A surprise party When and where the party was held I'm going to talk about a surprise party I held about six months ago for my best friend. I held it in my apartment, which is quite small. Who attended the party I invited ten close friends from our course at university and we all arrived about an hour before my best friend did so we could set everything up. There was so much to do but we all worked together to decorate the room and prepare the food. What kind of party it was As I said, it was a surprise party so my best friend had no idea about it. She was turning 21 and going to move abroad soon so it was the last chance to celebrate with her for a while. I took a photo of her as she walked in and it's the moment we've just turned the lights on to surprise her. She looks really shocked and it captures the exact moment that everyone shouted 'surprise'. It's such a great photo although she thinks she looks really weird. What you did at the party I had told her she could come for dinner and so we prepared a feast. We had such a good time all together, eating, drinking and dancing. Explain why you enjoyed the party It was the first time I'd thrown a surprise party and it was such a success. She had no idea about it and she was so grateful. It's such a great memory. It was a lot of work though so I don't know if I'd volunteer to do it again, but it was certainly worth the effort.

A couple of years ago, I attended a delightful garden party to celebrate a close friend's engagement. The event took place in her expansive backyard, beautifully adorned with twinkling fairy lights and vibrant flower arrangements. It was a summer evening, and the atmosphere was nothing short of magical. The party was essentially a casual get-together but had an elegant touch to it. The diverse mix of people, from family members to college friends, contributed to a convivial vibe. What made the party stand out was the live acoustic music that added a sense of serenity, counterbalancing the jovial laughter and animated conversations. As for why I enjoyed the party, multiple factors came into play. First and foremost, the ambience was welcoming, making everyone feel instantly at home. Secondly, the host had put meticulous effort into planning, evident from the array of delectable appetizers to the inventive cocktail menu. Last but not least, the evening was brimming with heartwarming moments. The couple exchanged personalized vows, and you could sense the palpable emotion in the air, making the celebration not just fun but profoundly meaningful. In essence, the party was an amalgamation of excellent company, scrumptious food, and an atmosphere imbued with love and happiness. It's an experience that holds a special place in my heart, one I fondly reminisce about.

비제한적인 관계절의 적용: 예를 들어, "the event took place in her expansive backyard, beautifully adorned with twinkling fairy lights and vibrant flower arrangements"에서 "beautifully adorned with twinkling fairy lights and vibrant flower arrangements"는 "her expansive backyard"를 더 설명하기 위한 비제한적인 관계절로, 더 풍부한 묘사를 더했습니다. 형용사와 부사의 적절한 조합: 예를 들어, "essentially a casual get-together but had an elegant touch to it"에서 "essentially"와 "elegant touch"를 사용하여 파티의 스타일을 정확하고 생동감 있게 묘사했습니다. 평행 구조의 사용: "the party was an amalgamation of excellent company, scrumptious food, and an atmosphere imbued with love and happiness"에서 "excellent company, scrumptious food, and an atmosphere"가 평행 구조를 이루어 문장을 더 유창하고 강력하게 만들었습니다. 조건절과 주절의 결합: 예를 들어, "If the weather is fine, I usually head there on weekends"에서는 조건절을 사용하며, 주절과 자연스럽게 결합하여 문장의 복잡성을 더했습니다. 고급 어휘와 복합 문장의 결합: "It's an experience that holds a special place in my heart, one I fondly reminisce about"에서 "that holds a special place in my heart"를 관계절로 사용하고 뒤에 "one I fondly reminisce about"을 추가하여 표현의 깊이와 정확성을 더했습니다.