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질문: What factors lead to success?
아이디어 1
Hard Work and Perseverance
Hard Work and Perseverance
모범 답안
I think hard work and perseverance are really important for success. If someone keeps working hard and doesn’t give up, they have a better chance to reach their goals. For example, many famous athletes or business people failed many times before they finally succeeded. Hard work also helps people get better at what they do and learn from their mistakes.
I think hard work and perseverance are really important for success. If someone keeps working hard and doesn’t give up, they have a better chance to reach their goals. For example, many famous athletes or business people failed many times before they finally succeeded. Hard work also helps people get better at what they do and learn from their mistakes.
아이디어 2
Education and Skills
Education and Skills
모범 답안
Education and skills are also very important for success. If people have a good education or learn useful skills, they can get better jobs and have more chances in life. For example, if someone learns English, they might be able to work for an international company. It’s also important to keep learning new things because the world is changing fast.
Education and skills are also very important for success. If people have a good education or learn useful skills, they can get better jobs and have more chances in life. For example, if someone learns English, they might be able to work for an international company. It’s also important to keep learning new things because the world is changing fast.
아이디어 3
Support from Others
Support from Others
모범 답안
Support from others is also a big factor. Family, friends, or teachers can give advice and encouragement, which helps people keep going when things are tough. For example, students who get help from their parents or teachers often do better in school. Working together with others is also important in many jobs.
Support from others is also a big factor. Family, friends, or teachers can give advice and encouragement, which helps people keep going when things are tough. For example, students who get help from their parents or teachers often do better in school. Working together with others is also important in many jobs.
아이디어 4
Luck and Opportunities
Luck and Opportunities
모범 답안
I think luck and opportunities also matter. Sometimes, people succeed because they are in the right place at the right time or meet the right person. But I think people also need to be ready to take these chances. Some people say luck is more important than hard work, but I think both are needed.
I think luck and opportunities also matter. Sometimes, people succeed because they are in the right place at the right time or meet the right person. But I think people also need to be ready to take these chances. Some people say luck is more important than hard work, but I think both are needed.