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주제: Describe a time you needed to use your imagination
예제
Step 1: Identify the Part 2 question requirements The question asks you to describe a time when you needed to use your imagination. You should cover: - When it was - Why you needed to use imagination - How difficult or easy it was - How you felt about it Step 2: Strategies for a better answer - Expand your answer with more details or extra stories: Include background information, specific examples, and perhaps the outcome of the situation. - Coherence is important: Make sure your story flows logically from one point to the next. - Paraphrasing: Restate the question in your own words to show language flexibility. - Referring: Refer back to earlier points in your story for cohesion. - Signposting: Use linking words and phrases to guide the listener. - Vocabulary needs to be appropriate as well as varied: Use descriptive adjectives and verbs. - Using synonyms or substitution: Avoid repeating the same words. - Demonstrating a range of grammar is key factor: Use a mix of tenses, conditionals, and complex sentences. - Whole Model Answer MUST be more than 300 words. Topic:A creative school project When it was I’d like to talk about a time when I really had to use my imagination, which was during my final year of high school. This happened about three years ago, when my English teacher assigned us a project that required us to write and perform a short play. The project took place over the course of a month, and we were given complete freedom to choose the topic, the characters, and even the setting. I remember feeling both excited and a bit nervous at the beginning because I had never written a play before, let alone performed one in front of my classmates. Why you needed to use imagination The reason I needed to use my imagination was that our teacher specifically told us not to base our play on any existing stories or movies. She wanted us to come up with something entirely original. This meant I couldn’t rely on familiar plots or characters, and I had to invent everything from scratch. My group and I brainstormed for hours, trying to come up with an idea that was unique and entertaining. Eventually, we decided to create a story about a group of students who discover a hidden door in their school that leads to a parallel universe. This concept allowed us to be as creative as we wanted with the plot twists and the personalities of the characters. How difficult or easy it was To be honest, I found the process quite challenging at first. Coming up with original ideas is never easy, especially when you’re under pressure to impress your classmates and your teacher. There were times when I felt stuck and doubted whether our story would make sense or be interesting enough. However, once we started writing the script and acting out different scenes, my imagination really started to flow. I realized that the more I let go of my fear of making mistakes, the easier it became to think outside the box and come up with creative solutions to problems in the story. How you felt about it Looking back, I felt incredibly proud of what we accomplished. Not only did we manage to write and perform a play that was completely original, but we also received a lot of positive feedback from our classmates and teacher. The experience taught me the value of imagination and creativity, and it gave me more confidence in my ability to tackle unfamiliar challenges. It was definitely a memorable experience, and I learned that sometimes, stepping out of your comfort zone and using your imagination can lead to amazing results.
Step 1: Identify the Part 2 question requirements The question asks you to describe a time when you needed to use your imagination. You should cover: - When it was - Why you needed to use imagination - How difficult or easy it was - How you felt about it Step 2: Strategies for a better answer - Expand your answer with more details or extra stories: Include background information, specific examples, and perhaps the outcome of the situation. - Coherence is important: Make sure your story flows logically from one point to the next. - Paraphrasing: Restate the question in your own words to show language flexibility. - Referring: Refer back to earlier points in your story for cohesion. - Signposting: Use linking words and phrases to guide the listener. - Vocabulary needs to be appropriate as well as varied: Use descriptive adjectives and verbs. - Using synonyms or substitution: Avoid repeating the same words. - Demonstrating a range of grammar is key factor: Use a mix of tenses, conditionals, and complex sentences. - Whole Model Answer MUST be more than 300 words. Topic:A creative school project When it was I’d like to talk about a time when I really had to use my imagination, which was during my final year of high school. This happened about three years ago, when my English teacher assigned us a project that required us to write and perform a short play. The project took place over the course of a month, and we were given complete freedom to choose the topic, the characters, and even the setting. I remember feeling both excited and a bit nervous at the beginning because I had never written a play before, let alone performed one in front of my classmates. Why you needed to use imagination The reason I needed to use my imagination was that our teacher specifically told us not to base our play on any existing stories or movies. She wanted us to come up with something entirely original. This meant I couldn’t rely on familiar plots or characters, and I had to invent everything from scratch. My group and I brainstormed for hours, trying to come up with an idea that was unique and entertaining. Eventually, we decided to create a story about a group of students who discover a hidden door in their school that leads to a parallel universe. This concept allowed us to be as creative as we wanted with the plot twists and the personalities of the characters. How difficult or easy it was To be honest, I found the process quite challenging at first. Coming up with original ideas is never easy, especially when you’re under pressure to impress your classmates and your teacher. There were times when I felt stuck and doubted whether our story would make sense or be interesting enough. However, once we started writing the script and acting out different scenes, my imagination really started to flow. I realized that the more I let go of my fear of making mistakes, the easier it became to think outside the box and come up with creative solutions to problems in the story. How you felt about it Looking back, I felt incredibly proud of what we accomplished. Not only did we manage to write and perform a play that was completely original, but we also received a lot of positive feedback from our classmates and teacher. The experience taught me the value of imagination and creativity, and it gave me more confidence in my ability to tackle unfamiliar challenges. It was definitely a memorable experience, and I learned that sometimes, stepping out of your comfort zone and using your imagination can lead to amazing results.
문법 분석
The answer demonstrates a strong command of grammar, with a good mix of simple, compound, and complex sentences. For example, "The project took place over the course of a month, and we were given complete freedom to choose the topic, the characters, and even the setting." There is effective use of past tenses to narrate the story, and present tense is used for reflection, such as "Looking back, I felt incredibly proud..." The answer also uses relative clauses ("which was during my final year of high school"), conditionals ("the more I let go of my fear... the easier it became..."), and participle clauses ("stepping out of your comfort zone and using your imagination..."). These structures add variety and sophistication to the response.
어휘
  • assigned us a project
    assigned us a project
  • perform a short play
    perform a short play
  • complete freedom
    complete freedom
  • invent everything from scratch
    invent everything from scratch
  • brainstormed
    brainstormed
  • unique and entertaining
    unique and entertaining
  • parallel universe
    parallel universe
  • plot twists
    plot twists
  • think outside the box
    think outside the box
  • positive feedback
    positive feedback
  • tackle unfamiliar challenges
    tackle unfamiliar challenges
  • stepping out of your comfort zone
    stepping out of your comfort zone