Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Javobda aniq gap tuzilishi va grammatik xatolar ko‘p. Savolga to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri boshlang (topic sentence), so‘ngra bitta yoki ikki qo‘shimcha tafsilot bering. Hozirgi javobda redundans va so‘z tanlash xatolari mavjud (masalan, "I's websites", "search I's"). Har bir gapni qisqa va aniq uslubda, bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (for example, "because", "so", "and") foydalangan holda tuzing. Mashq uchun: 1) Exam-related websites; 2) specific purpose (listening/reading); 3) how often.

예시: I often visit exam preparation websites because I am studying for my exams. For example, I use sites that offer reading and listening practice tests. I usually do exercises on those sites three or four times a week to improve my skills.

제안: Javob juda noaniq va grammatik xatolar ko‘p. "Good smell" yoki "very clean" kabi ifodalar kontekstga mos emas. Javobni sodda va ma'lum faktlar bilan to‘ldiring: sayt nomi, nima uchun yoqadi (masalan, foydali materiallar, oson navigatsiya), va qanday foydalanasiz. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlar orqali mantiqiy ketma-ketlik yarating.

예시: My favourite website is Macarena because it has clear lessons and lots of practice tests. I like its simple layout, so I can find listening or reading exercises quickly. I usually use it before exams to practise under timed conditions.

제안: Javob tartibsiz va murakkab gaplarni noto‘g‘ri ishlatgansiz. Savol o‘zgarishlar haqida — demakki o‘zgarishlarni aniq ta'riflang: yangilanishlar, dizayn, yangi funksiyalar, yoki xatoliklar. Fikrni bog‘lash uchun "sometimes", "however", "because" kabi bog‘lovchilardan foydalaning va ortiqcha takrorlarni olib tashlang.

예시: Yes, many websites have changed recently. For example, they updated their design and added new practice features, although sometimes I notice bugs. Overall, these improvements make the sites more useful for learners.

제안: Javob mavzuni tushuntiradi, lekin takror va uzun gaplar bor. To‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri topic sentence bilan boshlang, keyin sabab va shaxsiy misol bering. Keraksiz takrorlarni kamaytiring va aniq so‘zlar ishlating (masalan, "interesting and entertaining").

예시: In my country, history websites are very popular because many people want to learn about our past. For example, I often read articles about the history of Bukhara because I find them interesting and entertaining. These sites provide photos and stories that attract many readers.

제안: Javob aniq va javob beradi, ammo grammatik xatolar bor (masalan, "to reading", "first reason"). Qisqaroq va grammatik jihatdan to‘g‘ri gaplar tuzing: asosiy sabab, aniq misol, va xulosa. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan foydalang.

예시: I prefer getting information from websites because I work at a school and do not have enough time to read books. Websites are more convenient and faster when I need a quick answer. For example, I often search online for lesson plans or teaching resources.

제안: Javobda ma'no yaxshi, lekin idiomatik xatolar va grammatik noto‘g‘ri ishlatishlar mavjud ("didn't eat" noto'g'ri). Aniqlik bilan vaqt va sabablarni ayting: xohishingiz, oldingi urinish, nima to‘sib qo‘ygan. Qisqa va mantiqiy gaplardan foydalaning.

예시: Yes, I would like to have my own website. A few months ago I started learning how to build one, but I could not continue because I was very busy with work. I hope to return to it when I have more free time.

제안: Javob noaniq va yakunlanmagan. Savolga aniq misollar va natijalarni keltiring: nimani o‘rgandingiz, qanday usullar yordam berdi, natija qanday o‘zgardi. Gaplarni to‘liq va grammatik jihatdan to‘g‘ri qiling, va keraksiz iboralardan qoching.

예시: Websites have helped me improve my listening skills by providing many practice tests and audio lessons. For instance, I practised listening exercises for several weeks and my test score improved from about 15 to around 20. These resources also taught me strategies, such as predicting answers and taking notes while listening.

× Most of the time I search I's websites because my exam year and for the reason I must prepare for my exam.

✓ Most of the time I search websites for my exam year because I must prepare for my exams.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and extra words ('I's') causing confusion. Use 'search websites for my exam' to show purpose and pluralize 'exam' to 'exams' if referring generally. Suggestion: place 'for my exam year' after 'search websites' and remove unnecessary words.

