Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Говорите яснее и стройте ответ по шаблону: тема → причина → пример. Избегайте шумных заполнителей (uh, umm) и исправляйте очевидные ошибки (show pink → shopping). Используйте связки: "because", "for example", "however". Ограничьте длину до 2–4 предложений и говорите естественно.

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping, but I prefer online shopping because it is more convenient and offers more variety. For example, I often buy cosmetics from Sephora and other websites, although I prefer trying on clothes in physical stores.

제안: Сосредоточьтесь на вопросе и дайте логичный ответ с причинами. Избегайте жалоб или посторонних замечаний ("You're interrupt me"). Уберите слова-заполнители и постройте: утверждение → причина → краткий пример. Используйте связки: "because", "so", "for example".

예시: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to get the best value for money. For example, I check several websites and stores before buying electronics to make sure I find a good deal.

제안: Дайте чёткую структуру: тема → 1–2 конкретные причины → итог. Уберите невнятные выражения ("wish to eat") и повторения. Используйте конкретику: размер, цена, стиль. Связки: "because", "so", "however".

예시: Yes, I often find it difficult because I like many items but sizes are unavailable and some pieces are too expensive. So I usually wait for sales or try several stores to find the right size and price.

제안: Ответьте прямо и приведите пару конкретных аргументов или пример. Убирайте паузы и повторения. Формат: краткий ответ → причина → пример. Используйте словосочетания: "not always", "often", "for example", "quality".

예시: Not always. Cheaper products can sometimes be well made, while expensive ones are not necessarily better. For example, I buy affordable clothes from a website called Tamoon that often have good quality for the price.

× Yes, I like show pink, but I like uh, online shopping more than the offline shopping.

✓ Yes, I like showy pink things, but I prefer online shopping to offline shopping.

The original uses 'show pink' which is ungrammatical; likely intended 'showy pink' or 'bright pink things' (adjective + noun). Also 'I like ... more than the offline shopping' mixes articles and comparison forms. Use 'prefer X to Y' or 'X more than Y' without 'the' before 'offline shopping.' Keep consistent noun phrases.

× I do shopping from, well, berries, uh, from Sephora or from other websites, but I like umm, offline shopping if I buy a clothes.

✓ I shop at stores like Boots and Sephora or on other websites, but I prefer offline shopping when I buy clothes.

Use 'shop at' for physical stores and 'on' for websites. 'Do shopping' is less natural than 'shop.' 'berries' likely 'Boots' (a store) — replace with appropriate store name. 'a clothes' is incorrect: 'clothes' is plural and doesn't take 'a'; use 'when I buy clothes.'

× Of course I compare prices 'cause I don't do a reach to not look to the prices.

✓ Of course I compare prices because I don't try to avoid looking at the prices.

The phrase 'do a reach' is incorrect; 'try to avoid' expresses intended meaning. 'to not look to the prices' is ungrammatical; use 'avoid looking at the prices.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb collocations.

× Uh, and. You're interrupt me every time and I can't.

✓ You're interrupting me all the time and I can't finish.

Use present continuous 'you're interrupting' not simple present 'you're interrupt me.' 'Every time' -> 'all the time.' Add 'finish' to complete the idea. Pronoun 'you' with continuous verb requires '-ing' form.

× And there's also only, uh, 20 minutes to say I can't.

✓ And there's only 20 minutes left, so I can't say much.

'There's also only' is awkward; use 'there's only 20 minutes left.' 'to say I can't' is unclear — clarify purpose: 'so I can't say much.' Use appropriate quantifier 'only' and structure.

× Yes, it's so difficult for me because there are many clothes that I like, but there isn't a size for me and the price also, uh wish to eat because, uh, when I like something and that too expensive, I can't buy it.

✓ Yes, it's very difficult for me because there are many clothes I like, but my size isn't available and the price is too high, so I can't buy them.

'There isn't a size for me' should be 'my size isn't available.' 'The price also, uh wish to eat' is nonsensical; intended 'the price is too high.' Ensure plural agreement 'clothes ... I like' and 'them' as object pronoun. Use 'too expensive' or 'too high' for price.

× But uh, I think that there are many shops that they have a good.

✓ But I think there are many shops that have good products.

Avoid redundant pronoun 'they' after 'shops that.' Use complete noun phrase 'good products' or 'good items.' Correct relative clause: 'shops that have...' not 'shops that they have.'

× I don't think like that 'cause there is a website that, uh, named Tamoon, uh, there is cheap productions, but I don't think that they're all, uh, bad qualities.

✓ I don't think that. There's a website called Tamoon that sells cheap products, but I don't think they are all low quality.

Use 'called' for naming websites. 'Productions' is wrong; use 'products.' 'Bad qualities' -> 'low quality.' Avoid repetitive 'there is' and correct pronoun reference 'they' to 'products.'

× They're also, they also have a good clothes and products, but some things that, yes, that, uh, there is somewhere that I would like to have.

✓ They also have good clothes and products, but there are some items I would like to have.

Remove redundant 'they also.' 'a good clothes' is incorrect: 'clothes' is plural so use 'good clothes.' 'there is somewhere that I would like to have' is ungrammatical; use 'there are some items I would like to have.'