Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise, and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples. Use proper nouns (e.g., Christmas) and correct collocations (e.g., "special occasions," "birthdays"). Avoid redundancy and limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I think I'm good at giving gifts. I enjoy choosing presents for special occasions such as birthdays and Christmas, and I try to pick items that suit each person's tastes.

제안: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then give a couple of specific occasions. Use correct names ("Valentine's Day," "anniversaries") and simple linking words if needed. Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

예시: I usually give gifts on occasions like Valentine's Day, birthdays and anniversaries. I also give small presents on less formal days, such as Chocolate Day or when friends achieve something.

제안: Organize your answer: state the main consideration, then give specific examples. Use clear vocabulary ("age," "interests," "hobbies") and correct grammar. Use linking words like "for example" or "for instance." Limit to 2–3 sentences with concrete details.

예시: I think about the person's age and interests when choosing a gift. For example, I would buy books for children, music or novels for adults, and practical items like a nice coffee set for a friend who likes coffee.

제안: Respond with a clear statement and one or two specific examples of handmade gifts you have given. Use correct nouns and article usage ("a handmade bag," "handmade flowers"). Keep the answer natural and concise.

예시: Yes, I have. For example, I once made a small fabric bag and a paper flower bouquet for a friend, and I also knitted a toy for my niece.

제안: Give a clear opinion sentence, then support it with a reason and an example. Use correct sentence structure and linking words ("because," "for instance"). Avoid repetition and aim for 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better because the thought behind a present matters more than its price. For instance, a thoughtful homemade card or a useful item chosen for the person's tastes can be more meaningful than an expensive but impersonal gift.

× Yeah, I really think I'm good at giving a gifts in special days like body birthday, Christmas tree, Rose Day, others celebrate day.

✓ Yeah, I really think I'm good at giving gifts on special days like birthdays, Christmas, Rose Day, and other celebration days.

Use plural 'gifts' (no article 'a') and 'on special days' (correct preposition). 'Body birthday' is incorrect; change to 'birthdays'. 'Christmas tree' should be 'Christmas' as an occasion. List items should be plural or consistent. Suggestion: remove the article before 'gifts' and use 'on' for days, use plural forms for recurring events.

× I usually do gift some to others in chocolate day, Valentine day, birthday, birthday in marriage, marriage engagements, others day.

✓ I usually give gifts to others on Chocolate Day, Valentine's Day, birthdays, wedding anniversaries, engagements, and other special days.

Use 'give gifts' instead of 'do gift some'. Use preposition 'to' for recipients and 'on' for days. Capitalize event names and use correct forms: 'Valentine's Day', 'wedding anniversaries' instead of 'birthday in marriage'. Use plural where appropriate. Suggestion: say 'I usually give gifts to others on...'.

× I consider so where where I can give some person I usually look her is I give child to book an adult to some musics of books, story gifts and some marriage time. I usually gift us coffee.

✓ When choosing a gift, I think about who I can give it to; for a child I usually choose a book, for an adult I choose music, books, or stories; for weddings I choose something appropriate. I also sometimes give coffee.

Original has unclear pronouns and word order. Use 'who' instead of 'some person' and 'give it to' for the gift. Use parallel structure: 'for a child... for an adult...'. 'Musics' is incorrect; use 'music'. 'I usually gift us coffee' is wrong pronoun and verb usage — use 'I sometimes give coffee' or 'I also sometimes give coffee as a gift'. Suggestion: plan sentences with clear subject and direct object and maintain parallel lists.

× Yeah, I exactly give a handmade gift like bag, bag and flower some toy.

✓ Yes, I have given handmade gifts such as bags, flowers, and toys.

Use present perfect 'have given' to indicate experience. 'Exactly' is not appropriate; use 'Yes' or 'I have'. Use 'such as' for examples. Use plural forms 'bags' and 'toys' and correct order 'flowers' not 'bag and flower some toy'. Suggestion: use 'I have given handmade gifts such as...'.

× No, I do not think it's expensive gifts better expensive my feelings because I usually think a gift is not for look expensive. You just take a gift like that people Does your gift like or not only I like attractive gift.

✓ No, I do not think expensive gifts better express my feelings because I usually think a gift does not need to look expensive. What matters is whether the recipient likes the gift; I only prefer attractive gifts.

Awkward comparative structure 'better expensive my feelings' incorrect — use 'better express my feelings'. 'A gift is not for look expensive' should be 'a gift does not need to look expensive'. 'You just take a gift like that people Does your gift like or not only I like attractive gift' is unclear; rewrite to 'What matters is whether the recipient likes the gift; I only prefer attractive gifts.' Suggestions: use correct verb 'express', use clear subject-verb-object order, and separate ideas into sentences.