Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g. “current news” and “current events”).

예시: I often use Google to find information quickly. For example, I check Google News every morning to catch up on headlines and read articles about local politics and technology.

제안: Fix grammatical errors and be specific. Use one clear reason and a concrete example. Use linking words like “for example” correctly and avoid unnecessary phrases.

예시: My favourite website is Yahoo because it offers many useful services in one place. For example, I use Yahoo to check train timetables and weather forecasts when I plan my day.

제안: Improve accuracy and fluency. Give a clear topic sentence, then describe one specific change with a linking word. Correct awkward phrases and pronunciation errors in speech (e.g. 'really' not 'railed').

예시: I haven't noticed any major changes to the sites I use. However, recently the layout was slightly updated, so the navigation menus are clearer and easier to use.

제안: Be more general about popular website types first, then give a specific example. Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g. 'train times' and 'help you plan'). Use linking words to structure the answer.

예시: News portals and search engines are popular in my country because people want quick access to information. For example, Yahoo is widely used for train timetables and up-to-date news, which helps commuters plan their journeys.

제안: Make a clear direct statement and support it with concise, specific reasons. Correct grammar and remove repetitions like 'it's it's' or 'always' twice. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example'.

예시: I prefer getting information from websites because they are more convenient and usually have the latest updates. For example, I check online articles for current statistics rather than using older printed books.

제안: Clarify purpose and give a specific plan or benefit. Start with a direct answer, then give one concrete reason and an example. Avoid vague phrasing like 'you want to read'.

예시: Yes, I would like my own website because it would let me organize news and resources in one place. For instance, I could create sections for tech updates and study materials so I can quickly find articles relevant to my work.

제안: Tighten the answer: start with a topic sentence, then give a specific example. Fix grammar and word order (e.g. 'it helps me plan my journey'). Use linking words like 'for example' correctly.

예시: Websites have helped me with daily planning, especially train timetables that make travel easier. For example, last week I used an online schedule to find an earlier train so I could arrive on time for an important meeting.

× I usually visit Google because they provide a wide range of information that I need, but I especially I'll see current news on the website to catch up the current events.

✓ I usually visit Google because it provides a wide range of information that I need, and I especially look at current news on the website to catch up on current events.

Use of pronoun: 'Google' is a singular company and should take the singular pronoun 'it' (Pronoun error, refer to Grammar Problem Type ID 12). Tense and verb form: 'I'll see' is incorrect here; use simple present 'look at' for habitual actions (Present tense issue, ID 6). Preposition: use 'catch up on' rather than 'catch up' followed by object (Incorrect use of prepositions, ID 11). Combine corrections for a natural, grammatically correct sentence.

× My favorite website is Yahoo because to provide a wide range of information and services that I often need.

✓ My favorite website is Yahoo because it provides a wide range of information and services that I often need.

Conjunction/structure error: 'because to provide' is ungrammatical. Use 'because it provides' to introduce the reason (Incorrect conjunction/use of clause, ID 16). Pronoun: 'Yahoo' is singular so use 'it' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12).

× For example, they provide they teach me the train times to plan my schedule.

✓ For example, it shows me the train times to help me plan my schedule.

Pronoun: 'Yahoo' is singular so use 'it' instead of 'they' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). Redundancy and verb choice: 'provide they teach me' is ungrammatical; use a single verb phrase such as 'shows me' and 'help me' rather than 'to plan my schedule' without a subject (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Use 'help me plan' instead of 'which help you plan' to match subject and pronoun.

× I haven't noticed the significant changes to the website, but the it's railed changed a little bit so navigation is a little bit clearer.

✓ I haven't noticed any significant changes to the website, but it has changed a little, so the navigation is a bit clearer.

Determiner/article: use 'any significant changes' rather than 'the significant changes' (Article errors, ID 22). Pronoun and contraction: 'the it's railed changed' is incorrect; use 'it has changed' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12; Verb in the past participle/present perfect usage, ID 9). Word choice and redundancy: 'a little bit' can be simplified to 'a little' and 'a little bit clearer' to 'a bit clearer' for natural phrasing.

× Yahoo is the most popular in my country because they provide a wide range of information and services.

✓ Yahoo is the most popular in my country because it provides a wide range of information and services.

Pronoun/subject-verb agreement: 'Yahoo' is singular and requires 'it provides' rather than 'they provide' (Subject-verb agreement and Incorrect use of pronouns, IDs 27 and 12).

× For example, you can check the Time Time Train which help you plan your schedule and you can also see a lot of news on going.

✓ For example, you can check the train timetable, which helps you plan your schedule, and you can also see a lot of ongoing news.

Word choice and redundancy: 'Time Time Train' is unclear; 'train timetable' or 'train times' is correct (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Relative clause agreement: use 'which helps' to agree with singular 'timetable' (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Phrase 'a lot of news on going' is incorrect; use 'ongoing news' or 'a lot of news' (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, ID 13).

× I prepare the website rather than getting information from books because always it's it's always more convenient and have recent updated information on the website, so I prefer getting information from websites.

✓ I prefer websites to books because they are always more convenient and have more recently updated information, so I prefer getting information from websites.

Verb preference and word order: 'I prepare the website' is incorrect; use 'I prefer websites' (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Redundancy: remove duplicate 'it's it's always' and use 'they are always' to refer to 'websites' (Pronoun error, ID 12). Agreement: 'have recent updated information' should be 'have more recently updated information' or 'have recently updated information' (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs or participle form, IDs 13 and 10).

× Yes, I would because I believe having my own website would be much easier and more convenient to find the news that you want to read.

✓ Yes, I would, because I believe having my own website would make it much easier and more convenient to find the news I want to read.

Missing object and infinitive structure: use 'make it much easier' rather than 'would be much easier' plus an infinitive (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Pronoun shift: change 'you want to read' to 'I want to read' to match the speaker's perspective (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12).

× One is for websites I usually use shows train timetables which I find extremely convenient because it helps me, my plan and my journey.

✓ One website I usually use shows train timetables, which I find extremely convenient because it helps my planning and my journeys.

Sentence structure and punctuation: awkward ordering 'One is for websites I usually use shows' should be 'One website I usually use shows' (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Pronoun/verb agreement: 'it helps me, my plan and my journey' is awkward; use 'it helps my planning and my journeys' or 'it helps me plan my journey' (Incorrect use of pronouns and noun forms, IDs 12 and 13).

× For example, last week I checked the site to find an earlier train for an important meeting.

✓ For example, last week I checked the site and found an earlier train for an important meeting.

Tense consistency and verb usage: 'I checked the site to find an earlier train' is understandable but 'checked and found' is a clearer past narrative showing the completed action (Past tense issue, ID 5). Using simple past for both verbs makes the sequence clear.