Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevap doğal ama çok dağınık ve tekrarlı. Konuya doğrudan başlayıp (topic sentence) ardından 1–2 destekleyici cümle ekle. Gereksiz tekrarları çıkar ve duyguyu net ifade et. Örneğin, kısa nedenler ve bağlaçlar kullan (because, so, therefore). Sözcük telaffuzu ve akıcılığı için pratik yap.

예시: Yes, I enjoy shopping because it helps me relax and forget my worries. For example, browsing shops and trying on clothes lifts my mood, so I often go shopping when I need a break.

제안: Cevap içerik olarak yeterli fakat dilbilgisi ve akıcılık sorunlu. Kısa ve doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kur, ardından bir neden ve bir örnek ver. Tekrarlardan kaçın ve daha doğru dilbilgisi kullan (e.g. 'I don't have much money').

예시: Yes, I compare prices because I'm a student and have a limited budget. For instance, I usually check online stores and discounts before I decide to buy clothes.

제안: Cevap net bir fikir ifade ediyor fakat cümle yapısı bozuk ve tekrarlar var. Önce açık bir konu cümlesi kur, sonra nedenini belirt ve kısa bir örnek veya tercih kriteri ekle. Renk karşılaştırması gibi spesifik ayrıntılar iyi, onları daha düzgün ifade et.

예시: Yes, I often find it difficult to choose because I like several options. For example, I might be undecided between a blue or pink jacket, so I compare how each one looks with my existing clothes.

제안: Cevapta fikir var ama üslup ve kelime seçimi uygunsuz veya belirsiz. Önce net bir görüş belirt (Yes/No + reason), sonra örnek veya açıklama ekle. 'Expensive items are always better' gibi ifadeyi tartışırken karşılaştırma ve sonuç kullan.

예시: No, I don't think expensive products are always better because price doesn't always reflect quality. For instance, some affordable brands make durable items, while some expensive ones are overpriced for the brand name.

× When I'm shopping, all of the bad things in my mind, it's just gone.

✓ When I'm shopping, all of the bad things in my mind just go away.

The sentence mixes present continuous with a singular verb phrase 'it's just gone.' The correct present tense form for a plural subject 'bad things' is 'go away.' Also remove unnecessary comma and 'it's' to match subject and verb. Suggestion: use 'go away' for present simple effect or 'disappear' as alternative.

× I'm like flying.

✓ I feel like I'm flying.

The original lacks a clear verb for the subject 'I' in this idiomatic expression. 'I feel like I'm flying' is the natural English structure to express a sensation. Suggestion: include 'feel' when describing an emotional or physical sensation.

× I'm feeling heavy.

✓ I feel light.

Context implies a positive, excited feeling (flying), but 'feeling heavy' contradicts that. Grammatically, 'feeling heavy' is acceptable, but likely the speaker meant 'light.' If original intended 'heavy,' it's grammatical; here we correct for meaning. Suggestion: choose adjective matching intended feeling and use 'feel' for state verbs.

× I I I can't. I can. I don't know.

✓ I can't explain it. I can sometimes, but I don't know how to describe it.

Repeated fragments 'I I I can't' are disfluent and lack clarity. Provide complete sentences to convey inability and uncertainty. Suggestion: expand fragments into full clauses to make meaning clear.

× Of course I'm comparing prices cause I'm a student and I have I have not really good.

✓ Of course I compare prices because I'm a student and I do not have much money.

Use simple present 'I compare' for habitual action. 'Cause' should be 'because.' 'I have not really good' is ungrammatical; the correct expression is 'do not have much money.' Also avoid doubling 'I have.' Suggestion: use 'I do not have much money' for clarity.

× Money 'cause I'm not making money yet.

✓ money because I'm not earning money yet.

The clause 'I'm not making money yet' is colloquial; 'earning money' is more precise. Also attach 'because' to previous clause. Pronoun issues: sentence fragment 'Money' should be connected. Suggestion: combine clauses and use 'earning.'

× Yeah, it's really hard to me that make choices when I'm shopping, uh, 'cause I don't know if I want the blue one or I want pink 1.

✓ Yes, it's really hard for me to make choices when I'm shopping because I don't know whether I want the blue one or the pink one.

Correct preposition is 'hard for me' not 'hard to me.' Infinitive form 'to make choices' required. Use 'whether' for alternatives and article 'the pink one.' Also replace '1' with 'one' and 'cause' with 'because.' Suggestion: use 'hard for me to' and 'whether' for choice between two items.

× I don't know. I'm not deciding this topic.

✓ I don't know. I can't decide on this.

'I'm not deciding this topic' is unnatural. Use 'can't decide on this' or 'I haven't decided yet.' Suggestion: use 'decide on' or 'decided' depending on context.

× No, I think this is ********.

✓ No, I think that's not true.

The asterisks indicate omitted content. Replace with a clear phrase like 'that's not true.' This provides grammatical, natural response. Suggestion: avoid censorship in spoken answers; use clear negation.

× I think the expensive thing's OK, they're made, uh, good.

✓ I think expensive things are okay; they're made well.

Mixing singular 'thing's' with plural 'they're' causes pronoun disagreement. Use plural consistently: 'expensive things' and 'they're.' Also 'made good' should be 'made well' (adverb). Suggestion: match number between noun and pronoun and use adverb for verbs.

× But the cheaper ones too.

✓ But the cheaper ones can be good too.

Fragment lacks verb. Add 'can be' to form a complete present-tense statement. Suggestion: include appropriate auxiliary or verb for completeness.

× I, I, I don't get it, this opinion.

✓ I don't understand this opinion.

Remove disfluent repetitions and reorder phrase to form grammatical sentence. 'I don't get it, this opinion' is ungrammatical; use 'I don't understand this opinion.' Suggestion: keep sentences concise and follow subject-verb-object order.