Websites— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific example and one brief reason using a linking word. Use correct subject-verb agreement and remove duplicated phrases.

예시: I often visit educational websites. For example, I use homework.com to find lecture notes and solutions because it helps me understand difficult topics quickly.

제안: Answer directly naming the favourite site, then explain briefly why. Use present tense consistently and avoid vague phrases like "give me quick decisions." Provide a clear benefit (e.g., resources, templates).

예시: My favourite website is homework.com. It gives clear study materials and templates, and EntrepreneurshipIdeas.com helps me with business plans, so I can complete assignments faster.

제안: Respond directly to whether the websites have changed. Use simple, natural phrasing and a linking word to explain how they change, giving one specific example of a change (e.g., updated layout or new courses).

예시: Yes, many educational websites update frequently. For example, they often redesign their layout and add new courses so users can find information more easily.

제안: Be direct and use simpler vocabulary. Say which types are popular and give a specific reason and example. Correct grammar ("a plethora of" not "there are plethora of") and avoid redundancy like "quick and fast."

예시: Educational and business websites are popular in my country. For example, students use online learning platforms for tutorials, while entrepreneurs use business portals for market information because they provide fast, useful answers.

제안: State your preference clearly, use correct grammar, and give one reason with a linking word. Avoid repeating the same point and keep it to two or three sentences maximum.

예시: I prefer getting information from books because they are usually more reliable. However, I sometimes check websites for recent updates or examples.

제안: Answer directly with a clear reason and one specific way you would use the website. Avoid awkward phrases and keep sentences short and natural. Mention concrete features you would include (e.g., blog posts, tutorials).

예시: Yes, I would like to create my own website to share articles and tutorials. I would post weekly blogs about new trends and include a portfolio of my projects.

제안: Start with a clear statement of one or two skills learned, then give a specific example and a result. Use concise language and correct grammar; avoid vague enthusiasm without details.

예시: Websites have taught me practical skills like painting and basic coding. For example, an online painting course helped me develop techniques I now use to sell small artworks locally.

× Candidly speaking, I often visit different kinds of websites which is related to educational purpose.

✓ Candidly speaking, I often visit different kinds of websites which are related to educational purposes.

The relative clause refers to 'websites' (plural), so the verb should be 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also use plural 'purposes' or 'for educational purposes' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: say 'websites that are related to educational purposes' or 'websites for educational purposes'.

× For example, I often visit homework.com website to complete my notes and homework.

✓ For example, I often visit the website homework.com to complete my notes and homework.

When referring to a specific website, use the definite article 'the website homework.com' or simply 'homework.com'. Word order 'homework.com website' is awkward. Also 'notes and homework' is redundant; consider 'assignments and notes'.

× Moreover, these websites helps me also helps me also in business prospects also.

✓ Moreover, these websites also help me with business prospects.

'Websites' is plural so the verb should be 'help' (not 'helps'). Remove redundant words 'also' repeated thrice and use 'help me with' for natural preposition use.

× Candidly speaking, I often visited daily a lot of websites which is related to educational purpose and business prospects.

✓ Candidly speaking, I often visit many websites daily that are related to educational purposes and business prospects.

The question is about usual habits, so use present simple 'visit' not past 'visited'. Change 'a lot of websites' to 'many websites' and correct 'which is' to 'that are' for plural agreement.

× Moreover, homework.com and Entrepreneurship ideas.com are my favorite websites because these two websites give me quick decisions to complete my business assignments and notes.

✓ Moreover, homework.com and entrepreneurshipideas.com are my favorite websites because they help me quickly complete my business assignments and notes.

Website names should be written consistently (no spaces if part of domain). 'These two websites' is redundant; 'they' suffices. 'Give me quick decisions' is incorrect collocation; use 'help me quickly complete' or 'help me make quick decisions'.

× In my bag of knowledge, the websites I often visit are related to educational purpose.

✓ In my knowledge, the websites I often visit are related to educational purposes.

'In my bag of knowledge' is an incorrect idiom. Use 'in my knowledge' or better 'as far as I know' or 'in my experience'. Also 'educational purposes' plural is more natural.

× That's why they regularly change the template and ideas according to the individual to enhance their knowledge about the ideas and prospects clearly and quickly.

✓ That's why they regularly change templates and content to suit individuals and to enhance their knowledge of ideas and prospects clearly and quickly.

Use plural 'templates' and more natural 'content' instead of 'ideas'. 'According to the individual' is awkward; use 'to suit individuals'. Also streamline repetition 'ideas and prospects'.

× According to my perspective, there are plethora of websites which is taken place on Google and used in my nation.

✓ From my perspective, there is a plethora of websites that appear on Google and are used in my country.

Use 'a plethora' (article needed) and 'there is' because 'plethora' is singular. 'Which is taken place on Google' is ungrammatical; use 'that appear on Google'. 'Nation' better as 'country'.

× For example, people may use the educational websites and business websites more than the other websites because they give a quick and fast reply to their question.

✓ For example, people may use educational and business websites more than other types because they give quick replies to their questions.

Remove definite article 'the' before categories, and 'a quick and fast reply' is redundant—use 'quick replies'. 'Question' should be plural 'questions' to match 'their'.

× Well, I am quite fond of reading books that's why I mostly like to getting information from the books because sometimes websites information may be fake or faulty.

✓ Well, I am quite fond of reading books, so I mostly like to get information from books because sometimes information on websites may be fake or faulty.

Use 'to get' not 'to getting'. Add comma before 'so'. 'Websites information' should be 'information on websites'. Avoid 'the books' unless specific.

× That's why I prefer books to gain knowledge and books lending a helping hand to me to make decisions wisely.

✓ That's why I prefer books to gain knowledge; books lend me a helping hand in making wise decisions.

Use simple present 'lend' instead of 'lending' and revise structure: 'lend me a helping hand in making wise decisions' is natural. Avoid repeating 'books'.

× Yes, of course I would never miss the chance in future to have my own website because it helps me to enhance my knowledge about Internet and I also give appreciation from others about making new website and I posted daily new trends and ideas to enhance the knowledge of an individual of other.

✓ Yes, of course I would not miss the chance in the future to have my own website because it helps me enhance my knowledge about the internet, others appreciate my work, and I can post new trends and ideas daily to help others expand their knowledge.

Use 'would not miss' instead of 'would never miss' for clarity; add 'the' before 'future'. 'Internet' not capitalized. 'I also give appreciation from others' is incorrect—use 'others appreciate my work'. Verb forms: 'I can post' or 'I would post' instead of 'I posted'. Simplify 'the knowledge of an individual of other' to 'help others expand their knowledge'.

× Well, I am absolutely passionate about gaining new skills from websites that helps me a lot in my real life and also in my studies.

✓ Well, I am absolutely passionate about gaining new skills from websites that help me a lot in my real life and in my studies.

'Websites' is plural so relative clause verb should be 'help' not 'helps'. Remove redundant 'also'.

× For example, I learn some paintings from online websites and it helps me in my life to create my passion as a painter.

✓ For example, I learned some painting techniques from online websites and they helped me develop my passion for painting.

If referring to past learning, use past tense 'learned' and 'helped'. 'Some paintings' is awkward; use 'painting techniques' or 'how to paint'. 'Create my passion as a painter' should be 'develop my passion for painting' for natural phrasing.