Art— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: まず、質問への直接的な答え（肯定／否定）を明確に述べ、その後で理由を簡潔に続けてください。現在の回答は文法ミス、冗長さ、意味の曖昧さ（例："I really draw" は矛盾）があります。改善点：1) 文法を正す（例：過去時制と現在時制の混同を避ける）2) 不要な繰り返しを削る 3) 具体的な理由を1〜2文でまとめる（最大5文に収める）。例文構成の手順：主文（I don't like drawing.）、理由（I never had art classes at school.）、補足（So I never learned how to draw.）

예시: No, I don't like drawing. I never had art classes at school, so I never learned the techniques. For that reason, I don't feel confident trying to draw now.

제안: まず短く直接に答え、その後に場所や感情の理由を明確に述べてください。現在の回答は繰り返し、語順や語法の誤り（"there are few gallery" → "there are few galleries" または "there aren't many galleries"）、時制混乱（現在と過去が混在）、感情の説明が不十分です。改善点：1) 文法を直す（複数形や時制）2) 感情の理由を具体化する（なぜ depressed なのか）3) 文章をつなぐ接続詞を使う（however, because, so）。

예시: Not really. There aren't many galleries near my house, so I rarely visit them. However, when I lived in the UK I visited galleries often because I enjoyed the exhibitions, although sometimes I felt overwhelmed by the crowds.

제안: 回答は明確ですが文法と語順、語彙の使い方を改善してください（"instead of instead" は冗長、"To get a new skills" は誤り）。改善点：1) 直接的なトピック文を保ち、理由を一つか二つで支持する 2) 単数・複数や不定詞の使い方を正す 3) より自然な語彙を使う（practical → useful, gain → acquire）。例としてキャリア志向を示しつつ具体的な学習分野を挙げると良いです。

예시: Not really. I don't plan to study art because it's not useful for my planned career. Instead, I prefer to focus on subjects like maths, science or economics to acquire skills that will help me find a job.

제안: 回答はほぼ適切ですが、表現を自然にし、語順と冠詞・前置詞を正してください（"I didn't have any at class" → "I didn't have any art classes"）。改善点：1) 主文で過去の事実を簡潔に述べる 2) 補足でどの科目を学んだか明確に列挙する 3) 可能なら一つ具体例を加える（例えば家庭での経験や特別授業の有無）。

예시: No, I didn't learn drawing as a child because my school did not offer art classes. Instead, I focused on academic subjects such as maths, science, Japanese and English.

× No, I don't because I really draw.

✓ No, I don't because I can't really draw.

The student likely intended to say they are unable to draw. The original sentence lacks the modal 'can' to express ability, causing an incomplete meaning and incorrect sentence structure. Use 'can't/cannot' to express lack of ability: 'I can't really draw.' Also include the contraction or full form consistently.

× Also I don't, I didn't have art class.

✓ Also, I didn't have art classes.

The speaker mixes present and past expressions and omits plural for a countable noun. 'Art class' in the context of schooling usually appears as 'art classes' when talking about multiple lessons or the subject in general. Use past tense 'didn't have' with plural 'classes' for clarity: 'I didn't have art classes.'

× So to be honest I don't know about.

✓ So to be honest, I don't know about it.

The verb phrase 'know about' requires an object. The sentence is incomplete without 'it' (or another object). Add the pronoun 'it' to complete the thought: 'I don't know about it.'

× I don't know how to draw in the campus.

✓ I don't know how to draw on campus.

Use the correct preposition 'on campus' rather than 'in the campus'. Also remove the unnecessary article 'the' when speaking generally about campus. 'On campus' is the idiomatic expression.

× No not not really because there are few gallery near my house,

✓ No, not really, because there are few galleries near my house,

'Gallery' is a countable noun and should be plural as 'galleries' when referring to more than one. Also 'there are few' is grammatical but often implies almost none; if the student means 'not many' this is fine. Add commas for natural speech pauses.

× but when I go to the UK I went a lot of gallery.

✓ but when I went to the UK I visited a lot of galleries.

Tense inconsistency: 'go to the UK' (present) vs 'I went' (past). Match past tense 'when I went to the UK' and use the correct verb 'visited' for going to places. Make 'gallery' plural as 'galleries'.

× And I feel depressed.

✓ And I felt depressed.

Maintain past tense to match the context of visiting galleries in the past: use 'felt' instead of 'feel'. This keeps tense consistent.

× No, I don't think so because art is not practical for my career.

✓ No, I don't think so because art is not practical for my career.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses present tense and modal-like negation 'don't think so' to express the student's opinion. No change needed.

× So instead of instead I prefer to study maths or science or economics.

✓ So instead, I prefer to study maths, science or economics.

Remove the repeated 'instead of instead' redundancy and use commas to separate items in a list. 'Prefer to study' is correct present preference.

× To get a new skills.

✓ To gain new skills.

'Skills' is plural, so 'a new skills' is incorrect. Use 'new skills' without the article or 'a new skill' for singular. Also 'gain' fits better than 'get' in this context.

× No, I didn't because I didn't have any at class.

✓ No, I didn't because I didn't have any art classes.

The original omits the noun 'art' and uses 'at class' incorrectly. Use 'art classes' as the object and keep past tense 'didn't have'. 'Any' should modify a plural countable noun here.

× Instead I studied academic subjects like math, science and Japanese and English.

✓ Instead, I studied academic subjects like math, science, Japanese and English.

Add commas to list items and remove the redundant 'and'. The sentence is otherwise correct; commas improve clarity when listing multiple subjects.