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주제: Describe a risk you took that you thought would lead to a terrible result but ended up with a good result
예제
Starting a New Business When you took the risk I'm going to talk about the time I decided to start my own business, which was about three years ago. I had been working in a corporate job for several years and felt it was time for a change. Why you took the risk The main reason I took the risk was that I wanted to pursue my passion for graphic design more seriously. I had been doing freelance work on the side while working my full-time job, and the feedback from clients was overwhelmingly positive. This gave me the confidence to think that maybe I could make it on my own. How it went The initial months were incredibly challenging. Setting up the business, finding clients, and managing finances were all new to me, and there were many moments of doubt. However, as I started to get more clients and my portfolio grew, things began to stabilize. Now, three years later, I have a steady stream of clients and have even been able to hire a small team to help me. And explain how you felt about it Taking this risk was one of the most nerve-wracking yet exhilarating decisions of my life. There was a lot of uncertainty, and the fear of failure was always lurking in the background. However, the satisfaction of building something from scratch and seeing it succeed has been incredibly rewarding. It has not only improved my professional skills but has also given me a greater sense of autonomy and fulfillment in my work. The journey has been a mix of highs and lows, but I feel proud and grateful for having taken that leap of faith.
새로운 비즈니스를 시작 당신이 위험을 감수한 때에 대해 이야기하겠습니다.
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어휘
  • - **Pursue**: Indicates a strong intention or goal, enhancing the motivational aspect of the decision.
    - **추구**: 결심 또는 목표를 강화하여 결정의 동기 부분을 강조합니다.
  • - **Overwhelmingly positive**: Strong phrase that emphasizes the extent of good feedback, boosting the justification for the risk.
    - **압도적으로 긍정적**: 긍정적인 피드백의 정도를 강조하는 강력한 표현으로, 위험을 정당화하는데 도움이 됩니다.
  • - **Challenging**: Describes the difficulty faced, which adds to the narrative of overcoming obstacles.
    - **도전적**: 극복하는 이야기에 어려움을 더하는 것을 묘사합니다.
  • - **Stabilize**: Indicates achieving a state of balance, important in a business context to denote success.
    - **안정화하기**: 성공을 나타내는 비즈니스 맥락에서 중요한 균형 상태를 달성했음을 나타냅니다.
  • - **Nerve-wracking**: Conveys intense emotional experience, making the story more relatable and dramatic.
    - **신경 촉박한**: 강렬한 감정적 경험을 암시하여 이야기를 보다 공감하고 감동적으로 만듭니다.
  • - **Exhilarating**: Contrasts with nerve-wracking to show the dual emotions involved in taking risks.
    - **신나는**: 위험을 감내하면서 느끼는 쌍둥이 감정을 보여주기 위해 신경질적인 것과 대조된다.
  • - **Autonomy**: Highlights the personal growth and independence gained from the experience.
    - **자립성**: 경험으로부터 얻는 개인적 성장과 독립을 강조합니다.
  • - **Leap of faith**: A phrase that encapsulates the essence of taking a significant risk without a guarantee of success, effectively summarizing the emotional journey.
    - **신념의 도약**: 성공을 보장하지 않고 중대한 위험을 감수하는 본질을 담아내는 구절으로, 감정적인 여정을 효과적으로 요약합니다.