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질문: What was your childhood dream?

아이디어 1

To be a teacher
To be a teacher
모범 답안
When I was a child, I wanted to be a teacher. I really liked my teachers at school and wanted to be like them. I also enjoyed playing 'teacher' with my friends at home.
When I was a child, I wanted to be a teacher. I really liked my teachers at school and wanted to be like them. I also enjoyed playing 'teacher' with my friends at home.
My childhood dream was to become a teacher. I admired my teachers so much and wanted to be just like them. I loved the idea of helping others learn new things, and I used to play 'teacher' with my friends all the time at home.
My childhood dream was to become a teacher. I admired my teachers so much and wanted to be just like them. I loved the idea of helping others learn new things, and I used to play 'teacher' with my friends all the time at home.
문법 분석
1. Past simple tense: The answer consistently uses the past simple tense ("was," "admired," "wanted," "loved," "used to play") to describe past experiences and feelings, which is appropriate for talking about childhood dreams. 2. "Used to" structure: The phrase "used to play 'teacher'" correctly shows a repeated action in the past, demonstrating good control of this structure.
어휘
  • admired
    admired
  • helping others learn new things
    helping others learn new things
  • used to play 'teacher'
    used to play 'teacher'

아이디어 2

To be a doctor
To be a doctor
모범 답안
As a kid, I dreamed of being a doctor. I thought it would be great to help sick people get better, and my parents always said it was a good job.
As a kid, I dreamed of being a doctor. I thought it would be great to help sick people get better, and my parents always said it was a good job.
When I was young, I dreamed of becoming a doctor. I wanted to help sick people get better, and my parents encouraged me to think about a stable and respected job. I was also inspired by TV shows about doctors.
When I was young, I dreamed of becoming a doctor. I wanted to help sick people get better, and my parents encouraged me to think about a stable and respected job. I was also inspired by TV shows about doctors.
문법 분석
1. Past simple tense: The answer uses past simple tense ("dreamed," "wanted," "encouraged," "was inspired") to talk about childhood experiences, which is appropriate for describing past events. 2. Use of infinitive: "to help sick people get better" and "to think about a stable and respected job" correctly use infinitive forms to express purpose and intention.
어휘
  • dreamed of becoming
    dreamed of becoming
  • help sick people get better
    help sick people get better
  • encouraged me
    encouraged me
  • stable and respected job
    stable and respected job
  • inspired by
    inspired by

아이디어 3

To be an artist
To be an artist
모범 답안
I wanted to be an artist when I was little because I loved drawing and painting. My family always said I was creative, and I dreamed of having my own art studio.
I wanted to be an artist when I was little because I loved drawing and painting. My family always said I was creative, and I dreamed of having my own art studio.
My childhood dream was to be an artist. I absolutely loved drawing and painting as a child, and my family always praised my creativity. I used to imagine having my own art studio one day.
My childhood dream was to be an artist. I absolutely loved drawing and painting as a child, and my family always praised my creativity. I used to imagine having my own art studio one day.
문법 분석
1. Past simple tense: The answer uses the past simple tense ("was," "loved," "praised," "used to imagine") to describe past experiences and dreams, which is appropriate for talking about childhood. 2. Use of "used to": The phrase "I used to imagine" correctly expresses a repeated action or habit in the past, showing good command of past habitual actions.
어휘
  • praised my creativity
    praised my creativity
  • imagine having my own art studio
    imagine having my own art studio
  • absolutely loved
    absolutely loved

아이디어 4

To be a singer or performer
To be a singer or performer
모범 답안
I wanted to be a singer when I was a kid. I liked singing and dancing in front of my family and wanted to be on stage.
I wanted to be a singer when I was a kid. I liked singing and dancing in front of my family and wanted to be on stage.
As a child, I dreamed of being a singer or performer. I enjoyed singing and dancing in front of my family, and I always imagined myself performing on stage, just like the people I saw on talent shows.
As a child, I dreamed of being a singer or performer. I enjoyed singing and dancing in front of my family, and I always imagined myself performing on stage, just like the people I saw on talent shows.
문법 분석
1. Past Simple Tense: The answer uses the past simple tense ("dreamed," "enjoyed," "imagined") to talk about childhood experiences, which is appropriate for describing past events. 2. Use of "just like": The phrase "just like the people I saw on talent shows" is a comparative structure that adds detail and helps paint a clear picture for the listener.
어휘
  • dreamed of being
    dreamed of being
  • performer
    performer
  • imagined myself
    imagined myself
  • performing on stage
    performing on stage
  • talent shows
    talent shows