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주제: Describe a music event that you didn't enjoy
예제
Step 1: Identify the Part 2 question requirements The question asks you to describe a music event that you did not enjoy. You should mention: - What the event was - Who you went with - Why you decided to go - And explain why you didn’t enjoy it Step 2: Strategies for a better answer - Expand your answer with details about the event, your expectations, and your feelings. - Maintain coherence by logically connecting each clue. - Paraphrase the question and use synonyms for variety. - Refer back to previous points to show connection. - Use signposting language to guide the listener. - Use a range of vocabulary related to music, emotions, and experiences. - Demonstrate a variety of grammar structures, including complex sentences and linking words. - Ensure the answer is more than 300 words and flows naturally. Topic:A disappointing music festival What it was The music event I’d like to talk about is a local music festival that took place in my city last summer. It was called “Summer Beats,” and it was advertised as a vibrant outdoor concert featuring several popular bands and solo artists from around the country. The event was held in a large open park, and there were multiple stages set up for different genres of music, ranging from pop and rock to electronic dance music. I had been looking forward to it for weeks because I thought it would be a fantastic opportunity to enjoy live performances and soak up the lively atmosphere. Who you went with I attended the festival with a group of my close friends. We had all bought our tickets together as soon as they went on sale, and we were really excited about spending the whole day at the event. Some of my friends are huge music fans, and they had even made a playlist of the artists who were scheduled to perform. We planned to meet early in the morning, grab some food from the food trucks, and then find a good spot near the main stage. Why you decided to go there The main reason I decided to go was because of the lineup of artists. There were a couple of bands that I had been wanting to see live for a long time, and I thought this festival would be the perfect chance. Additionally, I hadn’t been to a big music event since before the pandemic, so I was eager to experience the excitement of a live concert again. My friends also convinced me that it would be a memorable day out, and I didn’t want to miss out on the fun. And explain why you didn’t enjoy it Unfortunately, the reality didn’t live up to my expectations at all. First of all, the weather was terrible; it rained heavily for most of the day, which made the ground muddy and uncomfortable to stand on. The sound system at the main stage was also really poor, so it was hard to hear the singers clearly, and the music often sounded distorted. On top of that, the festival was overcrowded, and it was almost impossible to get close to the stage or even find a place to sit down. The food stalls had long queues, and when we finally got our food, it was cold and tasteless. To make matters worse, one of the headline bands canceled at the last minute, which was a huge disappointment. Overall, I felt frustrated and exhausted by the end of the day, and I realized that sometimes big events like this are not as enjoyable as they seem. Despite being with my friends, I couldn’t wait to go home, and I don’t think I’ll be attending another music festival anytime soon.
Step 1: Identify the Part 2 question requirements The question asks you to describe a music event that you did not enjoy. You should mention: - What the event was - Who you went with - Why you decided to go - And explain why you didn’t enjoy it Step 2: Strategies for a better answer - Expand your answer with details about the event, your expectations, and your feelings. - Maintain coherence by logically connecting each clue. - Paraphrase the question and use synonyms for variety. - Refer back to previous points to show connection. - Use signposting language to guide the listener. - Use a range of vocabulary related to music, emotions, and experiences. - Demonstrate a variety of grammar structures, including complex sentences and linking words. - Ensure the answer is more than 300 words and flows naturally. Topic:A disappointing music festival What it was The music event I’d like to talk about is a local music festival that took place in my city last summer. It was called “Summer Beats,” and it was advertised as a vibrant outdoor concert featuring several popular bands and solo artists from around the country. The event was held in a large open park, and there were multiple stages set up for different genres of music, ranging from pop and rock to electronic dance music. I had been looking forward to it for weeks because I thought it would be a fantastic opportunity to enjoy live performances and soak up the lively atmosphere. Who you went with I attended the festival with a group of my close friends. We had all bought our tickets together as soon as they went on sale, and we were really excited about spending the whole day at the event. Some of my friends are huge music fans, and they had even made a playlist of the artists who were scheduled to perform. We planned to meet early in the morning, grab some food from the food trucks, and then find a good spot near the main stage. Why you decided to go there The main reason I decided to go was because of the lineup of artists. There were a couple of bands that I had been wanting to see live for a long time, and I thought this festival would be the perfect chance. Additionally, I hadn’t been to a big music event since before the pandemic, so I was eager to experience the excitement of a live concert again. My friends also convinced me that it would be a memorable day out, and I didn’t want to miss out on the fun. And explain why you didn’t enjoy it Unfortunately, the reality didn’t live up to my expectations at all. First of all, the weather was terrible; it rained heavily for most of the day, which made the ground muddy and uncomfortable to stand on. The sound system at the main stage was also really poor, so it was hard to hear the singers clearly, and the music often sounded distorted. On top of that, the festival was overcrowded, and it was almost impossible to get close to the stage or even find a place to sit down. The food stalls had long queues, and when we finally got our food, it was cold and tasteless. To make matters worse, one of the headline bands canceled at the last minute, which was a huge disappointment. Overall, I felt frustrated and exhausted by the end of the day, and I realized that sometimes big events like this are not as enjoyable as they seem. Despite being with my friends, I couldn’t wait to go home, and I don’t think I’ll be attending another music festival anytime soon.
문법 분석
The answer uses a wide range of sentence structures, including complex and compound sentences, which help to provide detailed explanations and maintain coherence. For example, sentences like "Unfortunately, the reality didn’t live up to my expectations at all" and "We had all bought our tickets together as soon as they went on sale, and we were really excited about spending the whole day at the event" show good use of linking words and clauses. The answer also demonstrates accurate use of past tenses to describe the event and present perfect for experiences, such as "I had been looking forward to it for weeks" and "I haven’t been to a big music event since before the pandemic." Signposting language like "First of all," "On top of that," and "To make matters worse" helps organize the answer clearly. There is also effective use of relative clauses and conditional sentences, adding variety and depth to the grammar.
어휘
  • vibrant outdoor concert
    vibrant outdoor concert
  • live performances
    live performances
  • soak up the atmosphere
    soak up the atmosphere
  • lineup of artists
    lineup of artists
  • headline bands
    headline bands
  • distorted
    distorted
  • overcrowded
    overcrowded
  • queues
    queues
  • cold and tasteless
    cold and tasteless
  • didn’t live up to my expectations
    didn’t live up to my expectations
  • frustrated and exhausted
    frustrated and exhausted
  • memorable day out
    memorable day out