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질문: Do you think young people are more and more reliant on these programs?

아이디어 1

Yes
Yes
모범 답안
Yes, I think young people are definitely more reliant on these programs. Most of my friends use cooking apps or watch YouTube videos to learn how to cook something new. It's really convenient because you can just follow the steps and pause the video if you need to. Also, a lot of us didn't really learn cooking from our parents, so we have to rely on these online resources. Sometimes, people only cook if they have a recipe video to follow.
Yes, I think young people are definitely more reliant on these programs. Most of my friends use cooking apps or watch YouTube videos to learn how to cook something new. It's really convenient because you can just follow the steps and pause the video if you need to. Also, a lot of us didn't really learn cooking from our parents, so we have to rely on these online resources. Sometimes, people only cook if they have a recipe video to follow.
Absolutely, young people are increasingly dependent on cooking programs and apps these days. Many of them turn to YouTube or recipe apps whenever they want to try something new in the kitchen. It's super convenient because you get step-by-step instructions and can watch the process as many times as you need. Since a lot of young people didn't pick up traditional cooking skills from their families, these online resources have become their go-to. In fact, some people I know won't even attempt to cook unless they have a video or app guiding them through every step.
Absolutely, young people are increasingly dependent on cooking programs and apps these days. Many of them turn to YouTube or recipe apps whenever they want to try something new in the kitchen. It's super convenient because you get step-by-step instructions and can watch the process as many times as you need. Since a lot of young people didn't pick up traditional cooking skills from their families, these online resources have become their go-to. In fact, some people I know won't even attempt to cook unless they have a video or app guiding them through every step.
문법 분석
1. Present continuous and adverbs of degree: "young people are increasingly dependent" uses the present continuous tense with the adverb "increasingly" to show a growing trend, which is a sophisticated way to express change over time. 2. Conditional structure: "won't even attempt to cook unless they have a video or app guiding them" uses a conditional clause to explain a situation, demonstrating complex sentence structure. 3. Relative clause: "whenever they want to try something new in the kitchen" is a relative clause that adds detail and context, making the answer richer and more precise. 4. Informal spoken expressions: Phrases like "super convenient" and "go-to" are natural and conversational, which is ideal for IELTS Speaking.
어휘
  • increasingly dependent
    increasingly dependent
  • turn to YouTube or recipe apps
    turn to YouTube or recipe apps
  • super convenient
    super convenient
  • step-by-step instructions
    step-by-step instructions
  • watch the process as many times as you need
    watch the process as many times as you need
  • didn't pick up traditional cooking skills
    didn't pick up traditional cooking skills
  • online resources
    online resources
  • go-to
    go-to
  • won't even attempt to cook
    won't even attempt to cook
  • guiding them through every step
    guiding them through every step

아이디어 2

No
No
모범 답안
No, I don't think all young people rely on these programs. Some still prefer to learn cooking from their parents or grandparents, especially if it's a family recipe. Also, not everyone is interested in cooking, so they might just eat out or order food instead. There are even some young people who like to experiment in the kitchen without following any instructions at all.
No, I don't think all young people rely on these programs. Some still prefer to learn cooking from their parents or grandparents, especially if it's a family recipe. Also, not everyone is interested in cooking, so they might just eat out or order food instead. There are even some young people who like to experiment in the kitchen without following any instructions at all.
I wouldn't say all young people are becoming more reliant on these programs. There are still plenty who prefer learning directly from family members, especially when it comes to traditional or special dishes. Plus, not everyone is passionate about cooking—some just prefer to eat out or order takeaway. And then there are those who enjoy being creative in the kitchen, coming up with their own recipes rather than following step-by-step guides. So, while these programs are popular, they're not the only way young people learn to cook.
I wouldn't say all young people are becoming more reliant on these programs. There are still plenty who prefer learning directly from family members, especially when it comes to traditional or special dishes. Plus, not everyone is passionate about cooking—some just prefer to eat out or order takeaway. And then there are those who enjoy being creative in the kitchen, coming up with their own recipes rather than following step-by-step guides. So, while these programs are popular, they're not the only way young people learn to cook.
문법 분석
1. Modal verbs for hedging: "I wouldn't say all young people are becoming more reliant..." uses a modal verb and negative structure to soften the opinion, which is a natural and nuanced way to express uncertainty or avoid overgeneralization. 2. Present continuous tense: "are becoming more reliant" and "are popular" use the present continuous and present simple to talk about current trends and general truths. 3. Relative clauses: "who prefer learning directly from family members" and "who enjoy being creative in the kitchen" use relative clauses to add detail and variety to sentence structure. 4. Gerunds as objects: "prefer learning," "enjoy being creative," and "coming up with their own recipes" all use gerunds as objects after verbs, which is a common and natural spoken structure.
어휘
  • prefer learning directly from family members
    prefer learning directly from family members
  • traditional or special dishes
    traditional or special dishes
  • passionate about cooking
    passionate about cooking
  • prefer to eat out or order takeaway
    prefer to eat out or order takeaway
  • enjoy being creative in the kitchen
    enjoy being creative in the kitchen
  • coming up with their own recipes
    coming up with their own recipes
  • step-by-step guides
    step-by-step guides
  • not the only way young people learn to cook
    not the only way young people learn to cook