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질문: Do you think it's a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour?

아이디어 1

Yes
Yes
모범 답안
Yes, I think it’s a good idea. If I forget my keys or lose them, my neighbour can help me. Also, they can water my plants or feed my pets when I’m not at home. I did this before and it worked well for me.
Yes, I think it’s a good idea. If I forget my keys or lose them, my neighbour can help me. Also, they can water my plants or feed my pets when I’m not at home. I did this before and it worked well for me.
Yes, I believe it’s a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour. It’s really convenient in case you forget or lose your keys, and it also helps build trust and good relationships in the community. For example, I’ve done this before, and my neighbour was able to help me when I accidentally locked myself out of my apartment.
Yes, I believe it’s a good idea to leave your keys with a neighbour. It’s really convenient in case you forget or lose your keys, and it also helps build trust and good relationships in the community. For example, I’ve done this before, and my neighbour was able to help me when I accidentally locked myself out of my apartment.
문법 분석
1. Use of present simple and present perfect: The answer uses present simple ("I believe," "it’s convenient," "it helps") to express general opinions and facts, and present perfect ("I’ve done this before") to talk about past experiences relevant to the present. 2. Use of conditional clause: "in case you forget or lose your keys" is a conditional clause that explains a possible situation, showing the ability to use complex sentences. 3. Use of past simple: "my neighbour was able to help me" and "I accidentally locked myself out" correctly use the past simple to describe a specific event in the past.
어휘
  • convenient
    convenient
  • build trust
    build trust
  • good relationships
    good relationships
  • accidentally locked myself out
    accidentally locked myself out

아이디어 2

No
No
모범 답안
No, I don’t think it’s a good idea because it might not be safe. If you don’t know your neighbour well, they could lose your keys or even use them without asking. I think it’s better to leave keys with family.
No, I don’t think it’s a good idea because it might not be safe. If you don’t know your neighbour well, they could lose your keys or even use them without asking. I think it’s better to leave keys with family.
No, I don’t think it’s a good idea, especially if you don’t know your neighbour very well. There’s always a risk of losing privacy or even having your belongings stolen. Personally, I would rather leave my keys with a family member, as I’ve heard stories where neighbours lost the keys or used them without permission.
No, I don’t think it’s a good idea, especially if you don’t know your neighbour very well. There’s always a risk of losing privacy or even having your belongings stolen. Personally, I would rather leave my keys with a family member, as I’ve heard stories where neighbours lost the keys or used them without permission.
문법 분석
1. Conditional structure: "especially if you don’t know your neighbour very well" uses a first conditional to talk about a possible situation and its consequences. 2. Passive voice: "having your belongings stolen" and "used them without permission" both use passive constructions, which add variety and sophistication to the answer. 3. Past perfect: "I’ve heard stories" uses the present perfect tense to refer to experiences up to now, which is appropriate for this context.
어휘
  • risk of losing privacy
    risk of losing privacy
  • having your belongings stolen
    having your belongings stolen
  • heard stories
    heard stories
  • lost the keys
    lost the keys
  • used them without permission
    used them without permission

아이디어 3

It Depends
It Depends
모범 답안
It depends. If you know your neighbour for a long time and trust them, it’s okay. But in big cities, people are more careful. I would only do it if I really trusted my neighbour.
It depends. If you know your neighbour for a long time and trust them, it’s okay. But in big cities, people are more careful. I would only do it if I really trusted my neighbour.
I think it really depends on the situation. If you’ve known your neighbour for a long time and trust them, it can be a good idea, especially in small towns where people are closer. However, in big cities, people tend to be more cautious, and if you have a security system, you might not need to leave a key with anyone at all. I would only consider it if I felt completely comfortable with my neighbour.
I think it really depends on the situation. If you’ve known your neighbour for a long time and trust them, it can be a good idea, especially in small towns where people are closer. However, in big cities, people tend to be more cautious, and if you have a security system, you might not need to leave a key with anyone at all. I would only consider it if I felt completely comfortable with my neighbour.
문법 분석
1.Conditional sentences: The answer uses first conditional ("If you’ve known your neighbour for a long time and trust them, it can be a good idea") and a hypothetical conditional ("I would only consider it if I felt completely comfortable with my neighbour"), showing flexibility in expressing different possibilities. 2.Contrast structure: The use of "However" introduces a contrasting idea, which helps organize the answer logically and clearly. 3.Use of modal verbs: "can be a good idea," "might not need," and "would only consider" demonstrate a good range of modal verbs to express possibility, necessity, and hypothetical situations.
어휘
  • depends on the situation
    depends on the situation
  • trust them
    trust them
  • closer
    closer
  • cautious
    cautious
  • security system
    security system
  • consider it if I felt completely comfortable
    consider it if I felt completely comfortable