Cars— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two clear supporting details with correct tense and numbers. Avoid repetition.

예시: Yes, I enjoyed traveling by car as a child. My parents often drove us to the beach, and we usually spent about four hours in the car on those trips.

제안: Clarify your opinion and use clear vocabulary. Begin with a topic sentence stating the type of car you prefer, then give specific reasons (space, comfort, fuel efficiency) using linking words.

예시: I prefer spacious family cars such as SUVs because they have plenty of room for five people and luggage. Also, they are comfortable for long journeys and often have useful safety features.

제안: Give a direct answer then support it with two clear reasons using linking words. Improve grammar (use gerunds and correct verb forms) and avoid short, disjointed phrases.

예시: I prefer to be a passenger because I cannot drive yet. Additionally, I enjoy sitting in the back and singing songs with my sister, which makes the journey more fun.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and list activities with correct verb forms. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'sometimes' and avoid unfinished sentences.

예시: When there is a traffic jam, I usually listen to music and sing along. Sometimes I also talk with my sister or play games on my phone to pass the time.

제안: Answer directly and explain your personal view with a reason. Use linking words ('however', 'because') correctly and finish your thought clearly.

예시: I don't think car colours are very important personally because the car's performance and reliability matter more to me. However, I understand others choose colours for style or resale value.

제안: State your plan clearly and give specific reasons with correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repetition.

예시: No, I would not buy an expensive car. In the future I plan to buy an electric car because it saves energy and reduces running costs, which I think will be very helpful.

× Yes I did, when I watch a child my parents take me go to the beach by car.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child my parents would take me to the beach by car.

The sentence refers to past habitual actions, so past tense and correct past expressions are needed. 'watch a child' is incorrect; use 'was a child'. 'take me go' is ungrammatical; use 'would take me' or 'took me' and include the preposition 'to' before 'the beach'. Suggestion: use 'When I was a child, my parents would take me to the beach by car.'

× We spend time to spend time on car for about 4.

✓ We spent about four hours in the car.

The sentence describes a past event, so past tense 'spent' is required rather than present 'spend'. Also the phrase 'to spend time on car' is incorrect: use 'in the car' and specify duration as 'about four hours'. Suggestion: 'We spent about four hours in the car.'

× I like meaning when because it's last spread and it can uh my family have 5 member is T sued to my family.

✓ I like them because it is spacious and my family has five members; I am used to my family.

The original sentence is very unclear with multiple errors. 'Meaning when' and 'last spread' are incorrect word choices. Likely intended 'I like them because they are spacious.' Use correct adjective 'spacious'. 'My family have 5 member' needs subject-verb agreement and plural noun: 'my family has five members.' 'T sued to my family' should be 'I am used to my family.' Break into clearer clauses. Suggestion: 'I like them because they are spacious. My family has five members, and I am used to my family.'

× I prefer passenger because I can't driving, I like sit behind driver and I like to sing a song with my sister on the way.

✓ I prefer to be a passenger because I can't drive; I like to sit behind the driver and sing songs with my sister on the way.

Several issues: need infinitive 'to be a passenger' (verb missing), modal with base verb 'can't drive' not 'can't driving', use 'to sit' and include article 'the driver' for specificity. 'Sing a song' can be plural 'sing songs' for naturalness. Suggestion: 'I prefer to be a passenger because I can't drive. I like to sit behind the driver and sing songs with my sister on the way.'

× MMM when a child victim I usually listening to music and singing along the song and I talk with my sister.

✓ When I was a child I usually listened to music, sang along with the songs, and talked with my sister.

This is about past habitual actions, so use past simple 'listened', 'sang', 'talked' rather than present participle forms. 'When a child victim' is incorrect — use 'When I was a child'. 'Singing along the song' should be 'sang along with the songs'. Suggestion: 'When I was a child I usually listened to music, sang along with the songs, and talked with my sister.'

× Sometime I play game or.

✓ Sometimes I played games or played alone.

Context indicates past habits, so past tense 'played' is appropriate. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' and 'play game' needs plural 'games' or 'play a game'. The fragment 'or.' is incomplete; complete the thought. Suggestion: 'Sometimes I played games or played alone.'

× Well, I think it depends on the person. Some people believe that color are important. Uh, however, some people don't believe that. Personally, I don't think.

✓ Well, I think it depends on the person. Some people believe that colors are important; however, some people don't. Personally, I don't think they are.

'Color are' has number disagreement: use plural 'colors are'. The sentence 'some people don't believe that' is fine but follow with clear reference 'they are' for 'Personally, I don't think'. Also connect ideas clearly. Suggestion: 'Some people believe that colors are important; however, some people don't. Personally, I don't think they are.'

× No, I don't. In the future I plan to buy electronic car because it save energy and money.

✓ No, I don't. In the future I plan to buy an electric car because it saves energy and money.

Use the noun 'electric car' rather than 'electronic car'. Include the article 'an' before a singular noun starting with a vowel sound. Use present simple 'saves' for general truth about the car saving energy and money. Suggestion: 'I plan to buy an electric car because it saves energy and money.'

× It's very I think it's very helpful in the future.

✓ I think it will be very helpful in the future.

The sentence mixes forms. To talk about future usefulness, use 'will be' rather than present 'is'. Also remove redundancy 'It's very I think it's very'. Suggestion: 'I think it will be very helpful in the future.'