Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct articles and verb forms, avoid filler words, and add one specific example to enrich the answer. Use a linking phrase if adding a reason.

예시: I often visit fashion websites that sell clothes and shoes. For example, I browse online stores for seasonal collections because I like to keep up with trends and occasionally buy items when there are discounts.

제안: Reduce hesitation and repetition, give a direct topic sentence and one or two specific reasons why you like it. Use clear linking words and precise vocabulary (brand name capitalized).

예시: My favorite website is Pantaloons because it offers a wide variety of both modern and traditional clothing. For example, I like that I can find trendy dresses as well as sarees, and the site often shows customer reviews which help me choose.

제안: Organize your answer: start with a clear statement of change, explain specific improvements with correct tense and vocabulary, and avoid filler. Give a concrete example (e.g., faster loading, improved search).

예시: Yes. For example, Pantaloons recently fixed its slow-loading pages and checkout problems, so the site now loads faster and the search function finds new products quickly. As a result, I find shopping there much more convenient.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and provide specific categories with brief explanations and a linking phrase. Finish the thought instead of trailing off.

예시: In my country, e-commerce sites for groceries, clothing, and beauty products are very popular because people are often too busy to shop in person. Consequently, many users prefer online delivery services for convenience and time-saving.

제안: Give a concise, grammatically correct opinion sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and unfinished sentences.

예시: I prefer getting information from websites because they are often free and instantly accessible. For example, I can look up recent articles or watch tutorials online immediately, whereas ordering a book takes time and may cost more.

제안: Start with a direct answer, then explain your plan briefly and specifically. Correct grammar (e.g., "I haven't planned it yet" vs "I haven't planned it yet, but I want to"). Avoid repeating the same idea.

예시: I haven't started building one yet, but I plan to create a website for my fashion brand in the future. I would focus on selling custom sarees, with detailed product pages and a secure payment system for customers.

제안: Be precise and correct pronouns and titles. Start with a topic sentence about learning from websites, then mention one specific example and explain the benefit with a linking word.

예시: Websites have helped me by providing free educational resources. For example, I downloaded the self-help book Atomic Habits, which taught me practical techniques to build daily routines and improve my productivity.

× I often visit websites that sells clothes and shoes.

✓ I often visit websites that sell clothes and shoes.

The relative clause refers to plural noun 'websites', so the verb should be plural 'sell' rather than singular 'sells'. Use subject-verb agreement: plural subject -> plural verb.

× I am a fond of fashion, so I generally scroll through different fashion websites and I sometimes buy from there too.

✓ I am fond of fashion, so I generally scroll through different fashion websites and sometimes buy from them too.

'A fond' is incorrect; 'fond' is an adjective that does not take 'a'. Also 'from there' referring to websites should be 'from them' (plural pronoun). Removing the redundant 'I' before 'sometimes' sounds more natural.

× My favorite website is uh pantaloons, which is a very popular fashion uh, clothes brand.

✓ My favorite website is Pantaloons, which is a very popular fashion clothes brand.

The sentence mainly needs capitalization for the brand. Grammatically, 'clothes brand' is acceptable; no singular/plural verb issue here. However to follow the rule list, ensure brand name is treated as singular with 'is'.

× It uh, has a variety of clothes, which I really like to uh, try, and it has a, a wide range of products ranging from fashionable to uh, traditional clothes.

✓ It has a variety of clothes, which I really like to try, and it has a wide range of products ranging from fashionable to traditional clothes.

This sentence had filler sounds 'uh' and duplicated words; grammatically 'has' with clauses is correct. Removing fillers and duplicate words improves clarity. 'Ranging' is used correctly as a present participle.

× Yeah, for example, uh, in the past Pantalone's website was having several bargaining issues, which was fixed letter.

✓ Yeah, for example, in the past Pantaloons' website had several buffering issues, which were fixed later.

