Dreams— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'forgot' -> 'forget'). Trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó bổ sung một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng một hoặc hai liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn (ví dụ: 'because', 'so'). Giữ tổng số câu không quá 5.

예시: I usually don't remember my dreams because I forget them shortly after waking up. For example, even when I wake up briefly at night, the details disappear within minutes, so I rarely recall vivid dreams.

제안: Câu trả lời tốt nhưng cần mạch lạc hơn và dùng từ chính xác (ví dụ: 'online books' có thể là 'short stories' hoặc 'blog posts'). Tránh bắt đầu câu bằng 'Like' nói chuyện thân mật; nên dùng liên từ phù hợp. Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về tần suất hoặc phản hồi từ độc giả để tăng tính thuyết phục.

예시: Yes, I often write short stories based on my dreams and post them on my Facebook page. For instance, I publish a new story every two weeks and many readers leave comments saying they find the ideas intriguing.

제안: Ý tưởng rõ ràng và phù hợp; tuy nhiên tránh lặp 'I think' nhiều lần. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề mạnh, sau đó giải thích cụ thể với ví dụ văn hóa. Có thể thêm liên từ để nối ý (ví dụ: 'For example', 'according to').

예시: Yes, I believe dreams can have special meanings. For example, in Vietnamese culture people often interpret certain dreams as messages from ancestors, so many families pay attention to dream signs and take them seriously.

제안: Cần chính xác ngữ pháp và bớt nói lan man (ví dụ: 'who don't' -> 'who wouldn't'). Trả lời trực tiếp rồi nêu lý do và kế hoạch cụ thể để hiện thực hóa ước mơ. Hạn chế sử dụng các cụm từ đệm như 'I mean' quá nhiều.

예시: Yes, I want to make my dreams come true; for example, I aim to buy a luxury car within five years by saving a fixed amount each month and taking on freelance work to increase my income.

× No, actually, umm, when I enter a deep sleep, I usually forgot my dreams really quickly after I wake up.

✓ No, actually, umm, when I enter a deep sleep, I usually forget my dreams really quickly after I wake up.

The verb tense is inconsistent: 'enter' and 'wake up' are present, so the habitual action should use present simple 'forget' not past 'forgot'. Use present simple for regular habits. Suggestion: use 'usually forget' for recurring actions.

× So yeah, I yeah, I don't usually remember my dreams.

✓ So yeah, I don't usually remember my dreams.

This sentence has repetition and should use present simple for habitual action. Remove the repeated 'I yeah' which is filler; keep 'I don't usually remember' as the correct present simple form.

× Yes, I really love to turn my dreams into words.

✓ Yes, I really love turning my dreams into words.

After 'love' both the infinitive and -ing are possible, but when describing a regular habit or preference, the -ing form sounds more natural: 'love turning'. This is a style/usage preference, not a strict grammar error.

× Like I write some online books related to my dreams and share them on my Facebook page so everyone can access and read them.

✓ I write some online books about my dreams and share them on my Facebook page so everyone can access and read them.

Use present simple 'write' and 'share' for habitual actions. 'Related to' is acceptable but 'about' is more natural here. No tense error, but improve preposition choice for naturalness.

× In Vietnamese culture, dreams are usually considered as messages from our ancestors, so I think dreams have some particular meaning.

✓ In Vietnamese culture, dreams are usually considered messages from our ancestors, so I think dreams have a particular meaning.

Do not use 'considered as'—use 'considered' + noun. Also use singular 'a particular meaning' to refer to the general idea. Suggestion: 'considered messages' and 'a particular meaning'.

× Yes, I mean I always dream for owning a luxury car and I try to get it as soon as I can.

✓ Yes, I mean I always dream of owning a luxury car and I try to get one as soon as I can.

Correct preposition after 'dream' is 'dream of' (not 'dream for'), and 'owning' is correct as the -ing form after 'dream of'. Also use 'one' to refer back to 'a luxury car' (pronoun) and keep present simple for habitual action 'try'.

× So yes, I mean who don't want to make their dreams come true?

✓ So yes, I mean who doesn't want to make their dreams come true?

Subject-verb agreement with 'who' requires 'doesn't' (third person singular). Use 'doesn't' rather than 'don't'. 'Their' is acceptable as singular generic gender-neutral pronoun.