mother because I love my mother.

✓ So I show my singing skills to my dad in front of my mother because I love my mother.

The phrase 'represent to my dad skills' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'show my singing skills to my dad'. Also, 'represent' is not used correctly here.

× Yes, of course in these days everyone busy their lifestyle, they have no enough time to sing a song.

✓ Yes, of course these days everyone is busy with their lifestyle, and they do not have enough time to sing a song.

The phrase 'busy their lifestyle' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'busy with their lifestyle'. Also, 'have no enough time' should be 'do not have enough time'.

× Butter with the help of her sing a song they can improve their mental abilities and they have a time to fund with the New York beer ones.

✓ But with the help of singing a song, they can improve their mental abilities and have time to have fun with their loved ones.

'Butter' is a typo for 'But'. 'With the help of her sing a song' is incorrect; it should be 'with the help of singing a song'. 'Fund' is a typo for 'fun'. 'New York beer ones' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'loved ones' fits context better.

× So I think it is the best opportunity to bring the hapiness between the peoples.

✓ So I think it is the best opportunity to bring happiness among people.

'Hapiness' is a typo for 'happiness'. 'Between the peoples' is incorrect; 'among people' is the correct phrase when referring to more than two people in general.