'Pantalone's' misspells brand; possessive placement corrected to 'Pantaloons''. 'Was having' is awkward for past state; use simple past 'had'. 'Bargaining issues' likely meant 'buffering' (technical issue). 'Was fixed letter' is incorrect: plural subject 'issues' takes 'were fixed', and 'later' is correct word.

× So recently when I scroll through it, I really find it comfortable to, uh, find newer products.

✓ So recently when I scroll through it, I find it comfortable to find newer products.

Present tense 'scroll' and 'find' should be consistent; remove filler 'uh'. Using 'recently' with present 'scroll' is acceptable when describing habitual current experience.

× It uh, doesn't get hanged, which is used to in the older.

✓ It doesn't hang or freeze now, which used to happen in the older version.

'Get hanged' is incorrect for software freezing; use 'hang' or 'freeze'. 'Which is used to in the older' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'which used to happen in the older version'. Ensure verb tense 'used to' indicates past habitual problem.

× Different uh, websites like websites that sell uh, grocery product, clothes and even some luxury makeup products are famous in my country.

✓ Different websites that sell groceries, clothes, and even luxury makeup products are popular in my country.

Remove redundant 'websites like websites'. Use plural 'groceries' or 'grocery products'. 'Famous' is better replaced by 'popular' here. Clean up filler words.

× People uh, nowadays are very busy to go outside and do their shopping, so they mainly prefer to buy it online.

✓ People nowadays are too busy to go outside and do their shopping, so they mainly prefer to buy online.

'Busy to go' is awkward; use 'too busy to go'. 'Buy it online' is unclear—use 'buy online' or 'buy things online'. Maintain present simple tense.

× So nowadays websites are getting very.

✓ So nowadays websites are becoming very popular.

Sentence is incomplete: 'getting very' needs a complement like 'popular'. Use 'becoming' or 'getting' followed by adjective.

× I prefer websites because books are expensive nowadays. While in website I can get any information for free and also when I order a book it really takes time to get delivered or I have to go to the book shop and then buy the book.

✓ I prefer websites because books are expensive nowadays. On websites I can get any information for free, and when I order a book it takes time to be delivered or I have to go to the bookshop to buy it.

Use 'On websites' or 'On a website' instead of 'in website'. 'Be delivered' is clearer than 'get delivered'. 'Book shop' can be 'bookshop'. Maintain article use and prepositions.

× But when it comes to website everything is available at an instance so website is.

✓ But when it comes to websites, everything is available instantly, so websites are more convenient.

'At an instance' is incorrect; use 'instantly'. Also 'website is' is incomplete; plural 'websites are' or 'a website is' with completion. Clarify preference.

× I haven't planned it yet, but yeah, I have a goal of build, building my own fashion brand because I am fond of fashion.

✓ I haven't planned it yet, but I have a goal of building my own fashion brand because I am fond of fashion.

Use the gerund 'building' after 'goal of'. Remove duplicated words. Present perfect 'haven't planned' is fine.

× I would like to sell sarees mainly, which is a traditional Indian word.

✓ I would mainly like to sell sarees, which are traditional Indian garments.

'Sarees' is plural, so use plural verb 'are'. Also 'saree' is a garment, not a 'word'. Move 'mainly' to natural position.

× I would like to sell my own custom sarees.

✓ I would like to sell my own custom sarees.

Sentence is already correct; plural 'sarees' matches 'sell'. No change needed.

× There are some websites that offer free books. I have downloaded a self help book from there which was very interesting.

✓ There are some websites that offer free books. I downloaded a self-help book from one of them which was very interesting.

'I have downloaded' could be fine, but simple past 'I downloaded' fits context. 'From there' is vague; use 'from one of them'. Add hyphen in 'self-help'.

× His name was Atomic Habit and it taught me how to build habit and succeed in life.

✓ Its name was Atomic Habits and it taught me how to build habits and succeed in life.

Books are referred to as 'it' with possessive 'its', not 'his'. The correct title is 'Atomic Habits' (plural). Use plural 'habits' when discussing building routines. 'Was' can remain past tense for a past download.