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질문: Would you like to see more parks in your city?

아이디어 1

Yes
Yes
모범 답안
Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. Parks are good places to relax and get away from the busy city life. They also help make the air cleaner and give people a place to exercise or take their kids to play.
Yes, I would like to see more parks in my city. Parks are good places to relax and get away from the busy city life. They also help make the air cleaner and give people a place to exercise or take their kids to play.
Yes, I’d definitely like to see more parks in my city. Parks provide a great escape from the hustle and bustle of city life, and having more green spaces would mean cleaner air and a more beautiful environment. Plus, they’re perfect for exercising or spending time with family and friends.
Yes, I’d definitely like to see more parks in my city. Parks provide a great escape from the hustle and bustle of city life, and having more green spaces would mean cleaner air and a more beautiful environment. Plus, they’re perfect for exercising or spending time with family and friends.
문법 분석
1. Modal verb: "I’d definitely like to see" uses the modal verb "would" (contracted as "I’d"), which is natural and polite for expressing wishes or preferences. 2. Conditional structure: "having more green spaces would mean cleaner air and a more beautiful environment" uses a second conditional structure to talk about hypothetical benefits, showing good control of complex grammar. 3. Parallel structure: "exercising or spending time with family and friends" uses parallelism to list activities, making the sentence clear and fluent.
어휘
  • escape from the hustle and bustle
    escape from the hustle and bustle
  • green spaces
    green spaces
  • cleaner air
    cleaner air
  • beautiful environment
    beautiful environment
  • exercising
    exercising
  • spending time with family and friends
    spending time with family and friends

아이디어 2

No
No
모범 답안
No, I think there are already enough parks in my city. I don’t really go to parks much, so having more wouldn’t really affect me. I think the city should focus on other things, like better public transport.
No, I think there are already enough parks in my city. I don’t really go to parks much, so having more wouldn’t really affect me. I think the city should focus on other things, like better public transport.
No, I don’t think we need more parks in my city. To be honest, I rarely visit parks myself, so it wouldn’t make much difference to me. I feel the city should prioritize other improvements, such as upgrading public transport or building more schools.
No, I don’t think we need more parks in my city. To be honest, I rarely visit parks myself, so it wouldn’t make much difference to me. I feel the city should prioritize other improvements, such as upgrading public transport or building more schools.
문법 분석
1. Use of modal verbs: "should" is used to express opinion and suggestion, which is appropriate for IELTS Speaking Part 1. 2. Use of conditional: "so it wouldn’t make much difference to me" uses the conditional to express a hypothetical situation, showing a good grasp of grammar for expressing personal impact.
어휘
  • rarely visit parks
    rarely visit parks
  • prioritize other improvements
    prioritize other improvements
  • upgrading public transport
    upgrading public transport
  • building more schools
    building more schools