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질문: What kinds of places should be noise-free?

아이디어 1

Educational Facilities
Educational Facilities
모범 답안
Yeah, I think places for studying should be quiet, like libraries. When people need to focus, especially on hard stuff, it's tough if there's a lot of noise around. Quietness is important for concentration. So, in places where you have to study or think a lot, being quiet helps everyone stay focused.
Yeah, I think places for studying should be quiet, like libraries. When people need to focus, especially on hard stuff, it's tough if there's a lot of noise around. Quietness is important for concentration. So, in places where you have to study or think a lot, being quiet helps everyone stay focused.
I reckon places where people are trying to focus and study should be quiet. Libraries, for example, where people are trying to concentrate and get their heads round some difficult ideas are places where silence is vital as this level of focus is hard to achieve if there are noisy distractions going on.
I reckon places where people are trying to focus and study should be quiet. Libraries, for example, where people are trying to concentrate and get their heads round some difficult ideas are places where silence is vital as this level of focus is hard to achieve if there are noisy distractions going on.
문법 분석
Present participle used as an attributive: "trying to focus and study" is used here as a present participle phrase acting as an attributive, describing "places", demonstrating the complexity and accuracy of the answer. Conditional adverbial clause: "if there are noisy distractions" uses a conditional adverbial clause to explain the difficulty of concentrating in the presence of noisy distractions, increasing the complexity and amount of information in the sentence. Gerund phrase: "getting their heads round some difficult ideas" is used here as a gerund phrase acting as a purpose adverbial, indicating the purpose of people in the library, which is to understand complex ideas, reflecting the complexity and accuracy of the answer.
어휘
  • get their heads round
    get their heads round
  • concentrate
    concentrate
  • vital
    vital
  • level of focus
    level of focus
  • noisy distractions
    noisy distractions

아이디어 2

Healthcare Facilities
Healthcare Facilities
모범 답안
Hospital rooms where patients are getting better should be quiet. If someone's just had an operation and needs to rest, they wouldn't want loud noises like kids yelling or people talking a lot. It's important to have a quiet place for healing and to feel better, so quietness is really important there.
Hospital rooms where patients are getting better should be quiet. If someone's just had an operation and needs to rest, they wouldn't want loud noises like kids yelling or people talking a lot. It's important to have a quiet place for healing and to feel better, so quietness is really important there.
Hospital wards where patients are recovering are definitely places that need to be kept quiet. If someone has just come out of surgery and needs rest, the last thing they want is children screaming or families chatting away. Peace and quiet are part of a healthy healing process and create a healing atmosphere, so they are very important.
Hospital wards where patients are recovering are definitely places that need to be kept quiet. If someone has just come out of surgery and needs rest, the last thing they want is children screaming or families chatting away. Peace and quiet are part of a healthy healing process and create a healing atmosphere, so they are very important.
문법 분석
Past participle as attributive modifier: "recovering" here is used as a past participle phrase to describe "patients," increasing the amount of information and accuracy of the sentence. Conditional adverbial clause: "If someone has just come out of surgery and needs rest" This conditional adverbial clause describes a specific situation, that someone has just had surgery and needs rest, adding complexity and specificity to the sentence. Nouns as attributive modifiers: "healing process" and "healing atmosphere" Here the noun "healing" is used as an attributive modifier to describe the following nouns (process, atmosphere), showing the accuracy and complexity of the answer.
어휘
  • recovering
    recovering
  • keep quiet
    keep quiet
  • come out of surgery
    come out of surgery
  • the last thing they want
    the last thing they want
  • chatting away
    chatting away
  • peace and quiet
    peace and quiet
  • healing process
    healing process
  • healing atmosphere
    healing atmosphere

아이디어 3

Residential and Public Areas
Residential and Public Areas
모범 답안
I think people should be quiet in places like nature reserves. It's about respecting the environment and the animals living there. Making a lot of noise, like shouting, can bother the animals and even scare them away. So, if people are there to see wildlife in its natural home, being too loud means they might not see anything.
I think people should be quiet in places like nature reserves. It's about respecting the environment and the animals living there. Making a lot of noise, like shouting, can bother the animals and even scare them away. So, if people are there to see wildlife in its natural home, being too loud means they might not see anything.
I’d say people need to stay quiet in places like nature reserves. People need to respect the environment they are in and also the wildlife that live there. Shouting and shrieking in these places disturbs the animals, and it might scare them off, so people who have gone there to see them in their natural habitat will have no chance of seeing anything.
I’d say people need to stay quiet in places like nature reserves. People need to respect the environment they are in and also the wildlife that live there. Shouting and shrieking in these places disturbs the animals, and it might scare them off, so people who have gone there to see them in their natural habitat will have no chance of seeing anything.
문법 분석
Object clause: "people need to respect the environment they are in and also the wildlife that live there" is used here to illustrate what people need to respect, including the environment they are in and the wildlife that live there, increasing the complexity and amount of information in the sentence. Past participle used as an attributive: "gone there to see them" here, "gone" serves as a past participle phrase describing "people," explaining why they went there, adding to the amount of information and accuracy in the sentence. Adverb clause: "if people shout and shriek" uses a conditional adverb clause to describe what will happen if people shout and shriek in the nature reserve, increasing the complexity and logic of the sentence.
어휘
  • nature reserves
    nature reserves
  • shouting
    shouting
  • shrieking
    shrieking
  • disturb
    disturb
  • scare them off
    scare them off
  • natural habitat
    natural habitat
  • no chance
    no chance