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질문: Why do most children draw more often than adults do?
아이디어 1
Imagination and Creativity
Imagination and Creativity
모범 답안
I think children draw more because they have a lot of imagination. They like to show their ideas and feelings by drawing pictures. Kids don’t worry if their drawings are good or bad, so they just draw for fun. But adults often feel shy or think their drawings are not good enough, so they stop drawing as much.
I think children draw more because they have a lot of imagination. They like to show their ideas and feelings by drawing pictures. Kids don’t worry if their drawings are good or bad, so they just draw for fun. But adults often feel shy or think their drawings are not good enough, so they stop drawing as much.
아이디어 2
Learning and Development
Learning and Development
모범 답안
Drawing is important for children because it helps them learn and develop skills like using their hands and eyes together. Schools and parents usually encourage kids to draw as part of their education. Adults, on the other hand, are busy with work and don’t have much time for drawing, so they don’t do it as much.
Drawing is important for children because it helps them learn and develop skills like using their hands and eyes together. Schools and parents usually encourage kids to draw as part of their education. Adults, on the other hand, are busy with work and don’t have much time for drawing, so they don’t do it as much.
아이디어 3
Time and Priorities
Time and Priorities
모범 답안
Children usually have more free time and not many responsibilities, so they can draw whenever they want. Drawing is a fun way for them to relax. Adults are often too busy with work or family, so they don’t have much time for drawing and prefer to do other things instead.
Children usually have more free time and not many responsibilities, so they can draw whenever they want. Drawing is a fun way for them to relax. Adults are often too busy with work or family, so they don’t have much time for drawing and prefer to do other things instead.