Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer shows your feelings well but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Try to avoid fragmented sentences and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. Also, be careful with pronunciation and word choice, for example, 'because' instead of 'becaused' and 'feels relaxing' instead of 'feel relax's'.

Exemplo: Yes, I love singing because it helps me feel relaxed. Whenever I am sad or going through a difficult time, singing calms me down and makes me feel peaceful. I especially enjoy listening to Lana Del Rey's songs because her voice is soothing.

Sugestão: Your answer is understandable but contains many incomplete sentences and unclear expressions. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly. Use linking words like 'because' and 'and' properly to connect your thoughts.

Exemplo: No, I have never learned how to sing because I don't think it is my strong point. In my opinion, my voice is quite harsh and not suitable for singing.

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant but contains some incomplete and unclear sentences. Try to organize your ideas logically and avoid unnecessary words like 'I fight'. Use linking words such as 'if' and 'then' correctly to make your answer coherent.

Exemplo: That's an interesting question. I haven't thought about it before, but if I had to choose one person, I would definitely sing for my husband. I think it would be a wonderful experience for both of us.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but is difficult to understand due to incomplete sentences and unclear expressions. Try to use complete sentences and explain your points clearly. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' to connect your ideas logically.

Exemplo: Yes, definitely. I think singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions. When people are going through difficult times, singing helps them release their feelings and feel better.

× Yes, I love singing becaused it makes me. Feel relax's Whenever I feel sad or emotional I am going through a breakdown or heartbreak.

✓ Yes, I love singing because it makes me feel relaxed whenever I feel sad or emotional or when I am going through a breakdown or heartbreak.

The word 'becaused' is incorrect; the correct form is 'because'. 'Feel relax's' is incorrect; it should be 'feel relaxed' as 'relaxed' is the correct adjective form here. Also, the sentence was fragmented and needed to be combined properly for clarity.

× I love singing and I love listening to Lana Del Rey songs. She is a ether.

✓ I love singing and I love listening to Lana Del Rey songs. She is an ether.

The article 'a' before a word starting with a vowel sound should be 'an'. However, 'ether' seems to be a wrong word here; possibly the student meant 'author' or 'artist'. But based on grammar, the article usage is the issue.

× No, absolutely not. I have never learned how to sing because I think. It is not my Forte.

✓ No, absolutely not. I have never learned how to sing because I think it is not my forte.

The sentence was fragmented incorrectly with a period after 'think'. It should be combined into one sentence. Also, 'Forte' should be lowercase unless it is a proper noun.

× And. My voice is also not suitable for this I in my opinion.

✓ And my voice is also not suitable for this, in my opinion.

The phrase 'this I in my opinion' is incorrect. The pronoun 'I' is misplaced and unnecessary here. The sentence should be restructured for clarity.

× I think my voice is so much harsh and it doesn't.

✓ I think my voice is very harsh and it doesn't suit singing.

'So much harsh' is incorrect; the correct form is 'very harsh'. The sentence is incomplete; 'it doesn't' needs an object or complement to be complete.

× That's a really interesting question if I had. I haven't really thought about this before.

✓ That's a really interesting question. I haven't really thought about this before.

The phrase 'if I had' is incomplete and does not fit here. It should be removed to correct the sentence structure.

× So if I have to choose a particular specific one person, then I would definitely choose my husband.

✓ So if I have to choose one particular person, then I would definitely choose my husband.

Using both 'particular' and 'specific' together is redundant. Also, 'one person' is sufficient without 'particular specific one person'.

× It would be a great experience for both of us. I fight.

✓ It would be a great experience for both of us. I think so.

The phrase 'I fight' is incorrect and likely a typo for 'I think'. Correcting it improves sentence meaning and structure.

× Yes, definitely. I think a singing can bring happiness to people because in my opinion, what I feel that.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think singing can bring happiness to people because, in my opinion, what I feel is that...

The article 'a' before 'singing' is incorrect; 'singing' as a gerund does not need an article. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly.

× And people who are emotional did not expressive the. Passing through they express their emotional through their singing, so it is very. And it.

✓ And people who are emotional do not express their feelings verbally; instead, they express their emotions through their singing, so it is very effective.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'did not expressive' should be 'do not express'; 'the. Passing through' is unclear and incorrect; 'emotional' should be 'emotions'; sentence fragments need to be combined for clarity.