Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and pluralization, and avoid repetition. Add one specific example of a gift to make the answer more concrete. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts. I usually make a short list of ideas for friends and my mother for birthdays or special occasions, and I feel excited while planning. For example, I once gave my mother a photo album I made, which she loved.

제안: Use a clear topic sentence and correct grammar. Name specific occasions and explain briefly why you give gifts then. Avoid unclear phrases like “when kids for them.” Use linking words for coherence.

예시: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays, Halloween, and national holidays. I give gifts then because these days are meaningful and people expect small presents, and I enjoy seeing their reactions.

제안: Begin with a direct topic sentence and correct prepositions/word forms. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a specific example of a consideration such as the person’s hobby. Keep sentences clear and concise.

예시: I consider whether the gift will make the recipient feel happy and whether it fits their interests. Additionally, I check that the price is affordable; for example, I choose a book for a friend who likes reading because it shows thought and stays within my budget.

제안: Start with a clear statement and use correct tense. Explain briefly why you want to try making handmade gifts and give a specific idea of what you might make. Use linking words to add coherence.

예시: No, I haven't made a handmade gift yet, but I plan to try because handmade items feel more touching and memorable. For example, I might make a simple scrapbook with photos and notes to show how much I care.

제안: Answer directly and use correct grammar and structure. Provide a brief reason and an example comparing expensive and thoughtful inexpensive gifts. Use linking words for clarity.

예시: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. What matters is the thought behind a gift; for instance, a heartfelt letter or a small handmade item can mean more than an expensive object because it shows personal effort.

× 'I think I'm very good at giving gift and I'm plan a list of gift I will put to my friends or my mother's birthday, birthday or special occasions and I feel very excited when I'm planning them.'

✓ 'I think I'm very good at giving gifts and I'm planning a list of gifts I will give to my friends for my mother's birthday or other special occasions, and I feel very excited when I'm planning them.'

'Singular and plural issue: gift -> gifts (plural) because you refer to more than one item. Also 'a list of gift' -> 'a list of gifts'. Other linked issues: 'I'm plan' is incorrect tense/structure (see ID 6 and 26) so corrected to 'I'm planning' to match present continuous. 'put to my friends' is wrong preposition/verb choice; corrected to 'give to my friends'. Combine 'my mother's birthday, birthday or special occasions' to 'my mother's birthday or other special occasions' for clarity.'},{