Memory— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and sentence structure, be more concise and use linking words. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct articles and phrasing (e.g. "I'm quite good at memorising things"), and avoid redundancy. Add one specific example of a technique and link ideas with words like "for example" or "because".

Exemplo: I'm quite good at memorising things, especially numbers and WeChat IDs. For example, I repeat simple number patterns and create associations between digits and familiar events, which helps me remember them for a long time.

Sugestão: Fix tense and word choice, use a coherent structure: topic sentence about forgetting, then a consequence and what you changed. Use linking words like "as a result" or "since then" correctly. Be specific about the exam and the reminder app you used.

Exemplo: Yes. I once forgot an important question on a final exam and got a very low score. As a result, I started using a reminder app on my phone to schedule alerts for exams and deadlines, which has helped me avoid similar mistakes.

Sugestão: Clarify meaning and correct factual phrasing (e.g. 'missing doses can make my condition worse' if true). Use one clear topic sentence and provide supporting detail about how you remind yourself, with correct tense and pronouns. Use linking words like "so" or "therefore" for logic.

Exemplo: I need to remember to take my medication every day because missing doses can make my condition worse. Therefore, I set a daily alarm on my phone so I don't forget; without it I sometimes miss several days.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and word order: begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain how the app helps. Replace vague phrases with specifics (e.g. "reminder notifications 30 minutes before"), and use linking words like "so" or "which" correctly.

Exemplo: I use the reminders app on my phone to record important events. For example, I set notifications 30 minutes before an event, which helps me stay organised and manage my daily schedule effectively.

× I'm quite a good at memory things, especially numbers and WeChat accounts.

✓ I'm quite good at remembering things, especially numbers and WeChat accounts.

The phrase 'a good at memory things' uses incorrect article and noun forms. Use the adjective 'good' without 'a' and use the verb 'remember' with '-ing' (remembering) or the noun 'memory' appropriately. 'Memory things' is unnatural; 'remembering things' is correct. Suggestion: Remove the indefinite article before 'good' and use 'remembering' to express ability.

× I use the simple numbers to repeat it several times, which can help me to imagine the inner association between digits and so that I can remember it for a really long time.

✓ I repeat the numbers several times, which helps me imagine the associations between the digits so I can remember them for a long time.

The original has awkward verb forms and unnecessary words ('use the simple numbers to repeat it', 'inner association', 'and so that'). Use present simple 'repeat' for habitual action and 'helps' (subject-verb agreement). Use plural 'associations' and plural pronoun 'them' for 'digits'. Suggestion: Keep sentences concise and use correct verb forms and pronouns.

× I still can't recall my mother's previous telephone numbers, even though she changed many years ago.

✓ I still can't recall my mother's previous telephone number; she changed it many years ago.

The clause 'she changed many years ago' lacks the object and the past-tense verb's object. Use 'changed it' to show what she changed, and keep past simple 'changed' with 'many years ago'. Also 'numbers' vs 'number' depends on context; single 'number' is clearer here. Suggestion: Include the object after 'changed' and ensure past tense is used correctly.

× Yes, I once forgotten an important on that exam which was so embarrassing and in the end I received a really low score.

✓ Yes, I once forgot something important on that exam, which was very embarrassing, and in the end I received a very low score.

Use simple past 'forgot' rather than past participle 'forgotten' without an auxiliary. Also 'an important' needs a noun: 'something important'. 'So' is informal; 'very' is preferable in this context. Suggestion: Use correct past tense and include the missing noun.

× Since then I started using a remember apps to send a notifications and the upcoming events alarms so that I cannot be avoided any important things and help me to stay organized.

✓ Since then I started using reminder apps to send notifications and upcoming event alarms so that I don't miss important things and can stay organized.

Use 'reminder' (noun) not 'remember' and plural 'apps' without article. 'Send a notifications' incorrect article and plural; use 'send notifications'. 'Cannot be avoided any important things' is ungrammatical — use 'don't miss important things'. Ensure parallel structure: 'don't miss... and can stay organized.' Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and common phrases like 'reminder apps' and 'don't miss'.

× I need to remember to take my medication every day because missing doses don't make my conditions worse.

✓ I need to remember to take my medication every day because missing doses would make my condition worse.

The original 'don't make my conditions worse' contradicts the intended meaning. Use 'would make my condition worse' to indicate potential consequence. Use singular 'condition' for a general health state. Modal 'would' expresses consequence; present simple 'don't' is incorrect here. Suggestion: Use appropriate modal or conditional to express negative consequence and use singular 'condition'.

× I even set a reminder alarm on my phone to help me to remember since without the app I will often forgotten and sometimes goes several days without taking it.

✓ I even set a reminder alarm on my phone to help me remember, since without the app I often forget and sometimes go several days without taking it.

'Help me to remember' -> 'help me remember' is more natural. 'I will often forgotten' mixes future/participle; correct is 'I often forget'. 'Sometimes goes' should be 'sometimes go' (subject 'I'). Suggestion: Keep verb forms consistent and use present simple for habitual actions.

× I use the reminders apps on my phones to record important events and the important text is that me notifications before the event started which can help me to stay organized and also to manage my daily schedule effectively.

✓ I use reminder apps on my phone to record important events, and the important thing is that they notify me before the event starts, which helps me stay organized and manage my daily schedule effectively.

Use 'reminder apps' (no 'the') and singular 'phone'. 'The important text is that me notifications' is ungrammatical; replace with 'the important thing is that they notify me'. Use present simple 'starts' for scheduled events and 'helps' for subject-verb agreement. Remove redundant 'to'. Suggestion: Use 'the important thing is that they notify me before the event starts' and ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents.