Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and grammatical: give a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and avoid fillers (uh, umm, repetition). Use correct verb forms and pluralization. Link the example to the topic with a connector (for example, or such as).

예시: Yes, I can remember some of my dreams. For example, I dreamed about my mother and sister yesterday, and we were having dinner together in my childhood home.

제안: Answer directly then give a specific reason or brief example. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (use past/present tense properly). Use linking words like because or so to explain why you share dreams.

예시: Yes, I often tell people about my dreams, especially if they appear in them, because it feels funny and sparks a conversation the next day.

제안: Make your opinion clear and support it with a specific reason. Avoid word-for-word thinking and filler sounds. Use correct sentence structure and link reason to opinion with because or for example.

예시: Yes, I think some dreams can have meanings because they may reflect our physical condition or worries; for example, dreaming of being tired could mean you need more rest.

제안: Begin with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No/It depends), then explain with specific examples. Use correct vocabulary (dream types) and avoid mispronunciations; link contrasting ideas with however or but.

예시: It depends on the dream. If it is a pleasant daydream about achieving a goal, I would like it to come true; however, if it is a nightmare, I certainly would not want it to happen.

× Sometimes I can remember the dreams I had uh, not every dreams, every dream I had umm, for example, I can remember, remember yesterday I dreamed about my mom and my sister. We.

✓ Sometimes I can remember the dreams I had, but not every dream. For example, I remember that yesterday I dreamed about my mom and my sister.

The student used 'every dreams' which mixes plural noun with 'every' that requires a singular noun (Grammar problem type 1). Also there were redundant words and sentence fragments. Use 'every dream' for correctness and simplify the sentence by removing repeated words and completing the clause about who was in the dream. Suggestion: replace plural noun with singular after 'every', remove repeated words, and connect clauses into a complete sentence.

× Yes, I do. Uh, especially if I dream dreamed, uh, somebody, uh, next day I would to told him or her, umm, I just uh, uh, dreamed about him or her. But it's happy time.

✓ Yes, I do. Especially if I dreamed about somebody, the next day I would tell him or her, 'I dreamed about you.' It makes me happy.

The student used incorrect verb forms: 'dream dreamed' is redundant and 'would to told' is incorrect because 'tell' is the base form needed after 'would' (Grammar problem type 9). Use simple past 'dreamed' for the completed action, and 'would tell' or 'I told' for reporting next-day action. Also rephrase the emotional comment into a complete sentence. Suggestion: Use single past tense 'dreamed', and after modal 'would' use the base verb 'tell' or use past 'told' without 'would'.

× Yes I do. I think uh, some dreams, uh, are, umm, is uh, want to tell me uh, the body uh, is not good and uh, I need to pay attention about the health I guess.

✓ Yes, I do. I think some dreams want to tell me that my body is not well and I need to pay attention to my health, I guess.

Problems include mismatched verbs and unclear pronoun references: 'are, is, want' mix plural and singular forms; 'the body is not good' is awkward and 'pay attention about the health' uses wrong preposition (Grammar problem types 6 and 11 and 12). Use 'dreams' as plural with 'want' and add 'that' to introduce the content. Use 'my body' for clear possession and 'pay attention to' is the correct preposition. Suggestion: Ensure subject and verb agree (plural dreamS with want), use 'that' clauses for reported content, and use 'pay attention to' + noun.

× It's depends on what kinds of drink. Uh, if I, if it's Daydream, daydreams, I want to make it come true, but it's better dreams, uh, horrible dreams. I don't want to come true.

✓ It depends on what kind of dream it is. If it's a daydream, I want to make it come true, but if it's a bad or horrible dream, I don't want it to come true.

Errors: 'It's depends' incorrectly uses 'it is' with a verb that should be simple present 'depends' (Grammar problem type 6 and 27 subject-verb agreement). 'kinds of drink' is wrong word choice; should be 'kind of dream'. Mixed singular/plural and pronoun references 'it' vs 'they' caused confusion (Grammar problem types 1 and 12). Also 'I don't want to come true' incorrectly makes the speaker the subject; the dream should be the subject. Suggestion: Use 'It depends' (no contraction before verb), use 'kind of dream' or 'type of dream', keep subjects consistent, and ensure 'dream' is the subject of 'come true'.