Singing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. For example, say "No, I don't like singing because I think I don't have a good voice. However, my friend Peter loves singing and wants to become a singer in the future."

Exemplo: No, I don't like singing because I think I don't have a good voice. However, my friend Peter loves singing and wants to become a singer in the future.

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Respond directly and clearly, using linking words to explain your opinion. For example, "No, I have never learnt how to sing because I believe singing is less important than other skills. Therefore, I prefer to spend my time improving my communication skills."

Exemplo: No, I have never learnt how to sing because I believe singing is less important than other skills. Therefore, I prefer to spend my time improving my communication skills.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a clear and concise response with supporting details. For example, "I would like to sing for my boyfriend because he says my voice is calming. However, I don't think I am good at singing."

Exemplo: I would like to sing for my boyfriend because he says my voice is calming. However, I don't think I am good at singing.

Sugestão: Your answer shows understanding but is unclear and contains errors. Use linking words and clearer vocabulary. For example, "Yes, I do. I think singing helps people express their feelings through music. In my life, singing has helped people feel happy and relaxed."

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I think singing helps people express their feelings through music. In my life, singing has helped people feel happy and relaxed.

× No, I don't, I don't even I syncing is sound like a dad.

✓ No, I don't, I don't even sing because it sounds like a dad.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'I syncing' instead of 'I sing' and has unclear pronoun usage. The verb 'singing' should be in base form 'sing' after 'I don't'. Also, 'is sound like a dad' should be corrected to 'sounds like a dad' to agree with the subject 'it'.

× But my friend name Peter, he loves singing.

✓ But my friend's name is Peter, and he loves singing.

The phrase 'my friend name Peter' lacks possessive form and verb 'is'. It should be 'my friend's name is Peter'. Also, connecting the two clauses with 'and' improves sentence flow.

× In the future he needs to become a singer.

✓ In the future, he wants to become a singer.

'Needs to' implies obligation, but likely the intended meaning is desire or intention, so 'wants to' is more appropriate. Also, a comma after 'In the future' improves readability.

× But I'm not is not suitable for me.

✓ But it is not suitable for me.

The phrase 'I'm not is not' is incorrect and redundant. The correct form is 'it is not suitable for me' to refer to singing.

× No, I'm having to learn singing before because in my opinion I think thinking is lyricless more than the other skill.

✓ No, I haven't learned singing before because, in my opinion, I think singing is less lyrical than other skills.

'I'm having to learn' is incorrect; the present perfect 'I haven't learned' fits better. 'Thinking is lyricless' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'singing is less lyrical'. Also, 'more than the other skill' should be 'less lyrical than other skills' for clarity.

× I spend my time to improve my communication skill more than forgot to sings music.

✓ I spend my time improving my communication skills more than singing music.

'Spend my time to improve' should be 'spend my time improving' as 'spend time' is followed by a gerund. 'Forgot to sings music' is incorrect; likely intended 'singing music'. Also, 'communication skill' should be plural 'skills'.

× I want to sing for my boyfriend be 'cause he think my voice is calm down and sobbed.

✓ I want to sing for my boyfriend because he thinks my voice is calm and soothing.

'Be 'cause' should be 'because'. 'He think' should be 'he thinks' for subject-verb agreement. 'Calm down and sobbed' is incorrect; likely intended 'calm and soothing' or similar adjectives.

× However, I'm not thing so my boy is appropriate to sing.

✓ However, I don't think my voice is appropriate for singing.

'I'm not thing' is incorrect; should be 'I don't think'. 'My boy is appropriate to sing' is unclear; likely intended 'my voice is appropriate for singing'.

× Yes I do. I think thinking is help people to express their feeling followed then music.

✓ Yes, I do. I think singing helps people to express their feelings through music.

'Thinking is help' should be 'singing helps' for subject-verb agreement and correct verb form. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings'. 'Followed then music' is incorrect; 'through music' is appropriate.

× Because in my Lisa, singing is help people to feel happy and explored a step.

✓ Because in my life, singing helps people to feel happy and explore a step.

'Lisa' is likely a typo for 'life'. 'Singing is help' should be 'singing helps' for subject-verb agreement. 'Explored a step' is unclear; 'explore a step' is better but still vague; possibly 'express themselves' or 'take a step forward' would be clearer.