Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: start with a clear topic sentence naming the websites, use correct verb forms and articles, and give one specific detail about how the site helps you. Limit to 2–4 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "for example."

예시: I often visit English-learning websites such as noway.com because I want to improve my language skills. For example, the site offers daily exercises and quizzes that help me with grammar and vocabulary.

제안: Be more precise and natural: state the website and why you like it with accurate grammar and a linking phrase. Give a specific feature you enjoy. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

예시: My favorite website is beautycouncil.com because it makes learning English fun. I especially like its short video lessons and interactive quizzes, so I use it almost every day.

제안: Clarify meaning and use correct tense and vocabulary: say what changed and why, and give a concrete example of a change. Use linking words like "because" and "for example." Avoid repetition and filler words.

예시: Yes, the websites have changed over time because the developers improved their design and added new features. For example, they now include interactive exercises and a mobile-friendly layout, which makes learning easier.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and a specific reason or example: mention types of popular sites and explain why people use them. Fix word order and redundancy, and finish the sentence fully.

예시: Online shopping websites are very popular in my country because they are convenient and offer many choices. For example, people often use Amazon and local e-commerce platforms to buy clothes, electronics and groceries.

제안: Provide a balanced, complete response with reasons: start with a clear preference or say you like both, then give one specific advantage of websites and one of books. Avoid trailing off and fillers.

예시: I like both, but I usually prefer websites for quick information because they are convenient and up-to-date. However, I prefer books when I need deep, reliable explanations or detailed study material.

제안: State your intention clearly and give one specific purpose and a brief detail about content or audience. Use correct grammar and avoid unnecessary words.

예시: Yes, I would like to create a website in the future to share tips on how to learn English independently. It would include study plans, helpful resources and personal practice exercises for learners.

제안: Make a direct statement about what you learned, then give a specific example of a useful resource or skill. Use linking words and correct grammar; keep it concise.

예시: I have learned English vocabulary and grammar from websites that offer structured lessons. For example, online courses and grammar exercises helped me improve my writing and listening skills at home.

× I received egg noway.com almost every day because I try to improve my English skill.

✓ I visit eggnoway.com almost every day because I try to improve my English skills.

The sentence misuses 'received' instead of 'visit' and omits articles and plural for 'skills'. 'Eggnoway.com' is a website name and should be used with 'visit'. Use plural 'skills' when referring to English abilities. Also no article is needed before a website name. Suggestion: use correct verb for frequent visits and pluralize 'skills'.

× This website are about practice English and I'll exam it's very convenient.

✓ This website is about practicing English and I think it's very convenient.

Subject-verb agreement: 'website' is singular so use 'is' not 'are'. 'Practice English' should be a gerund phrase 'practicing English'. 'I'll exam' is ungrammatical; likely 'I think' is intended. Use 'it's' to refer to the website's convenience.

× My favorite website is uh beautycouncil.com which is web about learning English is really fun and enjoy.

✓ My favorite website is beautycouncil.com, which is a website about learning English; it is really fun and enjoyable.

The clause needs a relative structure: 'which is a website' and an article 'a'. 'Web' should be 'website'. Adjective/adverb choice: 'enjoy' is a verb; use 'enjoyable' as an adjective. Split into clearer clauses for correctness.

× I use website almost everyday.

✓ I use the website almost every day.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'website' when referring to a specific site. 'Everyday' (adjective) vs 'every day' (adverbial phrase): use 'every day' to indicate frequency.

× Yes, it changed over time because, uh, they want to develop good version, but I but I really good of it because it's very youthful and help me to learn English.

✓ Yes, it has changed over time because they want to develop a better version, and I really like it because it's very fresh and helps me learn English.

Tense consistency: use present perfect 'has changed' for change over time. 'They want' is present but fits as reason. 'Good version' should be 'a better version' with article. 'I really good of it' is incorrect; likely 'I really like it'. 'Youthful' is odd for a website; 'fresh' or 'youthful' as adjective is fine. 'Help' requires third-person singular 'helps' to agree with 'it'.

× Well, I think website about shopping online, for example, Amazon is very popular around the world.

✓ Well, I think websites about online shopping, for example Amazon, are very popular around the world.

Count nouns: 'website' should be plural 'websites' when speaking generally. Word order: 'online shopping' modifies 'websites'. Subject-verb agreement changed: 'are' for plural subject.

× People can buy any almost anything on this website.

✓ People can buy almost anything on this website.

Redundant quantifiers 'any almost anything' is incorrect. Use 'almost anything' to express near-unlimited range.

× I prefer both experience umm. Sometime I prefer getting information from website because it's very convenient and easy to access, but sometime I prefer.

✓ I prefer both, sometimes. Sometimes I prefer getting information from websites because they're very convenient and easy to access, but other times I prefer books.

Adverb placement and repetition: 'sometime' vs 'sometimes'—use plural 'sometimes' for frequency. Include article/plural 'websites' and ensure pronoun agreement 'they're'. Complete the contrast by adding 'other times I prefer books' to finish the sentence logically.

× Well, I would in the future I want to own website about sharing experience How to learn English by yourself. Yes is.

✓ Well, in the future I would like to own a website about sharing experiences on how to learn English by yourself.

Modal and structure: 'would' needs complement 'like'. Include article 'a' before 'website'. 'Sharing experience' should be plural 'sharing experiences' and preposition 'on' before 'how to'. Remove extraneous 'Yes is'.

× I learned English from website. Uh, well, nowadays I think it's very convenient and people can access website easily, so they can improve English by yourself at home.

✓ I learn English from websites. Nowadays I think it's very convenient and people can access websites easily, so they can improve their English by themselves at home.

Tense: use present simple 'I learn' or present perfect 'I have learned' depending on meaning; use plural 'websites' when general. Pronoun and reflexive: use 'their' and 'themselves' not 'yourself'. Add articles where needed and ensure consistency.