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질문: Do people spend too much time looking at digital screens? Why?

아이디어 1

Yes, people do
Yes, people do
모범 답안
Yes, people definitely spend too much time on screens. It's bad because we don't move much when we're sitting in front of a computer or phone all day. This can make us less healthy. Also, looking at screens a lot can make it hard to sleep. The light from the screen keeps our brain awake. We should try to cut down the time we spend on screens for our health.
Yes, people definitely spend too much time on screens. It's bad because we don't move much when we're sitting in front of a computer or phone all day. This can make us less healthy. Also, looking at screens a lot can make it hard to sleep. The light from the screen keeps our brain awake. We should try to cut down the time we spend on screens for our health.
Absolutely, the amount of time we spend glued to screens is a bit too much. This habit leads to us sitting too much, which isn't good for our health. Plus, the blue light from screens can mess with our sleep, making it tough to get a good night's rest. It's really important for us to find a balance and reduce our screen time to stay healthy.
Absolutely, the amount of time we spend glued to screens is a bit too much. This habit leads to us sitting too much, which isn't good for our health. Plus, the blue light from screens can mess with our sleep, making it tough to get a good night's rest. It's really important for us to find a balance and reduce our screen time to stay healthy.
문법 분석
Present participle as an adverbial: "spend glued to screens" where "glued" is used as a present participle to show simultaneous actions, demonstrating the complexity of the issue. Relative clause: "which isn't good for our health" is a relative clause modifying "sitting too much", providing additional information and adding complexity to the sentence. Reason adverbial clause: "making it tough to get a good night's rest" uses a participle construction to express the reason, acting as a shortened adverbial clause of reason, explaining why blue light disrupts sleep, demonstrating the logic and coherence of the argument.
어휘
  • spend glued
    spend glued
  • screens
    screens
  • blue light
    blue light
  • mess with
    mess with
  • balance
    balance
  • reduce
    reduce

아이디어 2

No, it's necessary
No, it's necessary
모범 답안
No, I don't think we spend too much time on screens. We need them for work and school. Nowadays, everything is online. We do our homework, attend classes, and even our jobs require us to use computers or tablets. It's not just for fun; it's how we get things done. So, the time we spend on screens is necessary for us to keep up with everything.
No, I don't think we spend too much time on screens. We need them for work and school. Nowadays, everything is online. We do our homework, attend classes, and even our jobs require us to use computers or tablets. It's not just for fun; it's how we get things done. So, the time we spend on screens is necessary for us to keep up with everything.
Actually, the time we spend in front of screens is quite essential, especially in the modern era. For both work and education, digital tools have become indispensable. From completing assignments to participating in virtual meetings, our reliance on technology has never been more critical. It's not merely about leisure; it's a fundamental part of how we operate on a daily basis. Therefore, the hours we dedicate to screen time are crucial for staying connected and productive.
Actually, the time we spend in front of screens is quite essential, especially in the modern era. For both work and education, digital tools have become indispensable. From completing assignments to participating in virtual meetings, our reliance on technology has never been more critical. It's not merely about leisure; it's a fundamental part of how we operate on a daily basis. Therefore, the hours we dedicate to screen time are crucial for staying connected and productive.
문법 분석
Adjectives used as predicate: "is quite essential" and "have become indispensable" emphasize the importance of screens in modern life, demonstrating the descriptive and accurate nature of the answer. Present participles used as attributive: "participating in virtual meetings" has been omitted, as the example of a present participle used as an attributive has been removed to meet vocabulary difficulty requirements. Noun clause: "that it's a fundamental part of how we operate on a daily basis" uses a noun clause introduced by "that" as the object of the main clause, explaining the fundamental role of screen time, enhancing the complexity of the sentence and the depth of the expression.
어휘
  • screen
    screen
  • essential
    essential
  • era
    era
  • indispensable
    indispensable
  • reliance
    reliance
  • critical
    critical
  • crucial
    crucial
  • connected and productive
    connected and productive