Snacks— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct minor grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason or detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition like “at night” twice.

Exemplo: I usually snack in the evening after work. For example, I often crave something sweet or salty around 9 pm, so I tend to have ice cream or chips then.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use linking words to connect cause and effect. Correct clause structure and punctuation, and give one specific consequence with a brief explanation.

Exemplo: No, it isn’t healthy for me. Because I snack a lot, I’ve gained over 10 kilograms and now I often feel tired and heavy, which affects my energy at work.

Sugestão: Give a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence and a specific comparison using a linking word (e.g., “however” or “now”). Avoid fragmented or unclear phrases.

Exemplo: When I was young, I ate snacks occasionally but not very often. However, now I snack more frequently because of work-related stress and late evenings.

Sugestão: Use idioms correctly and provide a concise explanation with one specific detail. Correct tense and word order, and limit to two to three sentences.

Exemplo: I like chips and ice cream. They’re my weakness, and once I start eating them I find it hard to stop, so I usually try to limit myself to a small portion.

× I normally eat snacks at night, especially after work.

✓ I usually eat snacks at night, especially after work.

The sentence uses 'normally' which is acceptable, but 'usually' is more natural in this context when describing habitual actions; this is a stylistic suggestion rather than strict grammar. Keep present simple for habitual actions. Use 'usually' to sound more natural.

× I don't know why but at night time I always crave snacks so I tend to binge on ice creams or chips.

✓ I don't know why, but at night I always crave snacks, so I tend to binge on ice cream or chips.

Punctuation added for clarity. Use 'at night' instead of 'at night time' and 'ice cream' as an uncountable noun; 'ice creams' is acceptable when referring to types, but 'ice cream' fits better here. Present simple is correct for habitual actions.

× No definitely not Snacks already negatively affected me.

✓ No, definitely not. Snacks have already affected me negatively.

The original mixes tenses and lacks punctuation. Use present perfect 'have affected' to show a past action with present relevance. Move 'negatively' after the verb or before 'affected' depending on emphasis. Add commas and periods to separate clauses.

× I already gained more than 10 kilograms and I feel tired and heavy.

✓ I have already gained more than 10 kilograms, and I feel tired and heavy.

Use present perfect 'have gained' to indicate a change that has occurred up to now. Keep 'feel' in present simple to describe current state. Add comma before conjunction for readability.

× Yes, but not that often. I have it's an just like a normal person.

✓ Yes, but not that often. I am just like a normal person.

The phrase 'I have it's an just like a normal person' is ungrammatical. Likely intended 'I'm just like a normal person.' Use subject 'I' + verb 'am' and adjective phrase 'just like a normal person.' Remove unnecessary contractions and words.

× I think I get more frequently in these days compared to the past.

✓ I think I get snack cravings more frequently these days compared to the past.

The original misorders words and uses 'in these days' incorrectly. Use 'these days' without 'in' and place the object 'snack cravings' after the verb 'get' for clarity. Present simple 'get' is acceptable for habitual frequency; 'more frequently' correctly modifies the verb.

× Chips and ice creams are cup of my tea.

✓ Chips and ice cream are my cup of tea.

Use the idiom 'my cup of tea' to mean 'things I like.' 'Cup of my tea' is incorrect word order. Also use 'ice cream' (uncountable) here. Alternatively, 'Chips and ice cream are a cup of tea I like' is wordy; stick to the idiom.

× I really love them so when I started I can't stop eating.

✓ I really love them, so once I start I can't stop eating.

Tense consistency and word choice: use present simple 'once I start' to describe a habitual reaction, and 'can't' for present inability. 'When I started' (past) conflicts with 'can't' (present). Also add comma for readability.