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질문: Is it good to reward children too often? Why?

아이디어 1

No, it’s not good to reward children too often
No, it’s not good to reward children too often
모범 답안
I don’t think it’s good to reward children too often. If kids get a prize every time they do something, they will start to expect it and might not want to do anything unless there’s a reward. This can make rewards less special and children might not learn to be responsible or work hard on their own. For example, if a child always gets candy for finishing homework, they might refuse to study if there’s no candy.
I don’t think it’s good to reward children too often. If kids get a prize every time they do something, they will start to expect it and might not want to do anything unless there’s a reward. This can make rewards less special and children might not learn to be responsible or work hard on their own. For example, if a child always gets candy for finishing homework, they might refuse to study if there’s no candy.
No, I don’t believe it’s a good idea to reward children too frequently. When children are constantly given rewards, they can become dependent on them and may only do things if there’s a prize involved. This reduces the value of the reward and can undermine their intrinsic motivation. Over time, they might not develop important qualities like self-discipline or responsibility. For instance, if a child receives candy every time they complete their homework, they may eventually refuse to study unless there’s a treat waiting for them.
No, I don’t believe it’s a good idea to reward children too frequently. When children are constantly given rewards, they can become dependent on them and may only do things if there’s a prize involved. This reduces the value of the reward and can undermine their intrinsic motivation. Over time, they might not develop important qualities like self-discipline or responsibility. For instance, if a child receives candy every time they complete their homework, they may eventually refuse to study unless there’s a treat waiting for them.
문법 분석
- Conditional sentences: "If a child receives candy every time they complete their homework, they may eventually refuse to study unless there’s a treat waiting for them." - Modal verbs for speculation: "may only do things," "can become dependent," "might not develop" - Present simple for general truths: "This reduces the value of the reward," "they can become dependent" - Passive voice: "are constantly given rewards"
어휘
  • reward
    reward
  • give incentives
    give incentives
  • offer prizes
    offer prizes
  • provide treats
    provide treats
  • grant recognition
    grant recognition
  • children
    children
  • youngsters
    youngsters
  • kids
    kids
  • minors
    minors
  • too often
    too often
  • excessively
    excessively
  • frequently
    frequently
  • dependency
    dependency
  • intrinsic motivation
    intrinsic motivation
  • self-discipline
    self-discipline
  • responsibility
    responsibility
  • undermine
    undermine
  • reduce the value
    reduce the value
  • external incentives
    external incentives

아이디어 2

Sometimes, but with limits
Sometimes, but with limits
모범 답안
I think it’s okay to reward children sometimes, but not all the time. Giving a reward once in a while can make kids feel happy and encourage them to do better. But if they get rewards for everything, it’s not special anymore. It’s better to give rewards for big achievements, like getting good grades or helping someone, instead of for everyday things.
I think it’s okay to reward children sometimes, but not all the time. Giving a reward once in a while can make kids feel happy and encourage them to do better. But if they get rewards for everything, it’s not special anymore. It’s better to give rewards for big achievements, like getting good grades or helping someone, instead of for everyday things.
I believe occasional rewards are fine, as long as there are clear limits. When children are recognized for special achievements, it can boost their motivation and make them feel appreciated. However, rewards should be reserved for significant efforts, not for routine tasks. For example, giving a reward for excellent grades or for showing kindness to others is much more meaningful than rewarding them for simply doing their homework every day.
I believe occasional rewards are fine, as long as there are clear limits. When children are recognized for special achievements, it can boost their motivation and make them feel appreciated. However, rewards should be reserved for significant efforts, not for routine tasks. For example, giving a reward for excellent grades or for showing kindness to others is much more meaningful than rewarding them for simply doing their homework every day.
문법 분석
1. Conditional structure: "as long as there are clear limits" uses a conditional clause to set boundaries, showing advanced sentence structure. 2. Passive voice: "When children are recognized for special achievements" uses the passive voice to focus on the children rather than the person giving the recognition. 3. Contrast structure: "However, rewards should be reserved for significant efforts, not for routine tasks" uses contrast to clarify the speaker’s opinion and add depth. 4. Gerund as subject: "giving a reward for excellent grades or for showing kindness" uses gerunds as the subject of the clause, demonstrating grammatical variety. ####
어휘
  • occasional rewards
    occasional rewards
  • clear limits
    clear limits
  • recognized
    recognized
  • special achievements
    special achievements
  • boost their motivation
    boost their motivation
  • feel appreciated
    feel appreciated
  • reserved for significant efforts
    reserved for significant efforts
  • routine tasks
    routine tasks
  • excellent grades
    excellent grades
  • showing kindness
    showing kindness
  • meaningful
    meaningful
  • doing their homework every day
    doing their homework every day
  • ####
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아이디어 3

Yes, but use non-material rewards
Yes, but use non-material rewards
모범 답안
Yes, but I think it’s better to use non-material rewards. Saying “good job” or giving extra playtime can make children feel proud and happy. These kinds of rewards help kids learn to value effort and good behavior, not just things like toys or candy. For example, a sticker or a compliment can be enough for young children.
Yes, but I think it’s better to use non-material rewards. Saying “good job” or giving extra playtime can make children feel proud and happy. These kinds of rewards help kids learn to value effort and good behavior, not just things like toys or candy. For example, a sticker or a compliment can be enough for young children.
Yes, but I think it’s best to focus on non-material rewards. Verbal praise, extra playtime, or even a simple sticker can be very effective in encouraging children. These types of rewards help children appreciate the value of effort and kindness, rather than just material possessions. For instance, saying “well done” or giving a child a sticker for good behavior can boost their confidence and help them develop positive habits, without making them materialistic.
Yes, but I think it’s best to focus on non-material rewards. Verbal praise, extra playtime, or even a simple sticker can be very effective in encouraging children. These types of rewards help children appreciate the value of effort and kindness, rather than just material possessions. For instance, saying “well done” or giving a child a sticker for good behavior can boost their confidence and help them develop positive habits, without making them materialistic.
문법 분석
1. Modal verbs for suggestion: "I think it’s best to focus on..." uses "it’s best to" to give advice or make a suggestion, showing a polite and thoughtful tone. 2. Present continuous for general truth: "can be very effective in encouraging children" uses "can be" to express a general truth or possibility. 3. Infinitive of purpose: "to appreciate the value of effort and kindness" uses the infinitive to explain the purpose or result of the action. 4. Present participle as adjective: "encouraging children" uses the present participle "encouraging" to describe the effect of the rewards. ####
어휘
  • non-material rewards
    non-material rewards
  • verbal praise
    verbal praise
  • extra playtime
    extra playtime
  • simple sticker
    simple sticker
  • appreciate the value of effort and kindness
    appreciate the value of effort and kindness
  • material possessions
    material possessions
  • boost their confidence
    boost their confidence
  • develop positive habits
    develop positive habits
  • materialistic
    materialistic