밴드 7 예시

질문: Is there any technology you don't like?

아이디어 1

Social Media Platforms
Social Media Platforms
모범 답안
I don't really like social media platforms. They take up a lot of time and can be addictive. Plus, there's always a worry about privacy and how they use our data.
I don't really like social media platforms. They take up a lot of time and can be addictive. Plus, there's always a worry about privacy and how they use our data.
I'm not a fan of social media platforms. They can be incredibly addictive and time-consuming, and I have serious concerns about privacy and data sharing. Additionally, the pressure to maintain a certain image can negatively impact mental health.
I'm not a fan of social media platforms. They can be incredibly addictive and time-consuming, and I have serious concerns about privacy and data sharing. Additionally, the pressure to maintain a certain image can negatively impact mental health.
문법 분석
1.Usage of adjectives: The use of adjectives like "addictive" and "time-consuming" effectively conveys the negative aspects of social media platforms. 2.Cause and effect structure: The sentence "the pressure to maintain a certain image can negatively impact mental health" uses a cause and effect structure to explain the consequences of using social media.
어휘
  • addictive and time-consuming
    addictive and time-consuming
  • privacy and data sharing
    privacy and data sharing
  • negatively impact mental health
    negatively impact mental health

아이디어 2

Smartphones
Smartphones
모범 답안
I think smartphones can be annoying. People are always looking at their screens, even when they're with friends. The notifications can be too much, and they're expensive to keep up with.
I think smartphones can be annoying. People are always looking at their screens, even when they're with friends. The notifications can be too much, and they're expensive to keep up with.
I find smartphones somewhat problematic. People seem glued to their screens, even in social settings, which can be quite distracting. The constant barrage of notifications can be overwhelming, and keeping up with the latest models is quite expensive.
I find smartphones somewhat problematic. People seem glued to their screens, even in social settings, which can be quite distracting. The constant barrage of notifications can be overwhelming, and keeping up with the latest models is quite expensive.
문법 분석
1.Usage of adjectives: The answer uses adjectives like "problematic," "distracting," "overwhelming," and "expensive" to express opinions and describe the negative aspects of smartphones. 2.Usage of present simple tense: The present simple tense is used to describe general opinions and habitual actions, such as "People seem glued to their screens."
어휘
  • glued to their screens
    glued to their screens
  • distracting
    distracting
  • barrage of notifications
    barrage of notifications
  • overwhelming
    overwhelming
  • expensive
    expensive

아이디어 3

Artificial Intelligence
Artificial Intelligence
모범 답안
I'm worried about artificial intelligence. It might take jobs away from people, and sometimes it makes decisions without humans checking. It feels a bit risky.
I'm worried about artificial intelligence. It might take jobs away from people, and sometimes it makes decisions without humans checking. It feels a bit risky.
I have reservations about artificial intelligence. There's a fear of job displacement due to automation, and I'm concerned about AI making decisions without human oversight. The lack of transparency in AI algorithms and potential misuse in warfare or security are also troubling issues.
I have reservations about artificial intelligence. There's a fear of job displacement due to automation, and I'm concerned about AI making decisions without human oversight. The lack of transparency in AI algorithms and potential misuse in warfare or security are also troubling issues.
문법 분석
1.Noun phrases: The response effectively uses noun phrases like "fear of job displacement" and "lack of transparency" to concisely express complex ideas. 2.Use of conjunctions: "and" is used to connect multiple concerns, showing the ability to list and organize ideas logically.
어휘
  • reservations
    reservations
  • job displacement
    job displacement
  • automation
    automation
  • oversight
    oversight
  • transparency
    transparency
  • misuse
    misuse
  • warfare
    warfare
  • security
    security
  • troubling issues
    troubling issues