Cars— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more coherent. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid awkward phrases and grammatical errors (e.g., use past tense consistently). Use linking words like "because" or "and" correctly.

예시: Yes, I enjoyed travelling by car when I was a child because my mother always played my favourite music and made the journey fun. Also, we often drove around my hometown, which is famous for its vintage cars, so I liked looking at them along the streets.

제안: Give a clear opinion and support it with a reason. Use complete sentences and avoid repetition. If you are unsure, say so and explain why. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

예시: I prefer simple, reliable cars rather than sports cars because I am not confident driving fast and I value comfort and good fuel economy. So, practical models appeal to me more.

제안: Answer directly and give a concise reason. Fix grammar (e.g., "I prefer to be a passenger because I don't enjoy driving myself"). Add one specific detail about what you do as a passenger to enrich the answer.

예시: I prefer to be a passenger because I find driving stressful and like to relax instead. For example, I usually read or listen to podcasts while someone else drives.

제안: Clarify your actions with simple, logical sentences. Describe one or two realistic things you do in a traffic jam (e.g., listen to music, check messages, plan another route). Use linking words like "so" or "then" to show sequence.

예시: When there is a traffic jam, I usually listen to music or podcasts to stay calm. If it seems very slow, I check my map app to find an alternative route.

제안: State your opinion clearly and give one specific reason with an example. Avoid vague phrases. Use correct grammar and connect your ideas with "because" or "for example."

예시: Yes, I think car colours matter because they reflect personal style and can affect visibility. For example, bright colours like red are easier to spot in poor light and can make a car safer.

제안: Give a clear, grammatically correct response and a specific reason. If you plan to buy an expensive car for practical reasons (travel, safety), state that. Keep it to 1-3 sentences and avoid repetition.

예시: I might buy an expensive car in the future because I admire larger, more comfortable models and plan to travel abroad with my husband. I would choose a reliable, spacious car for long trips.

× Yes I did because I preferred the inviting car during my mother driving.

✓ Yes, I did because I enjoyed the comfortable car when my mother drove.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect noun forms. 'Preferred' is past tense but 'during my mother driving' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'enjoyed' to match simple past and use 'when my mother drove' to show time. Use 'comfortable car' instead of 'inviting car' for natural English.

× And my hometown, it's famous car.

✓ And my hometown is famous for its cars.

The sentence misuses articles and word order. Use 'is famous for' plus the plural 'cars' or 'its car' if singular. 'It's' should be 'is' as part of the clause; use 'its' as the possessive determiner.

× I don't know because especially I. Don't prefer cards because I am not good at driving myself and I don't.

✓ I don't know; in general I don't prefer cars because I'm not good at driving and I don't enjoy it.

Original has sentence fragments and punctuation errors. 'Especially I.' is a fragment. 'cards' is likely 'cars'. Complete the idea by linking clauses: 'in general' or 'especially' used correctly, and finish the second clause with 'enjoy it' to state what 'I don't' refers to.

× I prefer to be a passenger because I want to go door driving and also I have driving license but I still don't to stop my car myself.

✓ I prefer to be a passenger because I don't like driving, and although I have a driving license, I still don't want to drive my car myself.

Original contains wrong phrase 'go door driving', incorrect verb forms 'don't to stop', and missing articles. Replace with clear expressions: 'don't like driving' and 'I still don't want to drive my car myself'. Include 'a' before 'driving license' or use 'a driving licence' depending on variety.

× As far as I remember, I. Pray calculated. Using car numbers and with my product.

✓ As far as I remember, I pray or calculate using car numbers and my product.

The original has fragmented and unclear sentences. It's unclear what 'pray calculated' means; likely intended 'I pray' or 'I calculate'. Recast into a single coherent sentence. If meaning differs, revise further for clarity.

× Yes, I think our colors are important because most people drive car every day so they are they can. Improved their motivation and.

✓ Yes, I think car colors are important because most people drive every day, and colors can improve their motivation.

'Our colors' is incorrect; use 'car colors' or 'the colors of cars'. 'Drive car every day' needs 'drive a car' or 'drive every day'. Remove duplicated words and finish the clause: 'can improve their motivation.'

× Yes, I will drive to buy a car in the future because it's I admire big cars like high high. Hot Heist because I want to drive abroad with my husband and I want to.

✓ Yes, I will buy a car in the future because I admire big cars; I want to drive abroad with my husband.

Original contains word fragments and redundant words ('will drive to buy', 'it's I admire', 'high high. Hot Heist'). Use 'will buy a car' for future intention. Remove unclear fragments and finish the sentence coherently: state the reason and purpose concisely.