Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答要更自然、准确并避免重复。注意网站名称拼写（Taobao），并使用连贯词连接句子。可用一到两句主题句后用具体细节支持，控制在五句内。还要注意语法，如动词形式和冠词

예시: I usually visit search engines like Baidu to look up information and shopping sites like Taobao to buy daily necessities because they are convenient and time-saving.

제안: 总体不错，表达清晰但有小错误和可改进的词汇搭配。把“variety products”改为“a wide variety of products”并用连接词使句子更流畅。可以补充一两条具体例子支持观点。

예시: My favourite website is Taobao because it offers a wide variety of products at different prices, and the delivery service is usually fast and reliable. For example, I often order kitchen tools and they arrive within two days.

제안: 回答不够清楚且有较多错误（词汇和句子结构混乱，网站名拼写可能错误）。需先直接回答变化是什么，然后用具体细节说明原因或例子，使用连接词使逻辑清晰。

예시: Yes. I used to visit many news sites regularly, but recently I mainly use a search platform like Baidu to browse news and look up information because it aggregates different sources in one place.

제안: 表述含糊且有语法错误。应先给出直接回答，然后用具体原因或例子支持。注意短语使用（比如 'online shopping' 而不是 'shopping in mind'），并修正多余或重复词。

예시: Shopping websites are very popular in my country because online shopping has become a common habit, and video-sharing platforms are also widespread among young people who watch and upload short clips.

제안: 观点明确但有语法小错误（动词不定式和从句结构）。建议用一到两句主题句并用具体原因支持，使用连词使句子更自然。

예시: I prefer getting information from websites because they are more convenient and faster to search. For example, I can quickly find articles and tutorials online instead of spending hours looking through books.

제안: 回答流畅且内容具体，但可改进连贯性与词汇（例如 'of course' 放在句首不自然）。可稍微重组句子并给出具体内容或目标读者。

예시: Of course I would. Although I lack technical skills to build a site myself, if I had the chance I would create a website to share my cooking recipes and tips for busy students.

제안: 回答含糊且有语法和词汇错误（如 'feature resources'、冗余的填充词）。应明确列举具体学到的内容或资源并说明如何有帮助，避免口头语并使用连接词。

예시: I have learned many practical skills from websites, such as study techniques and recipe videos. I often download useful resources like lecture notes and practice exercises, which help me save time and improve my grades.

× I tend to Baidu to look up some information.

✓ I tend to use Baidu to look up information.

问题类型：26 句子结构错误、8 动词+ -ing 或需动词使用。原句中缺少动词“use”，使结构不完整；另外“some information”可简化为“information”。建议在表达“倾向于使用百度查信息”时使用固定搭配“tend to do sth”，即“tend to use Baidu to ...”。

× As for Taobao, I use it to buy some daily items which is a very convenient.

✓ As for Taobao, I use it to buy some daily items, which is very convenient.

问题类型：26 句子结构错误、13 形容词/副词使用不当。原句中“which is a very convenient”结构不当：which引导的非限制性定语从句应指代整个前述事实，形容词“convenient”为表语，不需要不定冠词“a”。改为“which is very convenient”，并用逗号分隔。

× Well, my favorite website is definitely Taobao because there are variety products available online.

✓ Well, my favorite website is definitely Taobao because there are a variety of products available online.

问题类型：14 量词错误、1 单复数问题、22 冠词错误。短语“variety products”不正确，正确搭配为“a variety of products”。需要冠词“a”并在“variety of”后接复数名词。

× The parks are always visiting news websites to get the latest news, but now I mainly rely on Binder to search to browse some news and look up some information.

✓ I used to always visit news websites to get the latest news, but now I mainly rely on Bing to browse news and look up information.

问题类型：26 句子结构错误、12 代词/人称使用不当、6 现在时/过去时选择错误。原句“The parks are always visiting...”主语错误且时态混乱；“Binder”应为搜索引擎“Bing”；“search to browse”重复且不自然。改为“I used to always visit...”表示过去常常现在改变，后半句用“mainly rely on Bing to browse news and look up information”。

× Now, I think shopping websites are popular in my country because shopping in mind has become an increasingly a common place in China.

✓ Now, I think shopping websites are popular in my country because online shopping has become increasingly common in China.

问题类型：26 句子结构错误、13 形容词/副词使用不当、22 冠词错误。原句“shopping in mind”“a common place”词不达意且多余冠词。应使用“online shopping has become increasingly common”表示“网上购物变得越来越普遍”。

× What's more, video sharing websites are also widespread among young people they.

✓ What's more, video-sharing websites are also widespread among young people.

问题类型：26 句子结构错误、20 副词位置或多余代词。原句末尾多余“they”，导致句子残缺或重复。删除“they”后句子完整且语法正确。

× Well, I definitely prefer get information from websites and since it is much more convenient.

✓ Well, I definitely prefer to get information from websites since it is much more convenient.

问题类型：8 动词+ -ing形式或不定式错误。动词“prefer”后面应接不定式“to do sth”或动名词，但此处更自然为“不定式”：“prefer to get”。同时删除多余“and”。

× It is of course, but I know creating a website is quite challenging for me since I don't have much relevant technical skills.

✓ Of course I'd like to, but I know creating a website would be quite challenging for me since I don't have many relevant technical skills.

问题类型：26 句子结构错误、22 冠词错误、1 单复数问题、6 现在时/条件用法。原句“It is of course”不自然，应回答“Of course I'd like to”。“much relevant technical skills”与可数名词“skills”搭配应使用“many”。另外表达愿望与假设时用“would be”更合适。

× But if I got a chance, I'd like to share my cooking skills with my website.

✓ But if I got a chance, I'd like to share my cooking skills on my website.

问题类型：7 未来时/条件句用法、11 介词使用错误。介词应为“on my website”表示“在网站上”。（也可用“If I got a chance”或更正式“If I got the chance”保持条件式。）

× Well, I have learned a lot of practical things on the website and I usually download some feature resources to around students interest.

✓ Well, I have learned a lot of practical things on websites, and I usually download some useful resources related to students' interests.

问题类型：22 冠词错误、1 单复数问题、13 形容词/副词使用不当、11 介词使用错误。原句“the website”不明确，应为“websites”；“feature resources to around students interest”词序和词汇不当，改为“useful resources related to students' interests”。注意“students'”作复数所有格。

× What's more, I can also get handy life advice, uh, which, uh, makes my life.

✓ What's more, I can also get handy life advice, which makes my life easier.

问题类型：26 句子结构错误、13 形容词/副词使用不当。原句“makes my life”不完整，缺少表语“easier/ better”等。补全为“makes my life easier”。