Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct common errors (e.g. "good at giving gifts", "I find it difficult", avoid sentence fragments).

예시: No, I'm not very good at giving gifts. I often find it difficult to choose because I think about many options and worry whether the person will like my choice.

제안: Answer the question directly with a clear time expression, then give one or two specific examples. Use linking words and correct tense. Avoid repetitions and unfinished phrases.

예시: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as birthdays and anniversaries. For example, before becoming a parent I often bought presents for friends' birthday parties.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence listing the main factors, then expand with specific, coherent details and linking words. Fix grammar (e.g. "their", "preferences"). Avoid unclear phrases like "closest when shopping".

예시: I consider the recipient's preferences and gender when choosing a gift. For instance, if they like reading I might buy a book, but if they prefer fashion I would choose clothing or accessories.

제안: Respond clearly and give a short reason, then optionally add a brief example. Use full sentences and correct word order; avoid repetition.

예시: No, I haven't. I'm not skilled at crafts, so I usually buy gifts from shops instead—for example, I often purchase a nice scarf or a decorative item.

제안: Give a clear opinion (yes/no) and support it with a reason and a brief illustration. Use correct vocabulary ("expensive gifts"), grammar, and a linking word like "because" or "however".

예시: I don't think so because expensive gifts don't necessarily show care. What matters more is whether the gift suits the person's tastes or shows that you know them well.

× No, I don't think I'm good at. Giving gift because I always feel difficulty whenever I choose gift for someone, I consider many options.

✓ No, I don't think I'm good at giving gifts because I always have difficulty whenever I choose a gift for someone; I consider many options.

Run-on sentence, misplaced period, and plural/singular errors. 'Good at' should be followed by a verb phrase 'giving gifts' (plural). 'Giving gift' is incorrect; use 'giving gifts'. Use 'have difficulty' instead of 'feel difficulty'. Combine clauses with appropriate punctuation or conjunctions to avoid fragments and run-ons. Suggestions: remove the period after 'at', change 'Giving gift' to 'giving gifts', change 'feel difficulty' to 'have difficulty', and use 'a gift' for singular or 'gifts' for general statements.

× Or I usually give gifts. When in special occasions like birthday party before I I'm parent I usually give gave a gift.

✓ I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthday parties; before I became a parent, I usually gave a gift.

Multiple tense and structure errors. 'When in special occasions' should be 'on special occasions'. 'Birthday party' should be plural when speaking generally. 'Before I I'm parent' is ungrammatical; use 'before I became a parent'. 'I usually give gave a gift' mixes present and past; use past 'gave' for actions before becoming a parent and present 'give' for current habit. Ensure tense consistency and correct preposition use.

× I consider the their gender and preference. So one of the gift I the like to give is closest when shopping is give is gift.

✓ I consider their gender and preferences. One type of gift I like to give is something chosen in person when shopping.

Incorrect and extra articles/pronouns: 'the their' is redundant; use 'their'. 'Preference' should be plural when referring to general choices. The second sentence is garbled; unclear phrases like 'I the like' and 'closest when shopping' need rephrasing. I reconstructed meaning to indicate preferring to choose gifts in person. Suggestion: simplify sentences, remove extra articles, and use correct plural forms.

× No, not really, because I'm not good at making something, so I prefer to. I prefer giving. A gift to to buy shop.

✓ No, not really, because I'm not good at making things, so I prefer to buy gifts from a shop.

Awkward fragments and word choice. 'Making something' is less natural than 'making things'. Fragments like 'I prefer to.' and 'I prefer giving.' break sentence flow. 'A gift to to buy shop' contains repeated 'to' and wrong word order; use 'buy gifts from a shop'. Combine into one clear sentence and keep present tense for general preference.

× I don't think so because pence gift doesn't mean a good gift for.

✓ I don't think so because an expensive gift doesn't necessarily mean it's a better gift.

Multiple errors: 'pence' is a misspelling of 'expensive'. Missing article before 'expensive gift' requires 'an'. Sentence fragment 'for' at end is incorrect. Also need adverb 'necessarily' to convey the idea. Rephrase to 'doesn't necessarily mean it's a better gift' for clarity.