Gifts— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语言不够自然，有些表达重复且不够连贯。建议简化语言，避免重复，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

예시: To be honest, I'm not very good at giving gifts because I often find it hard to choose. Sometimes I like one option but it's too expensive, and other times another option seems better. Overall, I find it challenging to decide.

제안: 回答结构较好，但细节不够具体。建议增加更多具体例子，并使用连接词增强逻辑性。

예시: I usually give gifts in two main situations. Firstly, when someone helps me, either at work or in my personal life, I like to show appreciation by sending a small gift, such as a gift card. Secondly, I also give presents during special occasions like birthdays.

제안: 回答不完整且表达不清晰，最后一句话未完成。建议回答时条理清晰，完整表达观点，并使用连接词。

예시: When choosing a gift, I consider several factors. Firstly, the price is important because I have a budget. Secondly, the gift should have sentimental value to show I care. Finally, I think about the recipient's preferences to make sure they will like it.

제안: 回答较为自然，但表达略显重复。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并增加连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: I have tried to give handmade gifts before, but because my crafting skills are poor, I failed several times. Therefore, I now prefer to buy gifts online, which can be affordable and still meaningful.

제안: 回答观点明确且表达较好，但可以使用更多连接词和具体例子来增强说服力。

예시: I don't believe expensive gifts necessarily express feelings better. Sometimes, inexpensive presents can be very meaningful if they are given with genuine care and thoughtfulness.

× I find option B more compu appealing.

✓ I find option B more appealing.

句中“compu”是拼写错误，应删除以使句子语法正确。这里的错误属于动词后接-ing形式的错误。

× I find it rather difficult to select from a wide range of options.

✓ I find it rather difficult to select from a wide range of options.

该句无语法错误，复数形式使用正确。

× I send gifts to other people mainly in two different contexts.

✓ I send gifts to other people mainly in two different contexts.

该句无语法错误，复数形式使用正确。

× I'm always happy to send someone a little gift, like a gift card or a new toy for children.

✓ I'm always happy to send someone a little gift, like a gift card or a new toy for children.

该句无语法错误，单复数使用正确。

× How much this present is can sometimes be the deciding factor.

✓ How much this present costs can sometimes be the deciding factor.

句中“how much this present is”结构不正确，应使用“how much this present costs”来表达价格。这里属于代词和句子结构错误。

× Finally, you need to think about how.

✓ Finally, you need to think about how to choose.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，导致句子结构错误。应补充完整表达。

× I tried to in the past but unfortunately due to my poor handcraft skills I failed once after once.

✓ I tried in the past but unfortunately, due to my poor handcraft skills, I failed time after time.

“tried to”后缺少动词，且“once after once”表达不自然，应改为“time after time”表示多次失败。这里涉及过去时和表达习惯错误。

× And since then I've been always trying to send someone bought gifts from the shops online because I find that these gifts can be less expensive yet still sentimental.

✓ And since then I've always been trying to send someone bought gifts from shops online because I find that these gifts can be less expensive yet still sentimental.

“I've been always trying”语序不正确，应为“I've always been trying”。此外，“from the shops online”中“the”不必要，应去掉。

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts express your feelings better?

副词“better”位置错误，应放在动词之后修饰动词。

× If it is prepared by someone who has really cared about you, it is acceptable for the present to be relatively cheap.

✓ If it is prepared by someone who really cares about you, it is acceptable for the present to be relatively cheap.

“has really cared”时态不当，应使用一般现在时“really cares”表示持续的关心。