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질문: What important skills should a child learn?

아이디어 1

Social and Emotional Skills
Social and Emotional Skills
모범 답안
I think empathy and understanding are often forgotten. These skills are important for children to fit in. Understanding how someone else feels, even about things we think are small, is an important emotional skill. It helps children make friends and get along well with others.
I think empathy and understanding are often forgotten. These skills are important for children to fit in. Understanding how someone else feels, even about things we think are small, is an important emotional skill. It helps children make friends and get along well with others.
Something that I think is often overlooked is empat​hy and understanding. These are skills that unless learned, will make it very difficult for children to fit in. Being able to understand how someone else feels about something that we may believe to be trivial is an emotional skill that will put every child in good stead and help them make friends.
Something that I think is often overlooked is empat​hy and understanding. These are skills that unless learned, will make it very difficult for children to fit in. Being able to understand how someone else feels about something that we may believe to be trivial is an emotional skill that will put every child in good stead and help them make friends.
문법 분석
Passive Voice: "are often overlooked" This expression uses the passive voice, emphasizing the situation where these skills are ignored, rather than the people ignoring them, adding depth and objectivity to the sentence. Conditional sentence: "unless learned, will make it very difficult" This conditional sentence emphasizes the difficulty children will face in integrating into society if these skills are not learned, adding logic and situational description.
어휘
  • overlook
    overlook
  • empathy
    empathy
  • put every child in good stead
    put every child in good stead
  • emotional skill
    emotional skill
  • fit in
    fit in

아이디어 2

Practical Life Skills
Practical Life Skills
모범 답안
I think it's important for children to learn about money. Parents and teachers often don't teach this, which is odd because it's a big part of life. Understanding the true cost of things and how to save money are skills that will be very useful when children start living on their own.
I think it's important for children to learn about money. Parents and teachers often don't teach this, which is odd because it's a big part of life. Understanding the true cost of things and how to save money are skills that will be very useful when children start living on their own.
Personally, I believe that children should be taught about money. It’s something that parents and teachers don’t do, which is strange considering that it’s an important part of life. Learning the real cost of something and how to save are life skills that will be invaluable when they leave home and start to live independently.
Personally, I believe that children should be taught about money. It’s something that parents and teachers don’t do, which is strange considering that it’s an important part of life. Learning the real cost of something and how to save are life skills that will be invaluable when they leave home and start to live independently.
문법 분석
Passive Voice: "should be taught about money" This expression uses the passive voice, emphasizing that financial education should be implemented, rather than specifying the implementer, increasing the objectivity and depth of the sentence. Conditional clause: "when they leave home and start to live independently" This conditional clause describes the timing of children living independently, indicating the importance of learning money management skills, increasing logicality and situational description. Present participle as adverbial: "Learning the real cost of something" Using the present participle as an adverbial, describing the specific content of financial education, making the sentence more specific and vivid.
어휘
  • strange
    strange
  • considering
    considering
  • the real cost of something
    the real cost of something
  • invaluable
    invaluable
  • independently
    independently