Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и понятным. Следует избегать грамматических ошибок и неясных выражений, а также использовать связующие слова для логичности. Например, можно начать с утверждения, затем объяснить причину и закончить выводом.

Exemplo: Yes, I really love singing because it makes me feel happy. However, I don't have a very good voice, so sometimes it is difficult for me to sing like professional singers. Despite this, I enjoy singing in my free time.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит много ошибок и неясностей. Нужно использовать правильную грамматику и более чётко выражать мысли. Также стоит использовать связующие слова для логичности и конкретизировать детали.

Exemplo: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, when I was in 7th grade, my friend who loves singing helped me practice. Our teacher also gave me some advice to improve my voice.

Sugestão: Ответ очень непонятен и содержит много ошибок. Следует использовать правильные слова и грамматику, а также чётко выражать свои мысли. Нужно избегать повторов и использовать связующие слова.

Exemplo: I want to sing like Blackpink because they are my favorite girl group. I try to imitate the voice of Jennie, one of their members, because I really admire her singing style.

Sugestão: Ответ содержит повторения и грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать связующие слова и более чётко выражать мысли, избегая повторов. Также стоит добавить конкретные детали.

Exemplo: Yes, singing definitely brings me happiness and helps me overcome my problems. That's why I usually sing when I have free time, as it makes me feel better and relaxed.

× Yes, of course I really love singing but I don't have really good voice that's why and sometimes it really will be a hard for me when I am sinking an trying to seeing you think by actress or actor.

✓ Yes, of course I really love singing but I don't have a really good voice, that's why sometimes it is really hard for me when I am singing and trying to sing like an actress or actor.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'really good voice' which is necessary for singular countable nouns. 'Will be a hard' is incorrect; it should be 'is really hard' to express a general difficulty. 'Sinking' and 'seeing' are incorrect forms; the correct verbs are 'singing' and 'sing'. Also, 'you think by actress or actor' is unclear and corrected to 'like an actress or actor' to express comparison.

× No, actually I have never learned how to sing bad.

✓ No, actually I have never learned how to sing badly.

The adverb 'bad' should be 'badly' to correctly modify the verb 'sing'. The present perfect tense 'have never learned' is appropriate here.

× My friend love to sing in the year help me how to sing bad.

✓ My friend loves to sing and helped me learn how to sing badly.

The verb 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the singular subject 'My friend'. 'Help me how to sing bad' is incorrect; it should be 'helped me learn how to sing badly' to correctly express past assistance and use the adverb form.

× Our teacher was an accent me two scene into my voice.

✓ Our teacher helped me to improve my voice.

The original sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words. 'Accent me two scene into my voice' is incorrect; the correction uses a clear and grammatically correct expression to convey the intended meaning.

× I want to sing for Black bean because they're my favorite girl and girl.

✓ I want to sing for Blackpink because they're my favorite girls.

'Black bean' is corrected to 'Blackpink', the proper noun. 'They're my favorite girl and girl' is incorrect; it should be 'they're my favorite girls' to indicate plural.

× That's why I usually seeing in try to get hired voice like Jenny if if you know and that's why I really love what you seem for black ping.

✓ That's why I usually sing and try to get a higher voice like Jennie, if you know, and that's why I really love what you see from Blackpink.

'Seeing in try' is incorrect; it should be 'sing and try'. 'Hired voice' should be 'higher voice'. 'Jenny' corrected to 'Jennie' (correct name). 'What you seem for black ping' is unclear; corrected to 'what you see from Blackpink' for clarity.

× Yes, of course to singing can help me to bring hapiness and to overcome overcome my problems.

✓ Yes, of course singing can help me to bring happiness and to overcome my problems.

'To singing' is incorrect; it should be 'singing'. 'Hapiness' is misspelled; corrected to 'happiness'. Repetition of 'overcome' removed.

× That's why I usually try to see when I have free time and that's why they are also thinking gives gives me.

✓ That's why I usually try to sing when I have free time, and that's why it also gives me happiness.

'Try to see' should be 'try to sing'. 'They are also thinking gives gives me' is unclear and incorrect; corrected to 'it also gives me happiness' to express the intended meaning clearly.