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질문: What qualities should a leader have?

아이디어 1

Communication Skills and Decision-Making Abilities
Communication Skills and Decision-Making Abilities
모범 답안
I believe good leaders should communicate well. They should listen to different ideas and make decisions strategically after hearing them. It’s important that they clearly explain these decisions to their team to ensure effective implementation. Being able to do this is a skill on its own.
I believe good leaders should communicate well. They should listen to different ideas and make decisions strategically after hearing them. It’s important that they clearly explain these decisions to their team to ensure effective implementation. Being able to do this is a skill on its own.
I think leaders need to be able to communicate clearly. They need to be able to listen to a range of ideas and strategically make a decision based on what they have heard. Then, they need to convey this to their team so that the decision can be implemented effectively, and this is a real skill in itself.
I think leaders need to be able to communicate clearly. They need to be able to listen to a range of ideas and strategically make a decision based on what they have heard. Then, they need to convey this to their team so that the decision can be implemented effectively, and this is a real skill in itself.
문법 분석
Modal verb: "need to be able to" uses the modal verb "need to" along with the structure "be able to" to indicate the abilities required by leaders, reflecting the logicality and persuasiveness of the sentence. Infinitive structures: "to communicate clearly" and "to listen to a range of ideas" use infinitive structures to provide a clear description of purpose or intent, enhancing the goal-oriented and structural nature of the sentence. Present participle as an object complement: "make a decision based on what they have heard" uses a present participle as an object complement to increase the information and complexity of the sentence.
어휘
  • communicate clearly
    communicate clearly
  • range of ideas
    range of ideas
  • strategically
    strategically
  • convey
    convey
  • implemented effectively
    implemented effectively
  • real skill
    real skill

아이디어 2

Emotional Intelligence and Visionary Innovation
Emotional Intelligence and Visionary Innovation
모범 답안
A leader should be capable of bringing out the best in their team. To achieve this, they must understand the team's needs for maximum creativity. This could involve offering emotional support or focusing on the staff's well-being. It’s the leader’s responsibility to identify these needs and respond appropriately.
A leader should be capable of bringing out the best in their team. To achieve this, they must understand the team's needs for maximum creativity. This could involve offering emotional support or focusing on the staff's well-being. It’s the leader’s responsibility to identify these needs and respond appropriately.
A leader needs to be able to get the best out of their team and to do this, they need to know what the team requires so that they are at their most creative. This might be emotional support or it might be ensuring that the staff's well-being is prioritized but it's the leader's job to recognize this and act accordingly.
A leader needs to be able to get the best out of their team and to do this, they need to know what the team requires so that they are at their most creative. This might be emotional support or it might be ensuring that the staff's well-being is prioritized but it's the leader's job to recognize this and act accordingly.
문법 분석
Infinitive structure: "to be able to get" and "to do this" use infinitive structure to indicate purpose and intention, increasing the accuracy and goal orientation of the sentence. Object clause: "they need to know what the team requires" uses an object clause to explain the specific information that leaders need to understand, increasing the amount of information and complexity of the sentence. Conditional adverbial clause: "so that they are at their most creative" uses a conditional adverbial clause to express the conditions for achieving maximum creativity, enhancing the logical and orderly nature of the sentence.
어휘
  • get the best out of
    get the best out of
  • creative
    creative
  • emotional support
    emotional support
  • staff’s well-being
    staff’s well-being
  • prioritized
    prioritized
  • recognize
    recognize
  • act accordingly
    act accordingly