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질문: What's the difference between adults'and children's happiness?
아이디어 1
Complexity
Complexity
모범 답안
Adults usually find happiness in big achievements like getting a good job or buying a house. Kids are happier with simple things like playing or being with their family.
Adults usually find happiness in big achievements like getting a good job or buying a house. Kids are happier with simple things like playing or being with their family.
아이디어 2
Duration
Duration
모범 답안
Kids usually feel happy for short times, like when they get a new toy, but this can change fast. Adults feel happy for longer periods, like being content with their life choices.
Kids usually feel happy for short times, like when they get a new toy, but this can change fast. Adults feel happy for longer periods, like being content with their life choices.
아이디어 3
Sources
Sources
모범 답안
Adults find happiness in things like friends, success at work, or buying things they want. Kids are usually happy when they are playing or learning something new.
Adults find happiness in things like friends, success at work, or buying things they want. Kids are usually happy when they are playing or learning something new.
아이디어 4
Responsibilities
Responsibilities
모범 답안
Adults have a lot of responsibilities like jobs and taking care of their families, which can affect how happy they feel. Kids usually don’t have these kinds of worries and are happy doing things they like.
Adults have a lot of responsibilities like jobs and taking care of their families, which can affect how happy they feel. Kids usually don’t have these kinds of worries and are happy doing things they like.