Shopping— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız doğal ancak daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlaçlar kullanarak ifadelerinizi geliştirebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net tutarak anlamı güçlendirebilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, I love shopping because I do sports and go to the gym regularly. As a result, I've gained muscle weight and my old clothes no longer fit me. Therefore, I often need to buy new clothes to accommodate my changing body.

제안: Cümle yapılarınızı daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanmalı ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalısınız. Ayrıca, daha spesifik nedenler vererek cevabınızı zenginleştirebilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, I always compare prices because I want to get the best deal. If I find the same clothes cheaper elsewhere, I prefer to buy them at a lower price to save money.

제안: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve akıcı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanabilir ve cümlelerinizi daha net ifade edebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, alışveriş tercihlerinizle ilgili daha spesifik detaylar ekleyebilirsiniz.

예시: It's not difficult for me to make choices when shopping because I simply buy clothes that I like and feel comfortable wearing. If I don't like something, I just don't buy it, which makes the process easy for me.

제안: Cümlelerinizi daha akıcı ve doğal hale getirmek için tekrarları azaltmalı ve bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, görüşünüzü destekleyecek daha spesifik örnekler verebilirsiniz.

예시: I don't think expensive products are always better than cheaper ones. I usually consider the quality and whether I like the product. I don't make purchases based solely on the price.

× I need a lot of new dress, new clothes for myself because I do sports and I go gyms and in this way I have a lot of gained weight muscles and I cannot wear what I'm wearing today.

✓ I need a lot of new dresses, new clothes for myself because I do sports and I go to gyms and in this way I have gained a lot of muscle weight and I cannot wear what I'm wearing today.

The word 'dress' should be plural 'dresses' to match 'a lot of'. 'Gyms' needs the preposition 'to' before it. 'Gained weight muscles' is incorrect; it should be 'gained a lot of muscle weight' to express the idea properly.

× I do sports and I go gyms and in this way I have a lot of gained weight muscles and I cannot wear what I'm wearing today.

✓ I do sports and I go to gyms and in this way I have gained a lot of muscle weight and I cannot wear what I'm wearing today.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' when referring to places like 'gyms'. Without 'to', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× If I could buy that for cheaper price, I could buy with that price.

✓ If I could buy that for a cheaper price, I could buy it at that price.

The phrase 'cheaper price' needs the article 'a' before it. Also, 'buy with that price' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at' and the object 'it' should be included.

× If I could buy that for cheaper price, I could buy with that price.

✓ If I could buy that for a cheaper price, I could buy it at that price.

The preposition 'with' is incorrect here; 'at' is the correct preposition to indicate price.

× I go gyms

✓ I go to gyms

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' before a place noun like 'gyms'.

× I don't buy somethings buy something by just checking its price.

✓ I don't buy something just by checking its price.

'Somethings' is incorrect; the correct form is 'something' as it is an uncountable pronoun here. Also, 'buy something by just checking' is better phrased as 'buy something just by checking'.