Weather— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence describing the climate, then give one or two specific contrasting examples using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: We have four distinct seasons, and the weather changes a lot throughout the year. For example, summers are usually scorching and humid, while winters can be snowy and very chilly. Overall, the climate is fairly mild in spring and autumn, but extremes occur in summer and winter.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give a clear reason and a short specific example. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., 'many sports' or 'outdoor sports' rather than 'marrying sports') and correct prepositions.

Exemplo: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy outdoor sports. For instance, in summer my brother and I go to the beaches in Carnival Prefecture to surf together.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use natural phrases: 'I prefer dry weather' then give a concise, grammatically correct reason and a specific past experience. Avoid informal contractions like 'wanna' and incorrect phrases like 'meet and moisture'.

Exemplo: I prefer dry weather because I don't like high humidity. When I lived in Indonesia, the daily hot and humid conditions made me uncomfortable, so I would rather live in a drier place.

Sugestão: Provide a clear, concise statement about frequency and method, then a brief reason. Use correct verb tenses and natural expressions (e.g., 'check the forecast every morning' and 'so I don't get caught in the rain'). Keep it to two or three sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning on my phone app to see the chance of rain. I do this so I know whether to bring an umbrella and avoid getting soaked.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement about your view, then give a specific and grammatically correct example or evidence. Use linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'as a result') and avoid vague phrases like 'it was there'.

Exemplo: I think climate change is making the climate more extreme because of global warming. For example, summers are now often above 30°C on many days, whereas ten years ago such high temperatures were less common.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly, then give one or two specific reasons or examples. Use natural phrases like 'different climates' and concrete benefits (e.g., see different landscapes or wildlife). Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I would definitely like to visit cities with different climates. For example, visiting a cold, snowy region would let me see unique wildlife and landscapes that I can't experience at home.

× The weather here is relatively a calm warm with The Four Seasons.

✓ The weather here is relatively calm and warm, with four distinct seasons.

Word order and word choice are incorrect. 'a calm warm' should be 'calm and warm' to coordinate two adjectives; 'The Four Seasons' is unnecessary capitalized and phrased oddly—use 'four distinct seasons'. Use commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: place adjectives in correct order (opinion before descriptive) and join them with 'and'.

× Depending on the season when I am in the weather changes.

✓ Depending on the season, the weather where I am changes.

Sentence is ungrammatical and word order is wrong. 'When I am in' is redundant. Place 'depending on the season' at start and follow with subject 'the weather' and verb 'changes'. Suggestion: keep a clear subject and verb and avoid unnecessary phrases.

× For example in summer it's scorching hot while in winter season it's snowy and some very chilly.

✓ For example, in summer it's scorching hot, while in winter it's snowy and very chilly.

Awkward phrasing 'winter season' and 'some very chilly' are incorrect. Use 'in winter' and 'very chilly' as an adverb modifying the adjective. Ensure punctuation separates clauses. Suggestion: simplify 'winter season' to 'winter' and remove 'some'. Use commas to join clauses.

× For hot weather, to be honest, because I am so into marrying sports, when summer comes, I go to beaches in Carnival Prefecture to enjoy surfing with my brother.

✓ I prefer hot weather, to be honest, because I am into marine sports; when summer comes, I go to the beaches in Carnival Prefecture to enjoy surfing with my brother.

'Marrying sports' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'marine' or 'maritime'. Also sentence structure is awkward: begin with 'I prefer' to answer the question. Use 'the beaches' for specificity and correct noun 'marine sports'. Suggestion: start with the preference and use correct vocabulary ('marine sports'). Use semicolon or separate sentences for clarity.

× I prefer dry weather because I really hate to meet and moisture weather.

✓ I prefer dry weather because I really hate humid and moist weather.

'to meet and moisture weather' is incorrect. Use adjectives 'humid' or 'moist' to describe weather. 'Meet' is the wrong verb here. Suggestion: use correct adjectives for weather conditions and avoid literal verbs like 'meet'.

× When I was living in Indonesia, every day I was so annoyed by the hot, hot and humid weather, so I'm do not wanna live in the humid weather area.

✓ When I was living in Indonesia, I was annoyed every day by the hot, humid weather, so I don't want to live in a humid area.

Mixes past and present incorrectly and contains informal contractions. 'I'm do not wanna' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't want'. Use 'a humid area' with an article. Remove repeated 'hot'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past for past experience) and use standard contractions or full forms ('do not' or 'don't'). Use articles correctly.

× Every day I took the precipitation forecast and check whether or not I should bring an umbrella with me.

✓ Every day I check the precipitation forecast to see whether I should bring an umbrella with me.

Tense mismatch: 'took' (past) with 'check' (present). For habitual action use present simple: 'I check'. Also 'to see whether or not' can be shortened to 'to see whether'. Suggestion: use present simple for routines and keep verb forms consistent.

× If I catch in, I'm caught in the rain. I will have to be soaked in the water.

✓ If I get caught in the rain, I will get soaked.

'If I catch in' and 'I'm caught in the rain' are awkward. Use the phrasal verb 'get caught in the rain'. 'Soaked in the water' is redundant; 'get soaked' suffices. Suggestion: use common phrasal verbs and concise phrasing.

× So in order to escape from that situation, I always try to check the weather focused.

✓ So to avoid that situation, I always try to check the weather in advance.

'Check the weather focused' is ungrammatical and misplaces adverb/adjective. Use 'in advance' to express checking before the event. 'Escape from that situation' is wordy; 'avoid' is better. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'check the weather in advance'.

× Think the climate is deteriorating due to the global warming.

✓ I think the climate is deteriorating due to global warming.

Missing subject 'I' and extra article 'the' before 'global warming' is unnecessary. Use 'global warming' without 'the'. Suggestion: include the subject and correct article usage.

× For example in the summer season in most of the days the temperature exceeds more than 30°C while in like 10 years ago it was there.

✓ For example, in summer on most days the temperature exceeds 30°C, while about ten years ago it did not.

Awkward phrasing and tense issues. 'Exceeds more than' is redundant; use 'exceeds'. 'In like 10 years ago it was there' is ungrammatical—replace with 'about ten years ago it did not'. Use past simple for past states. Suggestion: avoid redundancy and use clear time expressions ('about ten years ago').

× So I definitely would like to visit other cities that have different climates types.

✓ I would definitely like to visit other cities that have different climate types.

'Climates types' is incorrect pluralization and noun order; use 'climate types'. 'So' at start is unnecessary. Suggestion: use correct noun phrases and avoid redundant sentence starters.

× If I visit the areas with different climates, I can see a lot of different grounds and animals that they that live in the other type of climate category.

✓ If I visit areas with different climates, I can see many different landscapes and animals that live in those climates.

Several errors: 'grounds' is wrong—use 'landscapes' or 'terrain'; 'a lot of different' is informal—use 'many different'; 'that they that live' is repetitive; 'the other type of climate category' is wordy—use 'those climates'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns ('landscapes') and simplify relative clauses.