× Sometimes I just research about the reading exam and sometimes I just search about listening exam.

✓ Sometimes I just research the reading exam and sometimes I search for the listening exam.

Use 'research' with a direct object (research something) and use 'search for' when looking for information about something. Add articles if specific: 'the listening exam'. Keep present simple for habitual actions.

× My favorite website is Macarena because it's a good smell.

✓ My favorite website is Macarena because it is very helpful.

'Good smell' is an incorrect metaphor here. Use an adjective that fits websites, such as 'helpful' or 'useful'. Also use 'it is' rather than contraction for clarity.

× All of my preparation.

✓ It contains all my preparation materials.

Original is a fragment without a verb. Provide a full sentence: subject and verb. 'It contains all my preparation materials' clarifies meaning.

× If I need listening exam or reading exam I just turn out it and do my exam because it's very clean for me.

✓ If I need listening or reading practice, I just open it and do the exercises because it is very clear for me.

'Turn out it' is incorrect; use 'open it'. 'Listening exam or reading exam' is better as 'listening or reading practice'. 'Clean' is wrong adjective—use 'clear'. Place adverbs properly and keep present simple for habitual actions.

× Sometimes there are any kind of chance a lot it's improve by their goals, sometimes there are some mistakes.

✓ Sometimes there are many changes as they improve their goals; sometimes there are some mistakes.

'Any kind of chance a lot' is ungrammatical—use 'many changes'. 'Improve by their goals' should be 'as they improve their goals' or 'to meet their goals'. Use plural 'changes' and connect clauses properly.

× Most of the time I find improves because it's very useful and most of most of people use from it.

✓ Most of the time I find improvements because it is very useful and many people use it.

'Find improves' is incorrect; use the noun 'improvements'. 'Most of most of people use from it' is ungrammatical—use 'many people use it'. Remove 'from' after 'use'.

× From my perspective, history websites are very popular in my country because a lot of people would like to know about our history and first reason most of people search about our history and sometimes I search about history of Bukhara because it's very interesting and entertainment for me.

✓ From my perspective, history websites are very popular in my country because many people would like to learn about our history, and for that reason many people search for information about it. Sometimes I search for the history of Bukhara because it is very interesting and entertaining for me.

Use 'learn about' instead of 'know about', 'search for information about' rather than 'search about'. Use 'entertaining' as adjective. Improve sentence flow with conjunctions and commas.

× I work in the school and first reason I don't have enough time to reading a book.

✓ I work at a school and, for that reason, I don't have enough time to read a book.

Use 'work at a school' (preposition), and the verb form after 'to' should be base form 'read', not '-ing'. Add commas around 'for that reason'.

× After all, I prefer to reading the websites because it's very convenient for me and if I need some solution to my question, I just read from the website.

✓ After all, I prefer reading websites because it is very convenient for me, and if I need a solution to my question, I just read it on a website.

After 'prefer' use gerund 'reading' without 'to'. 'Read from the website' is unnatural; use 'read it on a website'. Use 'a solution' not 'some solution'.

× I would like to have our own website and about three or five months ago I try to learn how to make a website, but I didn't eat because I have many kind of work and I didn't find a time to learn it.

✓ I would like to have my own website and about three or five months ago I tried to learn how to make one, but I couldn't because I had many kinds of work and I didn't find time to learn it.

Use past tense 'tried' for a past action. 'Didn’t eat' is wrong; use 'couldn't' or 'wasn't able to'. Use 'had many kinds of work' and 'didn't find time' (no article). Use 'my own' instead of 'our own' if speaking about personal desire.

× From a perspective, when I use from the websites, I learn many kind of things about the listening because my listening skills have many kind of mistakes and it's to improve my skills before I use from it.

✓ From my perspective, when I use websites I learn many things about listening because my listening skills had many mistakes, and using the sites helped me improve my skills.

Remove incorrect 'use from'; say 'use websites'. 'Many kind of things' should be 'many things'. 'It's to improve my skills before I use from it' is unclear—clarify as 'using the sites helped me improve'. Use consistent tense.

× My listening test was about 15 or 16, but now I.

✓ My listening test score was about 15 or 16, but now it has improved.

Sentence is incomplete. Specify 'score' and complete clause 'but now it has improved' or give current score. Use present perfect to show change over time.