Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Keep answers natural and complete sentences; avoid irrelevant identity statements (e.g., “As a girl”) and fill pauses. Combine ideas into one coherent sentence and use linking words. Also correct sentence fragments and small grammar issues.

예시: I enjoy shopping, especially online, because it is easier to navigate and I can often find better deals. For example, I compare product reviews and filter results to quickly find the best price and quality.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence then expand with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid short fragments and unclear phrases; use ‘because’ or ‘so’ to connect ideas and give an example.

예시: Yes, I always compare prices because you may be able to get the same quality for less. For instance, I check two or three websites and read reviews, so I can decide where to buy with confidence.

제안: Answer directly and avoid filler words. Use correct grammar and coherent linking: state the main point, then give concise supporting details (how the list helps). Fix tense/number errors and awkward phrases.

예시: Not really. I usually shop only when I need something specific, and I make a shopping list which makes the process easier and faster because I know exactly what to buy.

제안: Express your opinion in one clear sentence then support it with reasons or examples using linking words. Avoid sentence fragments and improve cohesion between ideas.

예시: Not necessarily — expensive items are sometimes higher quality, but price doesn't always guarantee better value. For example, I often read reviews and compare materials so I can find affordable products that perform well.

× It's easier to navigate and. Catch better deals.

✓ It's easier to navigate and catch better deals.

The sentence was split incorrectly, creating a fragment 'Catch better deals.' The verb 'catch' should follow 'and' as part of the same clause. Combine them into one sentence to use the base verb form 'catch' after the conjunction 'and'. Suggestion: Keep coordinated verbs in the same clause ("navigate and catch").

× Chance you can get a better bargain with the same quality. Just be smart about it.

✓ You might get a better bargain with the same quality. Just be smart about it.

'Chance you can get' is ungrammatical word order and missing a modal. Use a modal like 'might' or 'you can' with correct subject-verb order. The corrected sentence uses 'You might get...' which fits the question and expresses possibility. Suggestion: Use proper subject + modal/verb order ("You might get..." or "There is a chance you can get...").

× I only go shopping when I need something specific or what.

✓ I only go shopping when I need something specific.

The word 'what' at the end makes the sentence ungrammatical and is unnecessary. Removing it yields a complete, grammatical conditional clause. Suggestion: Avoid trailing filler words; finish the clause clearly ("when I need something specific").

× I have a specific list so it make it facilitates the process and I know exactly what I need.

✓ I have a specific list, so it makes the process easier and I know exactly what I need.

There are multiple issues: 'make' is incorrect for third-person singular subject 'it' (should be 'makes'), 'it facilitates the process' is awkwardly ordered and redundant with 'makes the process easier.' The corrected sentence uses proper subject-verb agreement and clearer phrasing. Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with subject (it + makes) and avoid redundant constructions; choose one clear expression ("makes the process easier").

× Not necessarily, though I believe high quality products. Requires a higher value.

✓ Not necessarily, though I believe high-quality products require a higher price.

The original contains a sentence fragment 'Requires a higher value.' and a noun phrase 'high quality products' lacking hyphenation when used as a compound modifier. Also 'value' is not the typical collocation; 'price' fits better. The corrected sentence combines clauses into a single grammatical sentence with correct verb agreement ('products require'). Suggestion: Use full clauses with subject + verb and correct collocations ("require a higher price").

× However, you can absolutely find good quality with a good price.

✓ However, you can absolutely find good quality at a good price.

The preposition 'with' is awkward here; the idiomatic preposition for price is 'at' (find X at a good price). This is a preposition choice issue aligning meaning; it results in more natural English to use 'at'. Suggestion: Use the collocation 'at a good price' when talking about the cost at which something is available.