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질문: Do people have to spend a lot of money to relax?

아이디어 1

Yes - Spending a Lot of Money
Yes - Spending a Lot of Money
모범 답안
I think it definitely helps. It's good to treat ourselves sometimes, but it can cost a lot. If we want to travel somewhere easy and relaxing, going in luxury is great. Everything is taken care of, so we don't have to worry about anything and can just focus on ourselves.
I think it definitely helps. It's good to treat ourselves sometimes, but it can cost a lot. If we want to travel somewhere easy and relaxing, going in luxury is great. Everything is taken care of, so we don't have to worry about anything and can just focus on ourselves.
I think it definitely helps. It’s nice to pamper ourselves sometimes but to do this, we need to spend some real money. If we want a change of scenery and go traveling somewhere that is hassle-free, then traveling in luxury is the perfect way to relax. We don’t need to worry about anything as everything is provided and this means we can just focus on ourselves.
I think it definitely helps. It’s nice to pamper ourselves sometimes but to do this, we need to spend some real money. If we want a change of scenery and go traveling somewhere that is hassle-free, then traveling in luxury is the perfect way to relax. We don’t need to worry about anything as everything is provided and this means we can just focus on ourselves.
문법 분석
Infinitive as adverbial of purpose: "to pamper ourselves" uses an infinitive to express the purpose of pampering ourselves, increasing the logical and intentional nature of the sentence. Conditional sentence: "If we want a change of scenery" uses a conditional sentence to describe the choice when wanting a change of environment, enhancing the situational adaptability and diversity of the sentence. Past participle as an attributive: "traveling in luxury" with "luxury" as a past participle adjective modifying "traveling," adding detail and description to the sentence.
어휘
  • pamper
    pamper
  • hassle-free
    hassle-free
  • traveling in luxury
    traveling in luxury
  • a change of scenery
    a change of scenery
  • focus on ourselves
    focus on ourselves

아이디어 2

No - Not Necessary to Spend Much
No - Not Necessary to Spend Much
모범 답안
No, not really. Most things that help us relax are free. Reading a book or going for a walk doesn't cost much and is good for de-stressing. The internet has lots of free relaxation methods like yoga and breathing videos, so we don't need to spend money to relax.
No, not really. Most things that help us relax are free. Reading a book or going for a walk doesn't cost much and is good for de-stressing. The internet has lots of free relaxation methods like yoga and breathing videos, so we don't need to spend money to relax.
No, not really. Most of the things that we appreciate and help us to unwind are free. Just picking up a book or going for a walk are inexpensive activities that are great ways to destress. The internet also has a plethora of free relaxation methods like yoga and breathing videos we can do, so we don’t necessarily need to spend anything.
No, not really. Most of the things that we appreciate and help us to unwind are free. Just picking up a book or going for a walk are inexpensive activities that are great ways to destress. The internet also has a plethora of free relaxation methods like yoga and breathing videos we can do, so we don’t necessarily need to spend anything.
문법 분석
Using present participles as subjects, "picking up a book" and "going for a walk" as present participle phrases, used as subjects, describe simple and effective relaxation activities, adding descriptiveness and practicality to the sentence. Relative clause: "that we appreciate and help us to unwind" modifies "things," providing additional information about these things, increasing the specificity and depth of the sentence. Infinitive as adverbial: "to destress" serves as a purpose adverbial, explaining the reason for engaging in these activities, adding purpose and logic to the sentence.
어휘
  • appreciate
    appreciate
  • unwind
    unwind
  • picking up a book
    picking up a book
  • inexpensive
    inexpensive
  • destress
    destress
  • plethora
    plethora
  • necessarily
    necessarily

아이디어 3

It Depends - Varies by Individual
It Depends - Varies by Individual
모범 답안
I suppose it depends on what people like to do. Everyone relaxes differently, and what works for one person might not for another. But it's important to put mental well-being first, even over the cost. If extravagant holidays are what someone needs to relax, then they should try to do it when they can.
I suppose it depends on what people like to do. Everyone relaxes differently, and what works for one person might not for another. But it's important to put mental well-being first, even over the cost. If extravagant holidays are what someone needs to relax, then they should try to do it when they can.
I suppose it depends on what you people like to do. Everyone relaxes in different ways and what is good for one person may not work for another. I think it’s key though that people prioritize their mental well-being over the cost of whatever it is that helps them. If going on extravagant holidays is what works for someone, then they should try and do this when they can.
I suppose it depends on what you people like to do. Everyone relaxes in different ways and what is good for one person may not work for another. I think it’s key though that people prioritize their mental well-being over the cost of whatever it is that helps them. If going on extravagant holidays is what works for someone, then they should try and do this when they can.
문법 분석
"If going on extravagant holidays is what works for someone" Using a conditional sentence to discuss choices in specific situations adds context and applicability to the sentence. Gerund phrase as subject: "prioritizing their mental well-being" used as a gerund phrase functioning as the subject, emphasizing the importance of personal mental health. Infinitive verb: "to do" used as a purpose adverbial, indicating the purpose of trying a specific activity, adding specificity and motivation description to the sentence.
어휘
  • what is good for one person may not work for another
    what is good for one person may not work for another
  • mental well-being
    mental well-being
  • prioritize
    prioritize
  • extravagant
    extravagant