Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更直接并减少语法错误，同时用连接词使句子更连贯。可以把话分成主题句+具体例子，注意时态和代词用法，避免重复。可以删减多余表述，控制在3-4句内。

예시: Yes, I'm good at giving gifts. I usually try to choose something that matches the recipient's style, such as a dress I bought for a friend last week which suited her perfectly. She was very pleased and thanked me a lot.

제안: 回答需更简洁并使用连贯的连接词，避免重复并补充具体例子或频率说明。注意冠词和复数形式，用一句主题句加一两句细节。

예시: I usually give gifts on important occasions, especially birthdays and anniversaries. For example, I often prepare presents for close friends during Spring Festival and Christmas.

제안: 内容含糊且有许多停顿与重复。应明确列出考虑因素并给出具体理由或例子，避免矛eting（犹豫）词汇，保持句子流畅。注意语法（consider后不加about），区分“expensive”与“cheap”如何选择。

예시: I consider the recipient's preferences, the product's quality and the colour. For instance, if someone prefers practical gifts I choose a high-quality watch; if they like fashion, I focus on colour and style.

제안: 回答内容较好但句子结构和词汇需更准确。用一两句说明原因，再举具体例子并注意语法（e.g. ‘photo frames for two close friends’, ‘strengthen’）。保持自然连贯。

예시: Yes, I often give handmade gifts because they show my gratitude. For example, I made photo frames for two close friends with pictures of our memories, which strengthened our friendship.

제안: 观点可以更有层次，避免笼统重复。说明同意或不同意并给出原因和例子，比如情感更取决于用心而非价格。注意句子简练和代词使用。

예시: I don't think price always matters. While an expensive gift can impress someone, a thoughtful present that suits the person's taste often expresses feelings better—for example, a hand-written letter or a meaningful souvenir.

× I think I'm the person who is really good at giving gifts to others because I will choose the gift that suitable for others.

✓ I think I'm the person who is really good at giving gifts to others because I will choose the gift that is suitable for others.

句子中缺少系动词“is”来连接主语和形容词短语“suitable for others”。这是动词现在分词/系动词使用的问题。改正后语法完整，意思清楚。建议在形容词前加上适当的系动词（如 is/are）或使用关系从句时保持动词完整。

× For example, last week is my friend's birthday and I choose a dress suit her very well.

✓ For example, last week was my friend's birthday and I chose a dress that suited her very well.

句子描述过去发生的事件，但使用了现在时“is”和一般现在“choose”，应使用过去时“was”和“chose”。此外，关系从句也需要过去形式“suited”。建议在叙述过去事件时统一使用过去时态。

× She sent for me a lot because this dress is very beautiful and she love it very much.

✓ She thanked me a lot because this dress is very beautiful and she loved it very much.

原句中“sent for me a lot”用法错误，应为“thanked me a lot”。另外主句叙述过去事件，应将“love”改为过去式“loved”。这是代词/动词搭配和时态使用的问题。建议注意固定搭配并与上下文时态一致。

× I will always give gifts to others on important occasions, especially in their birthday or anniversaries, because these days are very important events that they really wanted to receive gifts, for example, on the Spring Festival or the Christmas days and on their birthday.

✓ I always give gifts to others on important occasions, especially on their birthdays or anniversaries, because these days are events when they really want to receive gifts, for example, the Spring Festival, Christmas, and their birthday.

问题包括介词使用错误（应为 on their birthdays 而不是 in their birthday），复数/单数不一致，以及时态和表达习惯（不应使用过去时 wanted，且不需要重复“on”太多次）。建议：1）重要节日用介词 on；2）birthday 应用复数 birthdays 表示一般习惯；3）表达习惯性动作用一般现在时。

× I will always choose.

✓ I will always choose gifts carefully.

原句不完整，缺少宾语或补充信息，导致句子结构错误。根据上下文需要补全宾语以表达完整意思。建议在口语中给出完整短语，如 choose gifts carefully 或 choose something appropriate。

× Well, actually I will consider about the product's quality and the color if we, if I choose the item for the other people, uh, especially I will choose the expensive ones and the cheaper ones because I think that expensive items have good quality and the cheaper one uh, I will buy some watches and uh.

✓ Well, actually I consider the product's quality and color when I choose an item for other people. I especially pay attention to both expensive and cheaper options because I think expensive items have good quality; for cheaper ones I might buy watches, etc.

不应使用介词短语“consider about”，正确搭配是 consider sth。句子冗长且结构混乱，代词和单复数不一致（the cheaper one → cheaper ones）。建议使用简洁句子分开表达，注意 consider 后直接接宾语，名词单复数一致。

× I always give others handmade gift because I think that handmade gifts can show my gratitude and for example I always make some photo frame of two my close friends.

✓ I always give others handmade gifts because I think handmade gifts can show my gratitude. For example, I always make photo frames for two of my close friends.

原句中“handmade gift”单复数使用不一致，且“make some photo frame of two my close friends” 的量词和介词用法不当，应为 photo frames for two of my close friends。建议注意可数名词的单复数和正确介词搭配。

× It is a symbol of our friendship and I think to give this as a gift can stronger our friendship.

✓ It is a symbol of our friendship, and I think giving this as a gift can strengthen our friendship.

原句中“can stronger our friendship”错误地用比较级“stronger”作动词，正确动词应为 strengthen（使……更强）。同时，动名词短语 giving 更适合作主语。建议记住动词和形容词的区分以及动词使用形式。

× Oh, actually I think so, because expensive gifts have good quality and beautiful colors.

✓ Oh, actually I think so, because expensive gifts have good quality and beautiful colors.

此句语法本身基本正确，但可注意“have good quality”通常不用复数指代抽象属性，可改为 has good quality 或 are of good quality。这里列为冠词/文章相关提醒。建议在需要时使用更自然的表达：Expensive gifts are usually of good quality and have attractive colors.

× If I give the If people give the expensive gift to the others, the other will feel very happy and enjoyable to receive these gifts, and it can bring them a sense of happiness to better express.

✓ If people give expensive gifts to others, the recipients will feel very happy to receive them, and it can bring a strong sense of happiness that better expresses the giver's feelings.

原句重复（If I give the If people give），结构混乱，代词不明确（the other → the recipients），形容词/副词用法错误（enjoyable 用法不当），结尾短语不完整。建议：1）避免重复；2）明确指代；3）使用合适的形容词和完整从句表达目的。